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    Apogee 8

    Story written on May 30, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61107
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    Tina and and Miss Porter get closer. The Kitty Klub a hickey and the banging behind the door. (I know, wtf kind of summary was that?)

        “Are you giving me a hickey Fairbanks?” Dana moved her tongue up Alice’s neck, stopping at the writer’s lips that she nipped at with her teeth.

        “Yeah I’ll remember…Sarah right?” The music picked up and they began dancing faster, the agent becoming more uncomfortable with the tempo change. Alice swung her shoulders noticing that Dana was moving less and preparing to walk off of the dance floor. Alice grabbed her hand as the agent began to back away,

            “Where do you think you’re going?” Dana motion over to the bar,  

         “I was going to get another drink.” Alice pulled her back pressing the agent’s hips as close as possible.

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        The knock grew louder and Shane aimed the shotgun with her right holding Carmen’s wrist with the other, shaking her head no. The bartender locked eyes with her turning the knob with the opposite hand, Gomey stood in front of her, mouth gaped open.

            “Wow you’re hot…um can I use your bathroom I really have to go and there are things biting me in the woods.” Gomey began to dance from foot to foot to emphasize his need to go, Carmen only shrugged pointing out to the woods.

            “Sorry there’s only an outhouse, round’ back…” Carmen lied,

        “Hope they bite you where it counts.” The bartender sang, waggling her eyebrows and leaning on the doorframe as Gomey danced in the direction she’d pointed, tripping down the stairs in the process.  Carmen closed the door slowly, Mark eyeing her as the lock clicked in place.

        Shane watched through the peephole until Mark and Gomey walked out of sight, turning to Carmen who lay across the couch, reading a magazine.

        “That was really careless, they could’ve shot you,” Carmen rested the magazine across her chest, studying Shane.

        “I’m fine, I’m just going to take a shower, if they come back, you come get me first…don’t be a dumbass” Carmen smirked as Shane walked away, the bartender studying the faint blood stains that appeared through the black shirt in the sunlight, Carmen quickly looking at her hands.                              

     

     

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        “So what do you think? This is basically all the information I have on McCoutchen, add what you have to it and we almost have a decent timeline.” Alice scratched her head with a pen, pushing the bridge of her glasses up with her finger, in a cute yet nerdy way.

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    6. After wrestling my cat off of my computer, I READ THE STORY. So much for getting to know someone before sex. How about getting to know someone during sex. I guess Tina got a little scared. Now, how long before Tina returns to Bette? When will Tina find out that it was Bette who ordered her husbands death? Great post.

    12. I think I went crazy in my comments about Tino Martinez, who I adore – even more than Danish! (Don’t kill me.) I’m positive I commented, but they seem to be gone.

    20. Aquaman! I love Aquaman… muahaha… I love Hawkgirl more, but that is besides the point. the point is, I love your story. And am checking in here religiously to see if you have updated. You please give us a longer chapter next time, yes? Please!!!

    30. Skimmed over it. ;) I saw the NC-17 rating and had to see what was going on. Methinks I’ll have to start reading this one for real.

    36. Great chapter. The whole resistance thing is pretty hot…it makes build up and tension that much better. Can’t wait till the next chapter!

    37. Read it, loved and will be back. Sorry for not being constant in the feedback comments. You’re probably wondering if you’re getting to me!! Well you are so keep up the very good work with all your stories. I’ll try to be more constant in ginving comments after I read them! PS I like that you post often with smaller chapters than one larger post every two weeks! (of course no one can compete with brteyes on that level)

    42. Oi mate, read it last night, didn’t get a chance to comment (would’ve been first) he, heh,heh…love it. Dane is dark with ‘er dannies, eh? Luv it when they shag, it’s rare (excellent). Aye, get paid to stop dancing to Country, but otherwise I’m magic! Loving it…gotta do a bunk. Ta mate!

    44. I always seem to keep on rambling when it comes to commenting on your stories (or brteyes’ story for that matter…good to see you two are helping each other out!). :D Who’s seducing who, either way Bette and Tina are both falling hard. :) Mark and Gomey will be back. Taking a shower is not a good idea…but I have a feelingyou are gonna us the fact that one of them will be naked wisely. :P Alice forgave Dana in a sec, didn’t she?. :) They are really bad in following their on rules…no sex indeed! ;) They were freaking hot!!! :D Watch your PM.

    45. i stumbled upon this by accident as i am not a Dana/Alice fan, but I have read all the chapters and I love it. Totally new approach..I so can see Shane as a hitwoman and Bette as an brilliant, beautiful, powerful criminal type! I am in for every chapter! I know you don’t like skimmers too much but the separate segments for the characters is okay!!! Write more more more soon!!!

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