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Badlands – Chapter 10
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“C’mon let’s go…” I said to Carmen and she nodded. I opened the door of my passenger seat and got in. Carmen was going to the other side; getting into the driver seat; then a reaching hand from the drunken man grabbed Carmen’s arm. “Oh… c’mon now hon…” He slurred again. Alright; I’ve had enough of this fucker.
“Hey! Get your hands off her!” I said loudly; almost leaping out of the jeep. I saw the struggling look on Carmen’s face and that angered me more. I grabbed the dudes hand off Carmen’s arm and pushed him off. He stumbled backwards but still maintains his stance.
“Alright; let’s go Shane…” Carmen said; but my eyes were still on the asshole.
“Ooohh… you’re so tough…” He slurred again and for a second I couldn’t understand him. Look at this piece of shit; he reeked with alcohol and bad odor. I saw his hands reaching into the side of his waists and I was prepared to lunge at him. But I saw what he was pulling out; a pathetic little knife… it almost looked like a butter knife.
“What the fuck is that???” I said in a laugh. I looked at Carmen and she wasn’t happy that I’m still outside of the car. “Can you believe this guy, Carm…?” I said and looked at her. “Hey, what are you gonna do asshole cut my throat with that shit in your hand??” I stirred him up.
His face changes and he took big steps towards me. One hand was a fist ball and the other tightly gripped with the ‘butter’ knife in his hand. Before he could even touch me; I slammed him down onto the ground using my arm. He fell back hard and cough at the effect. I couldn’t give a shit with this idiot anymore.
I got down to him and started punching his face. One of my hands got him in a choke hold. I was going so fast with my punches; I was in big ball of fury. This drunk little shit; this pathetic fuck was going to try and hurt me and to even try and touch Carmen; well… this is what he deserves. One blow to the face after another. I could no longer control my self; my rage was taking over me. My anger clouded my surroundings that I didn’t even hear that Carmen was shouting my name; telling me to stop.
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!