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    B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 3: THE JOB

    Alice: “no, Helena, but she will be only in the revision of the documents and merit; in the interviews is me alone or maybe with James.”

    Kit: “James will do whatever you or Bette order…, no, we need Bette.”

    Alice: “she is not taking this seriously.”

    Kit: “okay, talk to James and perhaps, Helena, I’ll talk to Bette…, and Alice, I need your discretion, not a word to anybody, not even to Louise, and also your promise that you’ll help Tina and you’ll keep me posted about everything that happens to her…”

    Alice: “it’s gonna be hard, Kit, but I’ll do it for you because you helped my mom with her drug addiction.”

    Kit: “thanks, Alice, and regarding your mother, I did what I had to do.”

    At that moment the ringing at the door indicated another visitor.

    Kit: “who could it be?”

    After answering the door, Bette entered, she was pale and her eyes were lost in her thoughts.

    Alice: “hi, Bette…, are you okay?”

    Bette: “hmm… yes.”

    Kit: “what’s wrong baby sis?”

    Alice observed Bette’s expression, she was about to cry, so she decided to give privacy to the sisters to talk.

    Alice: “well, ladies, I’m leaving, I will be in the evening at the Hart’s, see you there.”

    Alice left Kit’s house and went to the Bureau with Tina’s information. Kit used now the time to talk to Bette.

    Kit: “what happens, Bette?”

    Bette: “I don’t know, I think I need a break I’m seeing weird things.”

    Kit: (suspicious) “what have you seen?”

    Bette: “I’m not sure if I saw something or just imagined something.”

    Kit: “have you been taking any medication?”

    Bette: “no…, I don’t do drugs, you know that.”

    Kit: “okay, tell me what you have seen.”

    Bette: (sighing) “nothing…; forget about that… I want to talk about the last misdeed of our father.”

    Bette told Kit about Nadia’s findings including Aaron’s situation and her plan to trap the three scoundrels. The sisters commented on Nadia’s information and finally, Kid asked Bette to be present in the interviews of the candidates for the new positions in the company.

    Kit: “Bette, you must be present in the interviews.”

    Bette: “why? Alice, Helena, and James can manage that.”

    Kit: “they will be in the schedule of the process and the evaluation of documents but only Alice and perhaps James will interview and evaluate them.”

    Comments

      • Hi Martha:

        I’m very glad that you liked this chapter, believe me, I’m not going to wait one month to post the next one, it will be just 2 weeks, I should post around October 11 (one or two days before or after).

        I also hope the Tina and Bette will face each other soon, they almost met in the subway.

        But as you have read, I’m building the scene of what will happen in the next chapters.

        I hope to keep you guys entertained in the rest of the story.

        Thanks again for your comments, those are always very important for us, the writers.

        P

    1. P.
      Length of chapter is fine…..length to me is not a factor. Write the story as you see appropriate and do not worry about length of the chapters. A long chapter helps when you are waiting for the next installment.

      • Hi Zhenya:

        I know, barely you find a writer that wants to post a shorter chapter; but, what happens is that I made myself a vow, for this story, of posting chapters no longer of 20 pages, and so far I have failed, all my chapters are a bit longer.

        But I will have to adapt.

        Thank you for following this story, I hope not to disappoint.

        Thanks again.

        P

      • Hola Escorpion:

        Me alegra que te siga gustando la historia, a mi tambien me gustan los capitulos largos, ojala que tengas paciencia para esperar el encuentro the Tina y Bette y para gozar de su romance y sus aventuras.

        Muchas gracias por leer y comentar.

        P

    2. Hi proteonomics,

      Never apologize for the lenght of this chapter!!!!

      It was a really intersting chapter, there is always a lot going on in your stories, and i am trying to find and absord all the clues. But i think i am over looking some of the clues or are not able to put them together. Damn my age 😁

      I love the flashbacks both Tina and Bette have, they answer slowly little by little what happened ten years ago.

      So much mysterie that you will slowly reveal to us. Look forward to that!

      So they will finally meet again! They were so close at the subway!

      I look forward to the next chapter!!!

      • Hi, my friend.

        Thanks for your encouraging words.

        Well here is also some clues, but perhaps some of them are evident and you already know what is coming.

        Yes, the flashbacks are enlightening about what happened 10 years ago; it’s hard to understand how a meeting, friendship and falling in love of only one day, may change our lives; when sometimes you know people for a while and they barely influence our life.

        And they were so close in the subway as you pointed, but sometimes, things take a little longer than we expect.

        But don’t be disappointed, just one thing, next chapter you will see a picture for the first meeting (well I hope I’ll make a nice picture).

        Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.

        P

    3. Hey P. I dont mind of the long stories. In fact i luv em.

      “and when Louise and Mabel find out about her, please don’t force the encounters, let them find each other slowly” Are Tina n Louise related? And the fact that Tina n Louise have the same looks. So i assume that they r related.

      • Hi AReader:

        Great, very smart, you found a very important clue; I thought nobody noticed.

        Yes, they are related but why Louise didn’t recognize Tina in the clinic? (chapter 1 and 2) and why Kit has to keep Tina hidden? (and Why M is asking her that?) and Bette tried to be with Louise because she resembles Randy (for God sake, Louise was smart enough to avoid that catastrophe)

        Of course, there is an answer, you may discover that by my clues or perhaps in a few chapters.

        Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

        P

    4. proteonomics:

      It’s a very attempted chapter, also very good! The interaction between Alex and Randy was pure love, they seemed so at ease with each other, you do have a great choice of words, please don’t hesitate to write more pages for them.

      As for Bette and Tina in the present, I really do hope that these two people meet soon, it was clear that they are still loving each other but they didn’t know the other are still alive. These must be lots of readers waiting to see them meet in this chapter but well, another cliffhanger and another chapter to wait.

      But I’ll be patient, for me, I think the pace is slow but very focus and full of details, by the talk between Bette and her friends and sisters, we could know how the person she turns into. And how she tries to prove herself. As for Tina, she’s a worrier, she really do fight a lots by herself. I just hope that when they meet, they would not be so shock about the news.

      Will Bette be on time? Hmm…I hope so, but for the chapter and the picture to look like, I don’t think she’ll make it, you always give out surprises and it’s make the story so good and so different than others.

      Please post soon and long chapter is always the best! Thanks for the great story!

      CJ

      • Hi CJ:

        Yes, cliffhangers are my skill (????????????).

        We’ll see more of Randy and Alex in the next chapters, but at a certain point, I have to focus more on the new drama, anyway, the romance will continue in current days.

        Yes, you’re right in your second paragraph, but, I’ll make them meet in the next chapter (whatever it takes).

        You descrived Bette and Tina in this story very well, Bette the negotiator (mediation committee) and Tina as you already found, is like a warrior.

        Yes, indeed it will be many surprises in the next chapter (stay tune ????????????).

        Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.

        P

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