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Badlands – Chapter 10
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“Damn you for saying that…” I said coldly. I hated her at this point. Doesn’t she know that I adore her? That I actually long for her company? But here she is again; hurting me with her words.
We both sat quietly; I couldn’t look at her in the eyes. I was mad and upset at her. I’m asking for help and all she could do is making it worse somehow. I could feel her stare on me and it’s burning me inside and out.
“What do you want me to say Shane?” She stopped again and continued after a minute or two. “I can’t watch you like this…” She said.
“Like what?” I asked.
“I can’t give you the answers that you want because that would be wrong of me… I know… I know that you love her…” She said and I was struck back by her words. “But I can’t help you with this… I’m scared that she’ll become too much for you to handle…” She said and my heart nearly mellowed a little.
“Should I leave you now…” She said to me. God, how she breaks my heart. I really wonder sometimes how she became so cold.
“No, I want you to stay…” I said softly. “Jenny, I’m going to tell her…” I said.
“Okay…” She said after a while, surprisingly. Why in the world is she changing her mind now?
“O-okay?” I asked back; startled.
“There’s nothing I could do to change your mind; so I’m not going to waste my strength convincing the other…” She said with a hint of sourness. I smiled at her. She’s resisting to return the gesture but I saw the repress grin on her face.
“I’m scared something will happen to us… when other people know; things gonna turn sour…” I said.
“You bet your ass it will…” She said and I ignored her.
I didn’t what else to say. I was scared. I was scared for me and especially for Carmen. I would never forgive my self if there is something to happen to her. Because I know it is all because of me. I sat quiet until Jenny broke the silence.
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!