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    As Good As It Gets – Chapter 4

    Story written on June 7, 2012 by Liah x Doll.
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    Jodi’s gallery opening

    "That’s so not funny, you guys are jerks" Alice pursed her lips as she finally managed to fish out the piece of ice only there was only a tiny piece left, cold water dripping from her fingers.
    "That’ll teach you to keep your mouth shut next time" Bette said with a smirk even though she was fighting the intense wave of jealousy surging through her. She saw for herself the night before that Tina wasn’t interested in Helena but Bette couldn’t help but be jealous, especially when she knew firsthand how "convincing" Helena could be. She and Ava would have made a perfect match for sure.
    There was a change in the music coming from the backroom where the sexy Latina DJ had headed to before and Alice squealed with excitement.
    "Oh my God, I love this song! Man Bette, you and Kit really scored big with Carmen. She’s fucking awesome"
    Bette couldn’t help but smile proudly as she turned to look into the backroom where she saw Carmen spinning one of her hottest mixes, "She is, isn’t she?"
    Dana quickly noted the excitement in Alice’s features and knew that if she didn’t do something about it, Alice would definitely cause more chaos. A bored Alice was a destructive Alice.
    "Come on troublemaker, dance with me" Dana grabbed her arm and tugged her towards the backroom to dance.
    "But I’m not a troublemaker" Alice pouted and acted as if she was going to protest but ended up eagerly following her girlfriend to the dance floor.
    Bette smiled and shook her head at the young couple. She saw the way their faces lit up when they saw each other and couldn’t help but wonder if hers even did that anymore whenever she laid eyes on Ava. As much as it hurt to admit, Bette doubted it. She glanced sideways at Shane and noticed how her friend’s eyes were locked on Carmen who was oblivious, completely into her music.
    Shane had been interning at Planet Records for nearly a year and a half but Carmen was the very sexy, newly hired beat maker / DJ for Planet Records. Shane had been completely smitten since the very first day she laid eyes on the Hispanic beauty.
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    1. Neither one is married to their GFs so break it off as gently as possible and then see where their relationship can go. It may burn fast and furious and then flame out or it might be the “Eternal Flame”.

    3. Thanks for the posting… Wow! I wish that relationships didn’t get into the desperation phase when their time of completion was over.I know that letting go is hard but when the relationship has come to its end being miserable is truly not the way to go. Holding on to something that isn’t there is a cruel thing to do to yourself. Life is too short to be so miserable. Let go to Sam, Tina! Let go of Ava, Bette. Its okay to do that as being miserable is not evolving. guess maybe its a fear that everyone will look at us as being failures in a relationship, but honestly that isn’t what the truth of it is. Others come into our lives for a reason, a season or a lifetime… to reflect back to us parts of ourselves… our past, our present or a possible future.

    4. Oh, WOW!!! This will be the forever kind of love with these two when they finally get together. Please let them both know somehow that their girlfriends are having affairs and they don’t have to be feeling guilty to break off their respective relationships. They are so right for each other. Awesome chapter. Thanks.

    7. loving it! I just think if Tina is so eager to get Bette to realize that Tina’s is better for her than Ava then Tina should not seem guilty about Sam, I mean she shouldn’t seem unsure herself. Hope to read more soon Liah! Thanks :D

    8. I hope Bette has now gotten all the encouragement she needs to do the right thing and end it with Ava. Tina has some thinking of her own to do. In the mean time, Helena needs to give up with the pursuit of Tina already. But… if she waits around long enough, she can be there to “console” Ava. They would likely be a perfect match. ;) Thanks for the post, Liah! :)

    9. still with your big smile, just like us when we see each new chapter, your story is amazing and well written. wait to read more, please still post often! :*

    11. There is an analogy that I have in mind for Bette and Tina’s situation but words fail me right now. I love where you have taken this story, I feel like you’re trying on something new. You’re doing a great job conveying Bette’s turmoil, and I love that you made Tina intuitive enough to pick up on it. The fact that she had the audacity to bring it up shows immense courage. I’m glad that they’re taking time apart to evaluate their own relationships. Doing the right thing in other words. I have a question for you, do you feel that a story is easier to write if sides are black and white and Bette and Tina’s? They’re both unhappy in their current relationships and should be with each other. Would they have felt the same way about each other if they were happy with their girlfriends? Ok that’s 2 questions but I just love how you weave your stories. You really do love us. Thank you for the awesome post Miss Liah. I hope I don’t offend you with my questions.

    14. Oh this just getting more, and more interesting . I can’t wait to see how each will handle this situation. And how they deal with they feel about each other. What will each decide and will they end up together . Can’t wait post soon

    19. WOOOOOW. That kiss was better than anything I could have expected! I love this story, so full of emotion I can feel it all over my own being. Amazing writing :)

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