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    At first sight

    Story written on February 28, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 20

    She relaxed in her seat and took in the scenery. It looked familiar. Of course, she had driven up the coast dozens of times before but this particular stretch of road really struck a cord with her. The road was climbing steadily and the pine trees on either side of the road were interspersed with clearings giving full view of the ocean below.
    She looked down and swallowed, slightly unsettled by the steepness of some of the drops. Then, she saw it….this was it…it was the place where the accident had occurred. The last time she had been by here,  it had been dark. It looked so different in daylight. The guard-rail had been replaced, albeit by a temporary wooden one, but this is where "T" had had her accident. This is where they had "met" for the first time.
    At this point, Bette had passed the spot and she slammed on the breaks. Her car came to a sudden halt in the middle of the road. Thank goodness there were no cars behind her. She executed a quick turn and freewheeled back to the spot. She parked her car on down a bit. She exited and walked the small distance back to the wooden guard-rail. She looked down into the ravine. The wreck had been removed but bits of blackened metal and broken glass were still visible in the middle of the undergrowth. The scene resembled that of a forest fire. She remembered the intensity of the fire that night, it was a wonder really that the whole area had not gone up in flames.  
    She was staring at the burnt ground when she put her hands in the pocket of her jeans. She felt the little object and retrieved it to look at it. The little necklace that no one had paid attention to was now sitting in the palm of her hand. She pushed in around with her index finger and the little letter appeared under the chain.  "It was hers after all!" Bette thought " "T" for "Tina"."
    "Tina" she murmured. She remembered how the nurse back at the hospital had unwittingly given her this piece of information.
    The tightness in her stomach had returned, it was now coupled with a massive lump in her throat. She would never see her again. And since fate seemed to have brought her back here, she should do as she had said and return the necklace to her, except that she would never be able to give it to her in person. The next best thing she thought was to leave it here. Maybe she’d return here one day and find it.
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    3. OMG… WHY WHY WHY WHY are you ending this story… like the others have said.. we need a sequel.. please… this was so good… i don’t want to see it end… please pps

    4. This has been a great story even if sometimes confusing but great nevertheless. Hate to see the story end when it is just getting to the point of a possible romance between them. I also understand when an author feels they have reached the end of the story whether the readers like it or not. So in that vein, I hope we get a sequel or epilogue or something that does not leave us hanging. Thanks for posting.

    6. This story was beautifully crafted and imaginative. I looked forward to each new chapter and as everyone else I am sorry to see it end, but you’ve brought it a great conclusion. You’ve done an amazing job. Thank you for sharing your talent.

    10. Beautiful,totally beautiful!..I can’t thanked you enough for this wonderful story..From beginning to end It’s simply …BEAUTIFUL!.. Another story please?…

    12. Noooooo…the end?? Fantastic story that I hate to see ending. Happy though that you’ve promised an epilogue. Thanks for sharing your talent and I’m hoping to see you back posting another tale.

    20. Thanks for this beautiful and touching story! Kudos to you Kins40 :-) just finished re read from the beginning, kinda sad it’s ending – funny that I still feel the same way though I knew it already. :-p yeah, silly me! But would it be possible to write the sequel or epilogue just to clarify what happen next to our favourite girls? Will Bette still in tune with Tina as all what happened between them were only in Tina’s imagination? Is the reality not as beautiful as in the dream so it’s better to end it here to avoid breaking all the readers heart? ;-)

    23. Excellent fic! Not only the storyline is great but it made me more knowledgeable of the blinds world. The ending is awesome but somehow I wanted more. read you soon.

    26. Thanks so much for this story. I’m glad they finally met each other. I hope you write a sequel. I would love to see where their relationship goes.

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