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Badlands – Chapter 11
“Oh… I’m learning a lot…” She said in joking manner.
“Yes, you are…” I said. We both gaze at each other like lovers do.
“Do you have a gun?” She blurted out. I did a double take and looked at her weirdly and a little concerned as well. This is a tough one. Alright; she knows this much about me… a little more wouldn’t hurt right?
“Yeah…” I nodded. Her eyes almost bulged out of her sockets. She straightens her body and with her mouth open.
“I knew it!!!” She screamed. “You have to show me…” She blurted again. She’s full of surprises.
“Uhm; no… I think… we should have breakfast…” I changed the subject. Then I put my finger to my lips again; I was hearing footsteps. If it’s Alice; she better yell out her name.
Carmen saw my motion and she stood still; the color in her face drained. I was on my animal instinct again; crawling off the bed ever so slowly. I stood at the same spot where I broke Alice’s nose. The footsteps are on the steps now.
Then it stopped. “IT’S ALICE!!! Fuck…. I forgot to yell out earlier!!” She said and the two of us let out a sigh. My tensed composure relaxed and I smiled as I heard steps continue.
I saw the door knob turns slowly and opened slowly. She came in walking jollily and don’t even remember if I would still be there; and how I could knock her out again.
“Hey Carm… Where’s Shane??” She said. Carmen smiled and pointed at her back. As she turns; I took a big step towards her so my face would be right in front of hers.
“Boo” I said as she faced me.
“Argggh!!!” She screamed at high pitched tone. Me and Carmen cracked up laughing as she her hands were covering her face.
I slap her arms and she put her hands back down again. “That’s not funny Shane! I’m totally over protective of my nose now…” She said. I snickered at her and jump on the bed again; next to Carmen.
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(18 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
Holy shit! Gabriel, huh? Damn! I really liked this chapter and I liked the beginning of it very much.. It was nice to see things from Carmen’s POV. You should do that more. And PPS!
Oh man, you know it can’t be good if Gabe came all the way to LA. You have to post the next chapter soon!!! I need to know what happens!!! AAAHHHH…
gosh i luv ur story, its so creative and original! plz plz plz! post the next chapter, i just cant wait
oh my God… Shane’s dad… hope he will be good with Carmen… I was thinking, Alice&Jenny?? That would be really interesting… oh my god, but now Shane has to tell her dad she’s got a girlfriend!!!! Post soon, please! (Like always, you’re very QUICKLY!)
Meh ! I don’t like Gabe and right now, I don’t like Jenny very much either !
aww…i hope gabe won’t cause problems…i want carmen and shane to be happy
amazing! I can’t wait what good old Gabe is going to do…
Oh boy. The next chapter should be really interesting. Love it!
wow , that was really good.I love the Alice incident…lol . Gabe with his bodyguards…….it can’t be sth good.But isn’t it dangerous for him to come down to LA , i mean the Peabody family could have followed him and find out where Shane is? Anyway , s I said really really good( i like the way Shane explains to Carmen everything) and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!
HEY! nice chapter! and what a surprise,Gabe is in town… i think this situation is kind of dangerous… maybe he wants to take Shane with him.. mmm.. i prefer not thinking about that.Ahh, by the way, what are you talking about “my writer brain”… c’mon, you can control your brain! just a happy ending, ok? post soon!
great story – wonder what her dad is going to say… drama drama drama… awesome..looking forward to more updates of this and your other one…. please post mroe sooooooooooon xx