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    Bette and Tina take time to process – Chapter 16

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    Tina: “That fucking party made me so depressed; now we have to wait a whole month before another insemination.”
    Dana: “At least you have somebody to wait with; at least there’s somebody in bed next to you when you wake up in the morning you know?”

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    “Tee even though you couldn’t see the humor in it at the time our donor search was a comedy of errors.”

    Jean Paul: “I could do this yes.”

    Bette: “And you have no problem with the concept of bringing a child into the world and having absolutely no say as to how he or she is raised?”

    Jean Paul: “I must have children all over the world now why would I have a problem with this one? I will sign the donor’s contract now.”

    Tina: “Jean Paul I don’t mean to be rude or anything but do you have any um … medical problems … any history of family illnesses or …”

    Jean Paul: “Health is excellent with the Chamois family.”

    Bette: “Jean Paul I know you say you’re comfortable with all this but I just want you to think about it for a minute.”

    Jean Paul: “Where is this contract?”

    Bette hands Jean Paul the contract and he reads it getting ready to sign.

    Jean Paul: “Mm-hmm and when we do this?”

    Bette: “When Tina is next ovulating.”

    Jean Paul: “You want to do this here in my bed? Or you want me to come to you?”

    Bette and Tina look at each other not quite sure what he is asking.

    Bette: “Um … um wherever you want… we’ll give you a sterile cup. I mean or if you prefer … if you need your privacy I can come back later after you’ve finished and pick it up.”

    Jean Paul: “Cup what is this cup?”

    Tina: “Oh it’s a specimen cup. You ejaculate into it.”

    Jean Paul: “Oh no no no we don’t do that way, we do as a man and a woman.”

    Bette: “Jean Paul I’m sorry. I just thought you understood that …”

    Jean Paul: “Do you want it to be all three? Because that would be fine; it is going to be your baby too.”

    Bette: “No.”

    Jean Paul: “No? Just me and her the; Bon.”

    Comments

    1. BETTE would get TINA warmed up time after time only to pump the brakes when TINA wa ready to make love.DAN was a counselor yet BETTE felt they didn’t need one.BOTH BETTE/TINA was to wrapped up in their own problems to see that this way of thinking was THE PROBLEM .Looking for donors it became what ever the other one wanted not what THEY wanted.BETTE found the donor,BETTE picks the guy to go home with them,BETTE finds the second donor all her choices yet TINA just went along.TINA confides in friends when she should talk to BETTE,TINA inseminates herself ,TINA has a reality check when MARCUS turns out to be black.To share all these hidden truths between them and at the end of the day realizes that there is still enough of a spark to ignite the sexual urges for each other gives them hope that this too can be put in the category of what not to do when planning a baby.Let the love they know is there shine thru.Best quote of this ”ze penis,ze pussy ,ze baby” that was one for the history books.pps thanks

      • dunnthat. Thank you for commenting and providing great insight. The point of rehashing all this history is to understand, forgive, and move on. Most importantly to learn from mistakes, pay attention to the warning signs, and not repeat bad behaviours. They are making good progress emotionally and eventually the physical relationship will resume.

    2. Like what mscully said one step at a time, they already have talked much about a lot of their problems and it was very wise to ask Paul for his insight when they were not able to do that by them selves, but they are making progress.

      The flashback that Bette came home earlier to spend time with Tina, trying to reconnect, and that Tina went to the gym, was for me absolutely heart breaking, it showed how disconnect they were.

      I didn’t like the first few chapters, but Bat, you have defiantly my attention again.
      Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

      • Bibi28 – thank you for sticking with the story. I know it was a rough beginning and I really appreciate that you gave it chance. Bette and Tina are going to progress by leaps and bounds before the end of this retreat.

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