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    As Good As It Gets – Chapter 4

    Story written on June 7, 2012 by Liah x Doll.
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    Jodi’s gallery opening

    "Whose not here yet?" Dana asked as she joined in the little circle the women had formed.

    "Oh! Shane look who’s here!" Alice pointed towards the other room as a very beautiful Latina greeted Jodi with a kiss on the cheek.

    Shane’s eyes followed the Hispanic beauty and the way her hips seductively swayed from side to side as she made her way towards the elevated DJ booth. Shane’s eyes lingered on the woman’s sexy smile before dropping her gaze lower to the small amount of caramel skin that showed between the gap of the Latina’s tight jeans and dressy blouse.

    "Who’s here? Ugh . . Why don’t I ever know who you guys are talking about?" Dana groaned and snapped Shane out of her lust filled daze.

    "It’s okay, baby" Alice said softly as she wrapped an arm around Dana’s waist, "I still love you even though you’re completely clueless"

    Dana laughed and playfully shoved Alice away before focusing back on Bette, "So who’s not here yet?"

    "Tina" Bette said sadly and took a sip of her drink before sighing, "Maybe she’s not coming"

    Bette was afraid that Tina regretted her confession and decided not to show up. The thought made Bette even more depressed than before, possibly even making her regret saying anything in the first place

    "Maybe Helena got a little too touchy-feely in the limo" Alice muttered before taking a sip of her own drink, assuming no one heard but everyone did. She was rewarded with a glare from Dana and Shane not to mention a nice chunk of ice thrown down the front of her dress by Bette. The jealous brunette had dripped her fingers into her drink and slipped the ice inside Alice’s dress faster than anyone could register.

    Alice yelped and squirmed as she slipped her hand down the front of her dress and digging around her cleavage for the rapidly melting piece of ice, not even caring about who was watching. Dana covered her face with embarrassment, Shane nearly choked on her drink and Bette smirked at a job well done before licking her fingers free of the alcohol dripping from them.
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    1. Neither one is married to their GFs so break it off as gently as possible and then see where their relationship can go. It may burn fast and furious and then flame out or it might be the “Eternal Flame”.

    3. Thanks for the posting… Wow! I wish that relationships didn’t get into the desperation phase when their time of completion was over.I know that letting go is hard but when the relationship has come to its end being miserable is truly not the way to go. Holding on to something that isn’t there is a cruel thing to do to yourself. Life is too short to be so miserable. Let go to Sam, Tina! Let go of Ava, Bette. Its okay to do that as being miserable is not evolving. guess maybe its a fear that everyone will look at us as being failures in a relationship, but honestly that isn’t what the truth of it is. Others come into our lives for a reason, a season or a lifetime… to reflect back to us parts of ourselves… our past, our present or a possible future.

    4. Oh, WOW!!! This will be the forever kind of love with these two when they finally get together. Please let them both know somehow that their girlfriends are having affairs and they don’t have to be feeling guilty to break off their respective relationships. They are so right for each other. Awesome chapter. Thanks.

    7. loving it! I just think if Tina is so eager to get Bette to realize that Tina’s is better for her than Ava then Tina should not seem guilty about Sam, I mean she shouldn’t seem unsure herself. Hope to read more soon Liah! Thanks :D

    8. I hope Bette has now gotten all the encouragement she needs to do the right thing and end it with Ava. Tina has some thinking of her own to do. In the mean time, Helena needs to give up with the pursuit of Tina already. But… if she waits around long enough, she can be there to “console” Ava. They would likely be a perfect match. ;) Thanks for the post, Liah! :)

    9. still with your big smile, just like us when we see each new chapter, your story is amazing and well written. wait to read more, please still post often! :*

    11. There is an analogy that I have in mind for Bette and Tina’s situation but words fail me right now. I love where you have taken this story, I feel like you’re trying on something new. You’re doing a great job conveying Bette’s turmoil, and I love that you made Tina intuitive enough to pick up on it. The fact that she had the audacity to bring it up shows immense courage. I’m glad that they’re taking time apart to evaluate their own relationships. Doing the right thing in other words. I have a question for you, do you feel that a story is easier to write if sides are black and white and Bette and Tina’s? They’re both unhappy in their current relationships and should be with each other. Would they have felt the same way about each other if they were happy with their girlfriends? Ok that’s 2 questions but I just love how you weave your stories. You really do love us. Thank you for the awesome post Miss Liah. I hope I don’t offend you with my questions.

    14. Oh this just getting more, and more interesting . I can’t wait to see how each will handle this situation. And how they deal with they feel about each other. What will each decide and will they end up together . Can’t wait post soon

    19. WOOOOOW. That kiss was better than anything I could have expected! I love this story, so full of emotion I can feel it all over my own being. Amazing writing :)

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