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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 25-B: AFTERSHOCK (part 2)
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The sorcerer shuffled the rest of the cards. He threw them on top of the ones already on the table.
Sorcerer: “no way…, very hard…, your people are turning against you… hmm, no, no way out.”
Melvin: “must be something you could do…, I’ll pay you.”
Sorcerer: (smiling and throwing more cards on the top and sides of the ones already on the table) “your money… where is your money…, you can’t pay me.”
Melvin: “I will, as soon as I get my money back.”
Sorcerer: (shaking his face) “no, it’s almost impossible…; you came too late…”
Melvin: “I was very busy the last months.”
Sorcerer: “not the last months; you’re late by several years, at least ten years, maybe more.”
Melvin: (desperate) “don’t tell me you can do nothing for me.”
Sorcerer: “too late…, too much hurt… you carry too much evil, and your nemesis already sealed your fall.”
Melvin: “shit…, please, what can I do?”
Sorcerer: “I’m not sure if you can run away, the police are after you…, (looking at the cards) there was a woman, she was close to you… a child…, yes, your son…, you turned your back on them…, you killed her…, but before she died she cursed you, she made a prediction…, your heir will bond with your nemesis’ heir…, they will build your fall.”
Melvin: “can it be prevented?”
Sorcerer: “no, it’s done, it already happened… (Still reading the cards) redemption or revenge…? They’ll make a family…, children…, the bond is, already, consumed, they have sealed their future…, hmm (looking again the cards on the table) you’re not at the side of that happiness, and I won’t help you, no with this, you have gone too far, done too much hurt; no… I can’t. This is my advice, Melvin, either you repent and pay for your sins, or you run and go far away…, but I tell you…, nothing can stop what is coming…, and this advice is for free.”
Melvin left the building and asked the driver to go to his bunker while cleaned her hands stained with blood. In his secret place, the tall man, quickly, gathered some clothes, money, and other values. He boarded his car again, just in time because after five minutes he left; the FBI arrived at the place looking for him.
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Wow… that was a surprise….. nice birthday gift for Bette and for Tina. I wonder why Tina is so reluctant to get to know Mable? They will may never have a close relationship, but I would think that Tina would have a curiosity as to who this woman is. She is the mother to Louise, her only sister. She gave her 50% of her DNA… Why is Tina just avoid any causal relationship with her. Maybe Maxine can help these two to at least be friendly with one another.
So Melvin is probably in Canada… Wonder who this sorcerer is? Pretty bad when you need to get help from a card reader. Looks like help for Melvin just wasn’t in the cards. And it foretold that Tina (heir to Melvin’s arch-enemy) was already bonded to his own heir Bette Porter…. and together they would bring his downfall. Yeah!!!
Can’t wait to see the next installment of this story….. maybe the rest of the secrets will be revealed.
Thank you for the chapter…
Ditto, well said
I knew, You’re right
Hi Martha,
Glad you liked the chapter.
I don’t think Tina is reluctant to know Mabel, I think she’s insecure and afraid she couldn’t give her biological mother the love she deserves. It’s a psychological problem, but maybe Maxine could help.
Yes, Melvin should be far away now. And you’re right, when you need help from a card reader this is no telling what you want to hear (ha-ha-ha).
Yes, indeed, the prophecy/curse that Marcus’ mother did is happening.
I hope to post soon, but right now my mind is on the Olympics in Tokyo.
Thank you for reading ad commenting.
P.
Thanks for this Chapter moving the story along very well !
Looking forward to the next.
Hi SG
Thanks, I’ll try to post as soon as I can.
P.
¡Hola, Proteonomics! Me encantó el capítulo porque por fin Bette y Tina volvieron a ver a Maxine y quiero ver cómo Bette se comporta con su hermano,gracias esperando con ansias el siguiente capítulo.
Hola Escorpion.
Que bueno que te gusto el capitulo.
Si vamos a ver que pasa ahora que Maxine esta aqui y nada mas y nada menos que con Marcus.
P
Great chapter.
Can’t wait for Melvin to get his!!!!
So still a bit of a mystery going on here!!!
I truly enjoy your tales!!!
Great job!!!
Thanks for the update.
Hi, Collins:
Thanks for your kind words.
Yes, waiting to write and read what will happen with Melvin.
Mysteries will be even in the last chapter, my friend. But in the end, all the mysteries will be solved.
TC,
P
Hi proteomics,
You know why I was only able to read your story now, but I still want to apologize for taking so long.
Beautiful picture of our ladies and how nice that they are both processing the emotional and physical events. I love you Bette, so caring and concerned about Tina.
Melvin uses a card reader, wow, I never expected that. He can run away but in the end he will be punished for everything he ever did.
And finally, Maxime is back in the country, what great news for Bette and Tina. I look forward to their reunion and their conversations.
A great story and I hope you keep writing it for a long time.
Hi, my friend:
I know what wonderful moments have you been living these last days, It is fine, as I told you the story is still here, and don’t need to apologize for anything.
Yes, my Bette is so caring and Tina is very in love with her (opposite to what some people want us to believe in a certain show which season-2 starts next week)
Melvin will get what he deserved, the card reader gave him the possibility of surrender, which would help him, but the man is taking the worse way.
Yes, Maxine is back and now many secrets will be exposed.
Thank you, my friend.
P