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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 4
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"Sooooo . .?" Bette returned, hoping to dodge the question Tina had been probing.
"What’s the story with you two?"
"What makes you think there’s a story?" Bette asked with a raised eyebrow and couldn’t help but smirk with Tina’s curious nature. She easily picked up on the curiosity and immediately her frustration dwindled. She had been a bit on the defensive due to Ava’s habits but she could sense that Tina didn’t wish to harm or guilt her. Tina just wanted to know about Bette, something that fascinated the brunette. Ava was so self-absorbed, it was nice for the attention to be on Bette for once.
"Oh come on, you’re joking right? This woman has your art collection hanging up in the walls of her gallery. If I asked any of my exes to perform one of my songs they’d probably shoot me on the spot"
"Well that’s a nice visual" Bette teased with a smirk and evaded the question once more.
"Come on, Bette I’m being serious" Tina whined as they reached an emptier part of the gallery. She stopped walking grasped Bette’s wrist as they both felt a tingle run up their arm, "There has to be some kind of history for you both to have remained such good friends"
"Well it wasn’t easy" Bette said sadly.
"Does that mean you’re gonna share?" Tina said with a hopeful smile.
"You’re something else you know that right?" Bette smirked and was given a very unconvincing stare from Tina but it made her laugh and finally give in, "Okay, okay . . We met when I was taking some college courses about art. I had been painting ever since I was a little girl and but there was so much I didn’t know. I wanted to learn technique and such"
Tina smirked when she saw the passion light up in Bette’s eyes when she spoke about art, it was the same as when she spoke about music only this had a distinct purity to it. It was sad to think about but it was as if somehow Bette’s love for music had been ruined due to a bad experience or something. As if she was drained of her love for music, what or who could have done that to her? It pained Tina to think about, she wanted to make it better. A thought passed through her head of her kissing all of Bette’s worries and insecurities away. She could tell Bette had a lot so there was no doubt there would be a lot of kissing.
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Neither one is married to their GFs so break it off as gently as possible and then see where their relationship can go. It may burn fast and furious and then flame out or it might be the “Eternal Flame”.
wowowow soo romantic and beautiful story like this i love it thank you!!!
Thanks for the posting… Wow! I wish that relationships didn’t get into the desperation phase when their time of completion was over.I know that letting go is hard but when the relationship has come to its end being miserable is truly not the way to go. Holding on to something that isn’t there is a cruel thing to do to yourself. Life is too short to be so miserable. Let go to Sam, Tina! Let go of Ava, Bette. Its okay to do that as being miserable is not evolving. guess maybe its a fear that everyone will look at us as being failures in a relationship, but honestly that isn’t what the truth of it is. Others come into our lives for a reason, a season or a lifetime… to reflect back to us parts of ourselves… our past, our present or a possible future.
Oh, WOW!!! This will be the forever kind of love with these two when they finally get together. Please let them both know somehow that their girlfriends are having affairs and they don’t have to be feeling guilty to break off their respective relationships. They are so right for each other. Awesome chapter. Thanks.
Hey now! My lips are tingling and I wasn’t the one being kissed. Nice update. Can’t wait for more.
That was awesome and can’t wait to see Bette dump Ava and Tina dump Sam. Please post more, thanks!
loving it! I just think if Tina is so eager to get Bette to realize that Tina’s is better for her than Ava then Tina should not seem guilty about Sam, I mean she shouldn’t seem unsure herself. Hope to read more soon Liah! Thanks :D
I hope Bette has now gotten all the encouragement she needs to do the right thing and end it with Ava. Tina has some thinking of her own to do. In the mean time, Helena needs to give up with the pursuit of Tina already. But… if she waits around long enough, she can be there to “console” Ava. They would likely be a perfect match. ;) Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
still with your big smile, just like us when we see each new chapter, your story is amazing and well written. wait to read more, please still post often! :*
Amazing update love your story.Right direction.PPS
There is an analogy that I have in mind for Bette and Tina’s situation but words fail me right now. I love where you have taken this story, I feel like you’re trying on something new. You’re doing a great job conveying Bette’s turmoil, and I love that you made Tina intuitive enough to pick up on it. The fact that she had the audacity to bring it up shows immense courage. I’m glad that they’re taking time apart to evaluate their own relationships. Doing the right thing in other words. I have a question for you, do you feel that a story is easier to write if sides are black and white and Bette and Tina’s? They’re both unhappy in their current relationships and should be with each other. Would they have felt the same way about each other if they were happy with their girlfriends? Ok that’s 2 questions but I just love how you weave your stories. You really do love us. Thank you for the awesome post Miss Liah. I hope I don’t offend you with my questions.
I just read all 4 updates on your new story. I LOVE IT! I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for this excellent story.
ava – is she like 15?? totally immature.
Oh this just getting more, and more interesting . I can’t wait to see how each will handle this situation. And how they deal with they feel about each other. What will each decide and will they end up together . Can’t wait post soon
I’m happy cuz It’s a long post… But I wanna cry!….Dammit!..Lets just kick Ava out A.S.A.P.! And bring Sam with her…Please..??
Really enjoyed it
I really really love this story! You have an awesome way of building this up!! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
What a beautiful chapter! Loving it Liah!
WOOOOOW. That kiss was better than anything I could have expected! I love this story, so full of emotion I can feel it all over my own being. Amazing writing :)