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Apogee 8
“I don’t know Dana, there are still some large blocks of time missing, like right here after she disappeared from the orphanage. Where are the interviews from the employees? There should be documents, health records…something.” Dana only shrugged sitting next to Alice on the couch moving the papers from between them.
“The orphanage burned to the ground years ago, it was Agent Shecter’s job to compile the information from the orphanage…I can only bring you what she had as of last week.” Dana scooted closer to the writer, pulling the papers from her hands and placing the files on the table.
“Alice, we’ve been going over this for hours since we’ve been back from the club. I only get one night a week when I’m not on call, and I really…really don’t want to spend it working.” Alice pulled her glasses off and smiled,
“Well, what do you want to do then?” The agent smirked, Alice’s mouth turning into a smile along with her.
“Do you really think that’s a good idea Dana, I mean…” The agent reached for Alice’s hand lightly running her fingers along the soft skin and slowly moving higher as the writer spoke.
“I—I mean…we should, probably hold off on the sex thing and get to um…know each other or something.” Dana’s blunt fingernails wreaking havoc on Alice’s thoughts, the idea to slow things down slowly draining from Alice’s mind. Dana didn’t push the writer, she only absentmindedly traced patterns on the writer’s milky skin.
“We should get to know each other Alice,” The writer shivered at the sound of her name off Dana’s lips. Her name took on a sensual quality when Dana said it, the likes of which Alice never heard. The way the agent moved her tongue, all Alice could think of were the many uses for that tongue. The writer stared at Dana’s mouth, biting her lip.
“I’m glad you agree… so, no sex…no matter how bad we want it…because…we need to get to know each other and how can we do that if I’m running my tongue down down your entire body?” Dana’s body froze her eyes opening widely,
“What?” Alice looked away, trying to find a suitable topic…away from sex. The writer searched her brain, her eyes shifting looking for that piece of useless information she always had available.
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(47 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
read it loved it rated it and commented tht was sum hot stuff
I read it
Read it! Loved it! Well, except for the Yankees part! Look forward to the next chapter.
read it and please post again…soon!
read it
After wrestling my cat off of my computer, I READ THE STORY. So much for getting to know someone before sex. How about getting to know someone during sex. I guess Tina got a little scared. Now, how long before Tina returns to Bette? When will Tina find out that it was Bette who ordered her husbands death? Great post.
read it
read it
Not only read it, but first went back and read all the other installments, sucked into following yet another story!
read and enjoyed
read it, post soon pls
I think I went crazy in my comments about Tino Martinez, who I adore – even more than Danish! (Don’t kill me.) I’m positive I commented, but they seem to be gone.
*raises hand* I read every single chapter of this fic that you toss our way!
Read it loved it, really want more shane and carmen
psh, as if Dana and Alice could NOT have sex! Love the story so far!
This is great!
read it
Not only read it, but loved it! :)
I loved this chapter, Damn where is The Kitty Klub? F*ck I want to go to place. =)Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Aquaman! I love Aquaman… muahaha… I love Hawkgirl more, but that is besides the point. the point is, I love your story. And am checking in here religiously to see if you have updated. You please give us a longer chapter next time, yes? Please!!!
read it, loved it
read it dude…and it wa awesome!!! ;)
Love Love Loved it!
read it, loved it. i think ive been to that club, its in amsterdam isnt it lol
Read it. and I really liked it x
Great update. Post soon. Alice & Dana, very HOT!
Read it and as usual, loved it. Please post soon. I hope Tina isn’t freaked out for too long….
I read it and love it please post soon
Read and enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!
Skimmed over it. ;) I saw the NC-17 rating and had to see what was going on. Methinks I’ll have to start reading this one for real.
Nice work closetdana, very, very nice.
Very nice. I love it. Keep it up. Danish is my favorite!
I read this story. I really enjoy it.
I read it, I loved it, I want some more of it . . . please, oh and more Sharmen . . . gotta love thos two LYLAS
Read it, like it more
Great chapter. The whole resistance thing is pretty hot…it makes build up and tension that much better. Can’t wait till the next chapter!
Read it, loved and will be back. Sorry for not being constant in the feedback comments. You’re probably wondering if you’re getting to me!! Well you are so keep up the very good work with all your stories. I’ll try to be more constant in ginving comments after I read them! PS I like that you post often with smaller chapters than one larger post every two weeks! (of course no one can compete with brteyes on that level)
simply great! post soon
Read it, really liked it.
Still loving this story, the interaction between my 2 fav danish girls is brilliant, please post again soon -x-
not only read all, but luved all….would luv more of b&t though…..great job!!!!!!!!!
Oi mate, read it last night, didn’t get a chance to comment (would’ve been first) he, heh,heh…love it. Dane is dark with ‘er dannies, eh? Luv it when they shag, it’s rare (excellent). Aye, get paid to stop dancing to Country, but otherwise I’m magic! Loving it…gotta do a bunk. Ta mate!
Read it and completely loved it!!!! Ciao
I always seem to keep on rambling when it comes to commenting on your stories (or brteyes’ story for that matter…good to see you two are helping each other out!). :D Who’s seducing who, either way Bette and Tina are both falling hard. :) Mark and Gomey will be back. Taking a shower is not a good idea…but I have a feelingyou are gonna us the fact that one of them will be naked wisely. :P Alice forgave Dana in a sec, didn’t she?. :) They are really bad in following their on rules…no sex indeed! ;) They were freaking hot!!! :D Watch your PM.
i stumbled upon this by accident as i am not a Dana/Alice fan, but I have read all the chapters and I love it. Totally new approach..I so can see Shane as a hitwoman and Bette as an brilliant, beautiful, powerful criminal type! I am in for every chapter! I know you don’t like skimmers too much but the separate segments for the characters is okay!!! Write more more more soon!!!
I love Alice and Dana, and now I can go to bed content. So thank you!
Read it. Great story.
Read it loved it more. thanks