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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 4
With a kiss on the cheek to both women, Helena left Bette and Tina alone with their desires. Their eyes lingered over each other for a moment longer, the naughty thoughts invading their minds should have put themselves to shame but they couldn’t find the will to let the guilt in. They were only able to focus on each other and the moment between them.
"So . . ready to get started?" Tina asked with a smile. Bette nodded and gestured her hand to set them in motion as they made their way through the gallery. Though Bette fought like mad to keep her desires to herself, she had a strong feeling she would get into some trouble by the end of the night. Going another day without kissing Tina’s lips wasn’t something Bette was sure she could do.
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"So I heard you and Jodi used to go out" It was an awkward way to start a conversation but Tina was a bit desperate. Her desires were getting the better of her and she opted for getting to know Bette better as a way to quell them. She regretted the way she asked her question however when she saw Bette’s expression.
"Who told you that? Ava?" Bette tried to keep her panic and frustration under control. Tina didn’t deserve to feel any sort of negativity from Bette, what she had done in the past was her own fault. Even still, Bette was seriously pissed at Ava at the moment. Tina nodded in response and it only made Bette even more upset.
I should have known. She’s just as much of a gossip as Alice is.
"Soooo?" Tina waited for Bette to answer. She wasn’t upset or anything, just curious. Bette intrigued Tina with the things she said but also confused Tina with the things she so obviously held back. Tina wanted to know why, she wanted Bette to open up to her. She knew how hard it could be for a person but she hoped that Bette could find that safe haven with her, God knows she wanted to be that for Bette.
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(28 votes, average: 4.54 out of 5)
Neither one is married to their GFs so break it off as gently as possible and then see where their relationship can go. It may burn fast and furious and then flame out or it might be the “Eternal Flame”.
wowowow soo romantic and beautiful story like this i love it thank you!!!
Thanks for the posting… Wow! I wish that relationships didn’t get into the desperation phase when their time of completion was over.I know that letting go is hard but when the relationship has come to its end being miserable is truly not the way to go. Holding on to something that isn’t there is a cruel thing to do to yourself. Life is too short to be so miserable. Let go to Sam, Tina! Let go of Ava, Bette. Its okay to do that as being miserable is not evolving. guess maybe its a fear that everyone will look at us as being failures in a relationship, but honestly that isn’t what the truth of it is. Others come into our lives for a reason, a season or a lifetime… to reflect back to us parts of ourselves… our past, our present or a possible future.
Oh, WOW!!! This will be the forever kind of love with these two when they finally get together. Please let them both know somehow that their girlfriends are having affairs and they don’t have to be feeling guilty to break off their respective relationships. They are so right for each other. Awesome chapter. Thanks.
Hey now! My lips are tingling and I wasn’t the one being kissed. Nice update. Can’t wait for more.
That was awesome and can’t wait to see Bette dump Ava and Tina dump Sam. Please post more, thanks!
loving it! I just think if Tina is so eager to get Bette to realize that Tina’s is better for her than Ava then Tina should not seem guilty about Sam, I mean she shouldn’t seem unsure herself. Hope to read more soon Liah! Thanks :D
I hope Bette has now gotten all the encouragement she needs to do the right thing and end it with Ava. Tina has some thinking of her own to do. In the mean time, Helena needs to give up with the pursuit of Tina already. But… if she waits around long enough, she can be there to “console” Ava. They would likely be a perfect match. ;) Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
still with your big smile, just like us when we see each new chapter, your story is amazing and well written. wait to read more, please still post often! :*
Amazing update love your story.Right direction.PPS
There is an analogy that I have in mind for Bette and Tina’s situation but words fail me right now. I love where you have taken this story, I feel like you’re trying on something new. You’re doing a great job conveying Bette’s turmoil, and I love that you made Tina intuitive enough to pick up on it. The fact that she had the audacity to bring it up shows immense courage. I’m glad that they’re taking time apart to evaluate their own relationships. Doing the right thing in other words. I have a question for you, do you feel that a story is easier to write if sides are black and white and Bette and Tina’s? They’re both unhappy in their current relationships and should be with each other. Would they have felt the same way about each other if they were happy with their girlfriends? Ok that’s 2 questions but I just love how you weave your stories. You really do love us. Thank you for the awesome post Miss Liah. I hope I don’t offend you with my questions.
I just read all 4 updates on your new story. I LOVE IT! I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for this excellent story.
ava – is she like 15?? totally immature.
Oh this just getting more, and more interesting . I can’t wait to see how each will handle this situation. And how they deal with they feel about each other. What will each decide and will they end up together . Can’t wait post soon
I’m happy cuz It’s a long post… But I wanna cry!….Dammit!..Lets just kick Ava out A.S.A.P.! And bring Sam with her…Please..??
Really enjoyed it
I really really love this story! You have an awesome way of building this up!! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
What a beautiful chapter! Loving it Liah!
WOOOOOW. That kiss was better than anything I could have expected! I love this story, so full of emotion I can feel it all over my own being. Amazing writing :)