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Badlands – Chapter 11
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“What?? Do you want me to do a strip tease for you?” I said; raising my hands.
“Yeah…” They both answered at the same time. I snickered and shrugged them off with my hands. I got to the door and looked back at them. “Alice; never gonna happen… and Carm; maybe…” I said and winked at her and made my way down.
“So; she knows??” The funny blonde asked.
“Yeah… I told her last night…” I said; we were both looking out of the backyard. We knew where Carmen is; kneeling on the ground in the garden.
“Does she know that I know??” She asked again. Her brows furrowed; with a cup of coffee in her hand.
“No; she doesn’t know that you know…” I said and stopped my self; “Damn…”
I hissed; can’t belief I just said that in Alice’s way.
“Okay; are you gonna tell her?” She asked.
“Sure… I don’t see what the big deal is…” I shrugged.
“You don’t see what the big deal is??” she hissed at me.
“Yeah…” I looked at her.
“Dude! She’s gonna freak if you tell her that her best friend knows who you really are first and not her… and I know she’ll flip if you tell her what you did to me…” She said.
“Can you repeat that again…?” I said; she let out a frustrated sigh.
“I said… she’s gonna freak out if she knows that I… her best friend… know who you really are first, and not her…. and you know… all that flashy dagger thing in front of my face… she ain’t gonna like it…” She shrugged and took a sip.
“I didn’t do anything to you… you’re still fucking breathing… sitting next to me… drinking coffee…” I said to her. She looks at me like I’m stupid.
“Yeah; I’m well aware of that… thank you very much… look; I know you didn’t do anything to me… thank god… I wasn’t ready to see the white ligsta… I’m just saying; she’s not gonna like it…” She mentioned to me. I kept my eyes on her and thought about it for a while. Yeah; I guess I wouldn’t like if Carmen threatened Jenny or something. Okay; Carmen threatening Jenny? Seriously. I laughed it off.
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Holy shit! Gabriel, huh? Damn! I really liked this chapter and I liked the beginning of it very much.. It was nice to see things from Carmen’s POV. You should do that more. And PPS!
Oh man, you know it can’t be good if Gabe came all the way to LA. You have to post the next chapter soon!!! I need to know what happens!!! AAAHHHH…
gosh i luv ur story, its so creative and original! plz plz plz! post the next chapter, i just cant wait
oh my God… Shane’s dad… hope he will be good with Carmen… I was thinking, Alice&Jenny?? That would be really interesting… oh my god, but now Shane has to tell her dad she’s got a girlfriend!!!! Post soon, please! (Like always, you’re very QUICKLY!)
Meh ! I don’t like Gabe and right now, I don’t like Jenny very much either !
aww…i hope gabe won’t cause problems…i want carmen and shane to be happy
amazing! I can’t wait what good old Gabe is going to do…
Oh boy. The next chapter should be really interesting. Love it!
wow , that was really good.I love the Alice incident…lol . Gabe with his bodyguards…….it can’t be sth good.But isn’t it dangerous for him to come down to LA , i mean the Peabody family could have followed him and find out where Shane is? Anyway , s I said really really good( i like the way Shane explains to Carmen everything) and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!
HEY! nice chapter! and what a surprise,Gabe is in town… i think this situation is kind of dangerous… maybe he wants to take Shane with him.. mmm.. i prefer not thinking about that.Ahh, by the way, what are you talking about “my writer brain”… c’mon, you can control your brain! just a happy ending, ok? post soon!
great story – wonder what her dad is going to say… drama drama drama… awesome..looking forward to more updates of this and your other one…. please post mroe sooooooooooon xx