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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 25-B: AFTERSHOCK (part 2)
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The time passed, and they kept making love intermixing their sexual moments with some relaxing sleep minutes.
No way to know how many times Bette had Tina inside or she was between her lover’s legs. And there was no reason to find out because they both enjoyed each other in the same way.
It is early afternoon, and a line of cars are waiting at the door of the Cauldron, Bette’s Porter beach house and workshop. Louise, Helena, Alice, Dana, Shane and Carmen are waiting for someone to open the door.
Alice: “Shane, have you call through the intercom?”
Shane: “yup, no answer.”
Alice: “let me call her.”
In the bedroom, inside the house, Bette naked is disentangling her body from Tina’s.
Tina: “what time is it?”
Bette: (looking at the clock) “two twenty.”
Tina: “oh my God, can’t believe it.”
The phone is ringing.
Bette: “I got it… hmm, it’s Alice.”
Tina: “what’s up?”
Bette: (putting on some clothes) “they are outside; I’ll open the door.”
Bette went outside to open the door, letting the cars enter to the complex and park inside close to the workshop, then, the girls headed for the house.
Louise: (whispering to Bette) “how’s my sister?”
Bette: “in the bathroom, I think.”
Louise: (smiling) “I see, so she scored.”
Bette: (blushed) “what…?”
Louise: “doesn’t matter…by the way, Kit, James, Peggy, and Sharon will bring the food and drinks later.”
In the meantime, Alice in the kitchen has found the last night’s food.
Alice: (opening the refrigerator) “wow, smells very good…, can I have this Bette?”
Helena: “you could wait for mom and Kit to come.”
Alice: “I’m starving.”
Three hours later, Kit and James arrived with the drinks and the cake; after one hour Tina’s friends, Brenda, Maura, Jane, Sam, Kate, Tim, and Eric arrive at the place. It was only at 7:00 pm when Peggy, Sharon, and her team of chefs came with the food.
Soon, all the house’s lights were on and the party started
All of them had a very nice time talking, dancing, eating and playing games. However, almost at the end of the party, Peggy told Bette that she was organizing a few days of relaxation, at her beach house, in the Hamptons to celebrate the New Year. Bette initially was a little reluctant to accept the invitation; she would rather enjoy the privacy of a few days alone with Tina, especially after the last hot night with her fiancé, than the bustle and revelry at Peggy’s place with all her family and close friends. However, Louise and Helena convinced her to go to Peggy’s.”
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Wow… that was a surprise….. nice birthday gift for Bette and for Tina. I wonder why Tina is so reluctant to get to know Mable? They will may never have a close relationship, but I would think that Tina would have a curiosity as to who this woman is. She is the mother to Louise, her only sister. She gave her 50% of her DNA… Why is Tina just avoid any causal relationship with her. Maybe Maxine can help these two to at least be friendly with one another.
So Melvin is probably in Canada… Wonder who this sorcerer is? Pretty bad when you need to get help from a card reader. Looks like help for Melvin just wasn’t in the cards. And it foretold that Tina (heir to Melvin’s arch-enemy) was already bonded to his own heir Bette Porter…. and together they would bring his downfall. Yeah!!!
Can’t wait to see the next installment of this story….. maybe the rest of the secrets will be revealed.
Thank you for the chapter…
Ditto, well said
I knew, You’re right
Hi Martha,
Glad you liked the chapter.
I don’t think Tina is reluctant to know Mabel, I think she’s insecure and afraid she couldn’t give her biological mother the love she deserves. It’s a psychological problem, but maybe Maxine could help.
Yes, Melvin should be far away now. And you’re right, when you need help from a card reader this is no telling what you want to hear (ha-ha-ha).
Yes, indeed, the prophecy/curse that Marcus’ mother did is happening.
I hope to post soon, but right now my mind is on the Olympics in Tokyo.
Thank you for reading ad commenting.
P.
Thanks for this Chapter moving the story along very well !
Looking forward to the next.
Hi SG
Thanks, I’ll try to post as soon as I can.
P.
¡Hola, Proteonomics! Me encantó el capítulo porque por fin Bette y Tina volvieron a ver a Maxine y quiero ver cómo Bette se comporta con su hermano,gracias esperando con ansias el siguiente capítulo.
Hola Escorpion.
Que bueno que te gusto el capitulo.
Si vamos a ver que pasa ahora que Maxine esta aqui y nada mas y nada menos que con Marcus.
P
Great chapter.
Can’t wait for Melvin to get his!!!!
So still a bit of a mystery going on here!!!
I truly enjoy your tales!!!
Great job!!!
Thanks for the update.
Hi, Collins:
Thanks for your kind words.
Yes, waiting to write and read what will happen with Melvin.
Mysteries will be even in the last chapter, my friend. But in the end, all the mysteries will be solved.
TC,
P
Hi proteomics,
You know why I was only able to read your story now, but I still want to apologize for taking so long.
Beautiful picture of our ladies and how nice that they are both processing the emotional and physical events. I love you Bette, so caring and concerned about Tina.
Melvin uses a card reader, wow, I never expected that. He can run away but in the end he will be punished for everything he ever did.
And finally, Maxime is back in the country, what great news for Bette and Tina. I look forward to their reunion and their conversations.
A great story and I hope you keep writing it for a long time.
Hi, my friend:
I know what wonderful moments have you been living these last days, It is fine, as I told you the story is still here, and don’t need to apologize for anything.
Yes, my Bette is so caring and Tina is very in love with her (opposite to what some people want us to believe in a certain show which season-2 starts next week)
Melvin will get what he deserved, the card reader gave him the possibility of surrender, which would help him, but the man is taking the worse way.
Yes, Maxine is back and now many secrets will be exposed.
Thank you, my friend.
P