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    Before the Fall – Four

    Story written on November 17, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    She’d spoken to her friends a few times but had not made the effort to do it on a regular basis. She really had been trying to move on and that meant distancing herself from the group as a whole not just Bette.

    “I’m not so callous,” Helena said stiffly.

    “Well thanks for coming,” Shane said just as stiffly and sat back down.

    Helena nodded.

    “I believe I have someone’s coffee,” she said after a beat.

    “Hey Helena. Kit, hi,” Laura said as she rose to her feet and took the cup from Helena’s hand. She gave her a one armed hug. Then turned to Kit.

    Carmen rose to her feet too and gave Kit a quick hug taking her coffee and nodded to Helena.

    Helena sighed to herself and took a seat against the wall facing the women.

    “How is she?” Helena asked.

    “Well she’s in surgery right now,” Alice said bluntly.

    Helena glanced at the floor and kept her gaze there.

    “What for? How the hell did this happen?” Kit demanded. “And who gave them permission to perform surgery? I’m her only next of kin it should have been me.”

    Alice held up a hand.

    “Whoa. Kit you live in Philly, okay? What good would you be living that far away? Bette gave me power of attorney, okay? That way if she needed surgery, which she did, we wouldn’t have to wait for you to get in from Philly. As for what happened I don’t know. She and some guy got into an accident earlier in the morning. It was… Apparently the guy drove head long into the driver’s side and Bette took the brunt of it.”

    “And the surgery she needed,” Shane continued as Alice fell silent. “She’s got some broken bones, but they were worried about the impact on her brain. They’re doing surgery to relieve some of the swelling around her brain. They’ve been at it for awhile now.”

    “What sort of broken bones?” Helena asked.

    “Well they said she fractured her…um left tibia. And they think she fractured her right wrist too, and maybe some ribs,” Shane said.

    “Was she drinking?” Kit asked abruptly. “Was she drivin’ around drunk? Is she going to be arrested?”

    “Kit calm down,” Helena said quickly seeing how upset Kit was becoming.

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    3. Just caught up with your story! This is amazing stuff babe! And you know what I like about it the best? The bloody long chapters!!! :) Despite this I still agree with the people who seem to still think it’s too short….I’m so feeling it for Helena…poor thing! I like you character depictions babe…PPS ok :)

    5. Too short Speedy. Please post soon. Why are the girls, Shane, so mad at Helena? Why should Helena stay around an unrequited(sp) love? Will you fill in some of the blanks over the past five years since the love confession and the move? Please post soon.

    7. Good God, I didnt see THAT coming! Its a tad sad to see Helena on the receiving on of so much resentment, and with this new turn, sheesh! poor Helena! Anyhoo, brilliant writing indeed. Thanks for this and do post soon!

    10. Wow, Speed Racer ! How thrilling is this story ?!! I think I need to breathe too now… DRAMA ! DRAMA ! DRAMA ! I have no idea where you’re going to take us with this, but I simply love it, love it, love it ! And you’re such a fantaaaastic author ! I just can’t wait for your next chapter. Please, keep sharing your tremendous talent… Thanks a lot !

    11. WOW. Looks like something is going to hit the fan and it not what I think it is. Everyone seen so angry with Helena now how will the feel? Very bitter. thanks

    14. So now i’m all caught up i just have to say what a bloody great writer you are! Seriously, just brilliant, completely loving this story, waiting anxiously for more! Thank you.

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