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Apogee 8
“Do you like baseball?” The agent shook her head no, looking at Alice very strangely. The writer had pulled her hands into her lap and sat Indian style across from her, bobbing her head enthusiastically.
“…ok well not many people know this about me, but I love baseball…I can’t get enough of it, and you want to know why?” Dana smirked,
“Because it reminds you of how many girls you got to third base with in college?” Alice lunged at Dana in attempt to tickle the agent, but found herself pinned against Dana’s back.
“Did you think you could take advantage of me?” The agent chuckled, holding Alice’s hands across her chest and tickling the writer mercilessly. Alice flailed wildly, and giggling shrieks echoed through the house as the two tussled. In the tangle of limbs and laughter Dana ended up on the floor, staring at the ceiling. Alice pounced on the agent, giving her a taste of her own medicine and causing Dana to laugh harder than she had in her whole life. They ended up on the floor, Alice laying between Dana’s legs. The agent stared at the writer, as Alice lay on top of her,
“Um…Alice?” The writer braced herself placing both arms on either side of Dana, her breathing slowly increasing.
“Yeah Dana,” The agent sat up so they were almost lip to lip, Alice close enough to feel Dana’s breath on her skin. The writer’s eyes traveled to Dana’s full lips, praying to whomever, that the next words out of the agent’s mouth would involve tasting every bit of skin she could find on that beautiful body. Green eyes looked deeply into Alice’s, passion making the pupil dilate, only a thin ring of color remained. The writer’s senses were on overload, her heart beat painfully fast and the contact with Dana caused her skin to burn with lust.
“Who’s your favorite team?” Alice let go of the breath she held, closing her eyes tightly. Dana hadn’t touched her but she trembled in anticipation of the next graze of skin, Alice took another deep breath,
“The…The Yankees,” Alice sat back to move off of Dana but the agent grabbed her by the waist pulling her close.
“And why are they your favorite?” The writer leaned into Dana, her hips straddling the agent’s thigh.
“ I really don’t know why…I guess my last happy memory with my father was watching the games when I was seven, they didn’t broadcast them here. He had a friend from New York tape and send them. We’d put on our jerseys and sit in the living room yelling and laughing at the T.V. It’s just been in my blood since.” Dana looked at Alice, touched that the writer had shared the seemingly inessential memory. The agent looked deeply into Alice’s eyes, dying to know everything she could about the writer.
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(47 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
read it loved it rated it and commented tht was sum hot stuff
I read it
Read it! Loved it! Well, except for the Yankees part! Look forward to the next chapter.
read it and please post again…soon!
read it
After wrestling my cat off of my computer, I READ THE STORY. So much for getting to know someone before sex. How about getting to know someone during sex. I guess Tina got a little scared. Now, how long before Tina returns to Bette? When will Tina find out that it was Bette who ordered her husbands death? Great post.
read it
read it
Not only read it, but first went back and read all the other installments, sucked into following yet another story!
read and enjoyed
read it, post soon pls
I think I went crazy in my comments about Tino Martinez, who I adore – even more than Danish! (Don’t kill me.) I’m positive I commented, but they seem to be gone.
*raises hand* I read every single chapter of this fic that you toss our way!
Read it loved it, really want more shane and carmen
psh, as if Dana and Alice could NOT have sex! Love the story so far!
This is great!
read it
Not only read it, but loved it! :)
I loved this chapter, Damn where is The Kitty Klub? F*ck I want to go to place. =)Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Aquaman! I love Aquaman… muahaha… I love Hawkgirl more, but that is besides the point. the point is, I love your story. And am checking in here religiously to see if you have updated. You please give us a longer chapter next time, yes? Please!!!
read it, loved it
read it dude…and it wa awesome!!! ;)
Love Love Loved it!
read it, loved it. i think ive been to that club, its in amsterdam isnt it lol
Read it. and I really liked it x
Great update. Post soon. Alice & Dana, very HOT!
Read it and as usual, loved it. Please post soon. I hope Tina isn’t freaked out for too long….
I read it and love it please post soon
Read and enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!
Skimmed over it. ;) I saw the NC-17 rating and had to see what was going on. Methinks I’ll have to start reading this one for real.
Nice work closetdana, very, very nice.
Very nice. I love it. Keep it up. Danish is my favorite!
I read this story. I really enjoy it.
I read it, I loved it, I want some more of it . . . please, oh and more Sharmen . . . gotta love thos two LYLAS
Read it, like it more
Great chapter. The whole resistance thing is pretty hot…it makes build up and tension that much better. Can’t wait till the next chapter!
Read it, loved and will be back. Sorry for not being constant in the feedback comments. You’re probably wondering if you’re getting to me!! Well you are so keep up the very good work with all your stories. I’ll try to be more constant in ginving comments after I read them! PS I like that you post often with smaller chapters than one larger post every two weeks! (of course no one can compete with brteyes on that level)
simply great! post soon
Read it, really liked it.
Still loving this story, the interaction between my 2 fav danish girls is brilliant, please post again soon -x-
not only read all, but luved all….would luv more of b&t though…..great job!!!!!!!!!
Oi mate, read it last night, didn’t get a chance to comment (would’ve been first) he, heh,heh…love it. Dane is dark with ‘er dannies, eh? Luv it when they shag, it’s rare (excellent). Aye, get paid to stop dancing to Country, but otherwise I’m magic! Loving it…gotta do a bunk. Ta mate!
Read it and completely loved it!!!! Ciao
I always seem to keep on rambling when it comes to commenting on your stories (or brteyes’ story for that matter…good to see you two are helping each other out!). :D Who’s seducing who, either way Bette and Tina are both falling hard. :) Mark and Gomey will be back. Taking a shower is not a good idea…but I have a feelingyou are gonna us the fact that one of them will be naked wisely. :P Alice forgave Dana in a sec, didn’t she?. :) They are really bad in following their on rules…no sex indeed! ;) They were freaking hot!!! :D Watch your PM.
i stumbled upon this by accident as i am not a Dana/Alice fan, but I have read all the chapters and I love it. Totally new approach..I so can see Shane as a hitwoman and Bette as an brilliant, beautiful, powerful criminal type! I am in for every chapter! I know you don’t like skimmers too much but the separate segments for the characters is okay!!! Write more more more soon!!!
I love Alice and Dana, and now I can go to bed content. So thank you!
Read it. Great story.
Read it loved it more. thanks