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Badlands – Chapter 10
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Then the people start to go. One by one I start seeing going out the door. With their friends and girlfriends. Sooner Alice and all came and said their byes to me and I greeted them back kindly. I ordered another beer for my self and the bartender couldn’t help but looking me up and down. Nice suit, huh?
The music died down and the Planet is officially close. Still I stood at the bar… the people know who I’m waiting so they just left me alone. Should I go help her? Yes; I think I should.
I made my way to her and my heart starts beating a whole faster. I can smell the scent of her now; she is that close. Still she doesn’t say anything. “Can I please help you…” I said; my tone was beseeching to her.
Her hands busy putting the CD’s back into their cases and she looked at me. “Sure…” She said. And so I helped without saying anything. I took of my blazer and helped her. Putting the mixer into the black hard case… I’m starting to learn the name of these things. The turn table and such. I put everything back into the black cases and I made my way down to her usual parking spot. She did the little things like the wires and such.
With the last case into the car; I made my way back into the Planet but to find she’s is already coming my way with a beer in her hand. “You were great tonight… like always…” I said; she was.
“Thanks…” She smiles half heartedly. I stopped her with my body and she looked up at me.
“I’m sorry…” I said. I heard the loud noise of a drunken man coming close to us; slurring and shouting rubbish out of his mouth; but we both ignored it. “I’ll tell you everything when we get home…” I said and her face changed. The clucking of the beer bottle from the drunk is getting on my nerves. I turned and saw a man walking in a zig zag… looking at us.
The man stopped and looked at us. “Heyy… pretty laaaydy…” He slurred at Carmen and gave a hick up at the end. I looked at the pathetic bastard and back at Carmen.
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!