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    Before the Fall – Four

    Story written on November 17, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    Helena didn’t know what to say for a moment. This was not the first time Kit’s pessimistic attitude had taken her aback, but it had been a while since she’d been in Kit’s presence and she’d forgotten how Kit was.

    She mentally cringed as she recalled the last time she’d seen Kit. It had not been a pleasant visit then either.

    She blinked the memories away and sighed.

    “Bette’s too stubborn to die,” Helena muttered as she finally looked away from Kit and out the window at the cars speeding by.

    “No one’s too stubborn to die, Helena. Everyone dies.”

    Helena grimaced and shifted closer to the door.

    “Well don’t say anything like that around the girls’, Kit. We’re going to have to think positive about this.”

    Kit sighed then.

    “I guess she was drinking?” Kit asked hesitantly.

    Helena’s whole body tensed up as she registered Kit’s question. Had Bette been drinking? Had she gotten in an accident after she’d spoken to her? Had she pushed Bette so far over the edge she’d gone out drunk and maybe even tried to kill herself?

    Panic held her in its grip for one long minute.

    But then reason returned.

    No one made Bette do anything she didn’t want to do. And there was no way she could have pushed Bette too far. If so that time would have come years ago.

    Maybe Bette had been drinking but surely it had nothing to do with her.

    Hopefully she’d be able to leave soon.

    The longer she stayed here the worse it would be once she left here.

    Bette just had to be okay.

    Bette had to be okay so that she could leave.

    “I don’t know. It’s possible,” Helena said at last.

    “I thought maybe… but I guess she did. It’s a curse you know. Suffering and dying. Comes from my daddy’s side.”

    Kit often lost her train of thought and picked up in the middle of another thought. Helena was so used to it that it didn’t bother her anymore.

    Though she was used to it she hadn’t a clue as to what Kit was referring to, but made a noise of agreement anyways.

    The ride to Cedars-Sinai was relatively quick due to the surprisingly lack of traffic.

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    3. Just caught up with your story! This is amazing stuff babe! And you know what I like about it the best? The bloody long chapters!!! :) Despite this I still agree with the people who seem to still think it’s too short….I’m so feeling it for Helena…poor thing! I like you character depictions babe…PPS ok :)

    5. Too short Speedy. Please post soon. Why are the girls, Shane, so mad at Helena? Why should Helena stay around an unrequited(sp) love? Will you fill in some of the blanks over the past five years since the love confession and the move? Please post soon.

    7. Good God, I didnt see THAT coming! Its a tad sad to see Helena on the receiving on of so much resentment, and with this new turn, sheesh! poor Helena! Anyhoo, brilliant writing indeed. Thanks for this and do post soon!

    10. Wow, Speed Racer ! How thrilling is this story ?!! I think I need to breathe too now… DRAMA ! DRAMA ! DRAMA ! I have no idea where you’re going to take us with this, but I simply love it, love it, love it ! And you’re such a fantaaaastic author ! I just can’t wait for your next chapter. Please, keep sharing your tremendous talent… Thanks a lot !

    11. WOW. Looks like something is going to hit the fan and it not what I think it is. Everyone seen so angry with Helena now how will the feel? Very bitter. thanks

    14. So now i’m all caught up i just have to say what a bloody great writer you are! Seriously, just brilliant, completely loving this story, waiting anxiously for more! Thank you.

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