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    Bette and Tina take time to process – Chapter 16

    Instructor: “Tina hi, what are you doing here?”

    Tina: “I’m just exorcising some demons.”

    Instructor: “You look really good.”

    Tina: “I do?”

    Tina is acting totally oblivious to the fact that the woman is checking her out as she freely runs her hands along Tina’s back and hips.

    Instructor: “Yeah … you’re getting great definition right here … your latissimus dorsi they’re just starting to pop. Are you getting a good stretch in your hip flexors?”

    Finally Tina gets it and puts on her sweat shirt and picks up her things.

    Tina: “I’ve got to go. Bette came home just to be with me and I don’t know what I was thinking.”<br />

    Instructor: “Tina I’m starting to see some private clients very selectively. Let me know if you’re interested.”

    Tina: “Yeah I will.”

    ***

    Bette: “Look if you really want to go back to Dan Foxworthy that’s fine by me.”

    Tina: “I’ll make an appointment. Tell me when you’re free.”

    Bette: “Just make the appointment and tell me when it is.”

    Tina: “Tomorrow at 3:15pm. I was going to see him by myself but I’d rather you come with me.”

    Bette looks at Tina incredulously gets up and walks away. Tina looks totally dejected.

    ***

    Tina: “She said she was coming; it was kind of last minute though.”

    Dan: “So you think she might not be showing up?”

    Tina throws her hands in the air.

    Tina: “I don’t know.”

    Dan: “Maybe we should spend a little time talking about you.”

    Just then Bette walks in looking very excited and totally ignoring Dan as she shares her news with Tina.

    Bette: “I’m sorry I’m late but I have a really good excuse so don’t make this easy on me … I have found the perfect donor.”

    Tina: “Who?”

    Bette: “Marcus Allenwood. He’s an artist and he’s just been selected for the next Whitney Biennial. I had a serious conversation with him.”

    Tina: “But I’ve never met him.”

    Bette: “No but I know exactly what you and I are looking for and he is so perfect and he even has a kid so we know he can get someone pregnant.”

    Tina: “I never met him.”

    Bette: “You will meet him tomorrow, he’s coming by the house at 11:00am and you’re taking him to the cryobank. He’s leaving the next day for Cologne. He’s in a group show.”

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    1. BETTE would get TINA warmed up time after time only to pump the brakes when TINA wa ready to make love.DAN was a counselor yet BETTE felt they didn’t need one.BOTH BETTE/TINA was to wrapped up in their own problems to see that this way of thinking was THE PROBLEM .Looking for donors it became what ever the other one wanted not what THEY wanted.BETTE found the donor,BETTE picks the guy to go home with them,BETTE finds the second donor all her choices yet TINA just went along.TINA confides in friends when she should talk to BETTE,TINA inseminates herself ,TINA has a reality check when MARCUS turns out to be black.To share all these hidden truths between them and at the end of the day realizes that there is still enough of a spark to ignite the sexual urges for each other gives them hope that this too can be put in the category of what not to do when planning a baby.Let the love they know is there shine thru.Best quote of this ”ze penis,ze pussy ,ze baby” that was one for the history books.pps thanks

      • dunnthat. Thank you for commenting and providing great insight. The point of rehashing all this history is to understand, forgive, and move on. Most importantly to learn from mistakes, pay attention to the warning signs, and not repeat bad behaviours. They are making good progress emotionally and eventually the physical relationship will resume.

    2. Like what mscully said one step at a time, they already have talked much about a lot of their problems and it was very wise to ask Paul for his insight when they were not able to do that by them selves, but they are making progress.

      The flashback that Bette came home earlier to spend time with Tina, trying to reconnect, and that Tina went to the gym, was for me absolutely heart breaking, it showed how disconnect they were.

      I didn’t like the first few chapters, but Bat, you have defiantly my attention again.
      Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

      • Bibi28 – thank you for sticking with the story. I know it was a rough beginning and I really appreciate that you gave it chance. Bette and Tina are going to progress by leaps and bounds before the end of this retreat.

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