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Badlands – Chapter 10
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I see the blood running from his nose and the blood in his mouth. I know for sure I’ve broken his nose. He’s moaning in pain but I still couldn’t let go of him. I felt Carmen pulling me up; but my body was heavy and hard as big block of stone at that moment. Nothing could stop when I’m in this anger frenzy… absolutely nothing.
“Shane, stop! Stop it Shane!” I keep hearing that faintly but didn’t act on it.
After several more I stopped my punches and I grabbed his collar with both of my hands; pulling me up close to face. He couldn’t mutter anything at this moment; half of his face covered with blood.
“You wanna try and hurt me?! Huh?? You wanna try and touch my girl!? You don’t know who you’re messing with punk!!” I said to him with greeted teeth and clenched jaw; but now I don’t think he even understands me at that point. I shake him with my grabbed hands to his collar. He let out a slurry moan.
I felt harder tugs from Carmen. I pushed his limp body back to the ground. I stood; looking down at his… still not satisfied with this little shit. I kicked him in the stomach hard and he crawled up into a ball.
“Get in the fucking car Shane!!” I heard Carmen yelled at me; her arms around my body… so I couldn’t use them anymore. My rage slowly slipping away.
I looked at my left and right and there was no one else on the street but us. I looked down to the drunken man again; moving slowly in same positions and I heard him crying softly. God; he would not be breathing if I was in NY right now.
“You piece of fuck… you try that again; you’re fucking dead!! You’re lucky you’re still fucking breathing…” I said to the man. I control my stance and pulled and fixed and my crinkled now blazer. I couldn’t stand the sight of this useless man; I wanted to end him right there. I felt Carmen letting go of her arms.
I got into the car and Carmen quickly made her way to the other side. I looked at the man again and he struggling to get up. “Jesus fucking Christ Shane!!! What the hell were you thinking??” She screamed out. Killing him Carmen; that is what was on my mind. I felt the cool air streaming through my hair; and the ache on my hand started coming. I looked at it and it is smeared with blood and I see a couple of new cuts.
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!