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    Before the Fall – Four

    Story written on November 17, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    Helena took Kit’s arm as they entered the hospital. She wanted to keep her close by just in case Kit decided to bolt, and she knew Kit needed the support.

    They found Alice first on her way back from the vending area with two cups of coffee in her hands.

    She stopped in the middle of the hallway and stared at them both. She looked for a moment like she was going to drop the coffee and run to them.

    “Alice,” Helena said tremulously her grip tightening involuntarily on Kit’s arm.

    “I am so fucking glad to see you,” Alice said with a wobbly smile that dissolved into a sob.

    Helena let go of Kit and hurried to Alice.

    “Don’t cry, Alice.”

    Helena wrapped her arm around Alice’s shoulders and steered her towards Kit.

    “It’s bad,” Alice said sniffling glancing at Kit as she said this.

    “I knew it,” Kit whispered harshly.

    “Where are the others?” Helena asked gently as she took one of the drinks from Alice and handed it to Kit. She took the other one herself.

    “They’re in the waiting room. Down the hall. I didn’t mean to freak out like that. Sorry.”

    “Don’t be sorry,” Helena murmured and pulled Alice closer to her.

    They walked down the hall in silence each lost in their own thoughts.

    She really hadn’t allowed herself to think that it could be that bad. She couldn’t think like that, but now being here and seeing Alice’s reaction she couldn’t ignore the facts.

    They found Shane, Dana, Carmen, and Lara seated in the waiting room.

    Shane got to her feet as soon as she spotted them followed by Dana.

    “You came ” Dana exclaimed happily as she came forward and threw her arms around both Alice and Helena.

    “Of course I came,” Helena said with a small smile.

    “Dane, you’re choking me,” Alice said breathlessly.

    Sheepishly Dana stepped back and grinned at them. She turned to Kit and awkwardly offered her a hug as well.

    Helena stood feeling more than a little awkward as Shane regarded her silently.

    “We really weren’t sure if you’d come,” Shane said softly shifting on her feet and shoving her hands into her jean’s pockets.

    Helena nodded.

    She supposed she should have expected something like this. She hadn’t been back to Los Angeles in three months.

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    3. Just caught up with your story! This is amazing stuff babe! And you know what I like about it the best? The bloody long chapters!!! :) Despite this I still agree with the people who seem to still think it’s too short….I’m so feeling it for Helena…poor thing! I like you character depictions babe…PPS ok :)

    5. Too short Speedy. Please post soon. Why are the girls, Shane, so mad at Helena? Why should Helena stay around an unrequited(sp) love? Will you fill in some of the blanks over the past five years since the love confession and the move? Please post soon.

    7. Good God, I didnt see THAT coming! Its a tad sad to see Helena on the receiving on of so much resentment, and with this new turn, sheesh! poor Helena! Anyhoo, brilliant writing indeed. Thanks for this and do post soon!

    10. Wow, Speed Racer ! How thrilling is this story ?!! I think I need to breathe too now… DRAMA ! DRAMA ! DRAMA ! I have no idea where you’re going to take us with this, but I simply love it, love it, love it ! And you’re such a fantaaaastic author ! I just can’t wait for your next chapter. Please, keep sharing your tremendous talent… Thanks a lot !

    11. WOW. Looks like something is going to hit the fan and it not what I think it is. Everyone seen so angry with Helena now how will the feel? Very bitter. thanks

    14. So now i’m all caught up i just have to say what a bloody great writer you are! Seriously, just brilliant, completely loving this story, waiting anxiously for more! Thank you.

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