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    B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 25-B: AFTERSHOCK (part 2)

    Story written on July 18, 2021 by proteonomics.
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    Peggy: “very deep, it will affect the balance on the board of the company.” Bette: “good for my mom.” Peggy: “that may be affected too, because the investigation may go to 30 years ago.” Tina: “what does it mean?” Peggy: “they are looking for Melvin’s history even before he married Maxine.” Bette: “why?” Peggy: “the

    Peggy: “very deep, it will affect the balance on the board of the company.”

    Bette: “good for my mom.”

    Peggy: “that may be affected too, because the investigation may go to 30 years ago.”

    Tina: “what does it mean?”

    Peggy: “they are looking for Melvin’s history even before he married Maxine.”

    Bette: “why?”

    Peggy: “the found in their crime archives something, there was a denounce made by a woman who asked Melvin for child support, and in response, she was brutally hit by your father… one year later she was found dead in South America in the same place where all of us, including Melvin were working then.”

    Tina: “that should be Marcus’ mother.”

    Bette: “that wasn’t the only thing, right?”

    Peggy: “no, they suspect that your mother, Frank, and Mabel Hart, and Miranda Kennard were his victims too.”

    Bette: “what should we do?”

    Peggy: “stay alert; there will be bodyguards for everybody.”

    Tina: “do you think he’ll attack her own daughter?”

    Peggy: “no, but if his ruffians won’t see a penny from him, they will look for his family trying to get some money; we have to be careful with Halsey’s people, they may be looking for revenge.”

    Tina: “which means we all should be alert.”

    Peggy: “that’s right.”

     

    Hudson Square – Manhattan – Melvin Porter’s secret room, a few days later.

     

    Melvin has stopped going to his office. Initially, it was because of the shame of losing the document with the forged signature of his ex-wife; additionally, Peggy’s threat to bring Maxine online to the meetings.

    He started coming two or three times per week after the day when the forged document burned in the bank’s safe box; staying in the office for no more than three hours.

    But two weeks ago something remarkable happened. It was that Monday after Henry was wounded and captured when trying to kill his daughter and one of her dates. The FBI came to the company, looking for him; Porter had to leave the building sneakily. William wasn’t as lucky as Melvin, and he was interrogated and detained by the FBI.

    While leaving the building that day, Melvin suspected that crazy Henry had probably opened his mouth, involving him and confessing their dirty business.

    Unfortunately, his suspicions were true. When Henry was transferred to the FBI custody while being at the hospital, he realized that his fate was decided, and he needed to get rid of as many charges against him as possible. His only choice was to name his accomplices among them were Melvin and William.

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    1. Wow… that was a surprise….. nice birthday gift for Bette and for Tina. I wonder why Tina is so reluctant to get to know Mable? They will may never have a close relationship, but I would think that Tina would have a curiosity as to who this woman is. She is the mother to Louise, her only sister. She gave her 50% of her DNA… Why is Tina just avoid any causal relationship with her. Maybe Maxine can help these two to at least be friendly with one another.

      So Melvin is probably in Canada… Wonder who this sorcerer is? Pretty bad when you need to get help from a card reader. Looks like help for Melvin just wasn’t in the cards. And it foretold that Tina (heir to Melvin’s arch-enemy) was already bonded to his own heir Bette Porter…. and together they would bring his downfall. Yeah!!!

      Can’t wait to see the next installment of this story….. maybe the rest of the secrets will be revealed.

      Thank you for the chapter…

      • Hi Martha,

        Glad you liked the chapter.

        I don’t think Tina is reluctant to know Mabel, I think she’s insecure and afraid she couldn’t give her biological mother the love she deserves. It’s a psychological problem, but maybe Maxine could help.

        Yes, Melvin should be far away now. And you’re right, when you need help from a card reader this is no telling what you want to hear (ha-ha-ha).

        Yes, indeed, the prophecy/curse that Marcus’ mother did is happening.

        I hope to post soon, but right now my mind is on the Olympics in Tokyo.

        Thank you for reading ad commenting.

        P.

    3. ¡Hola, Proteonomics! Me encantó el capítulo porque por fin Bette y Tina volvieron a ver a Maxine y quiero ver cómo Bette se comporta con su hermano,gracias esperando con ansias el siguiente capítulo.

      • Hi, Collins:

        Thanks for your kind words.

        Yes, waiting to write and read what will happen with Melvin.

        Mysteries will be even in the last chapter, my friend. But in the end, all the mysteries will be solved.

        TC,

        P

    5. Hi proteomics,

      You know why I was only able to read your story now, but I still want to apologize for taking so long.

      Beautiful picture of our ladies and how nice that they are both processing the emotional and physical events. I love you Bette, so caring and concerned about Tina.

      Melvin uses a card reader, wow, I never expected that. He can run away but in the end he will be punished for everything he ever did.

      And finally, Maxime is back in the country, what great news for Bette and Tina. I look forward to their reunion and their conversations.

      A great story and I hope you keep writing it for a long time.

      • Hi, my friend:

        I know what wonderful moments have you been living these last days, It is fine, as I told you the story is still here, and don’t need to apologize for anything.

        Yes, my Bette is so caring and Tina is very in love with her (opposite to what some people want us to believe in a certain show which season-2 starts next week)

        Melvin will get what he deserved, the card reader gave him the possibility of surrender, which would help him, but the man is taking the worse way.

        Yes, Maxine is back and now many secrets will be exposed.

        Thank you, my friend.

        P

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