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    Bette Forgets 12

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Bette identifies Gracy and then something weird happens.

    I come back to awareness and realize I am sitting in one of the chairs with Tina and Hallows hovering over me. I look up at them.

    Im okay, I manage to say holding up my bandaged hands

    Memory, Tina asks

    I nod my head and look up to see Hallows frowning at this.

    I get this pain in my head when certain memories return.

    Im sorry to hear that, he speaks sincerely

    Thank you.

    I dont mean to rush you but is the man that attacked you in there, he indicates the room

    I hesitate, Number five.

    *Hallows*

    I do my best to not jump up and down at this and shout from the rooftops that weve finally gotten a break! Instead I look at number five, Tom Gracy and smile.

    Are you sure, I ask Bette to cover my bases

    She glances at Gracy with an unreadable expression and nods her head, Thats him.

    *Tom Gracy*

    I know why Im in this line up. She survived. Bette. Inwardly I thank whoever I can think of about this. I didnt want her to die. Im glad that shes alive and apparently well enough to come to the police station to identify me. I dont mind this. I deserve whatever I get, truly.

    I feel her near. She must be on the other side of the glass. I was with my buddies when we decided to attack this gentle soul, I was happy to show her a lesson.

    I was delusional.

    I realize now the error of my ways. This woman loves with everything that she is, doesnt matter if it is male or female, they get her all. I know this because in some of her less lucid moments she would call out for her love, her heart; Tina. This angered my buddies even more but it began to eat away at me.

    I was a monster.

    I had become a goddamned monster and I needed to pay for it. I convinced those evil men I called friends to let her go, to leave her where people were sure to find her but it already be to late. I cant believe they agreed to it. I cant believe they let me take her by myself.

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    8. I loved every word. It was so moving but hard to describe. Love, hate and forgiveness are the thoughts that come to mind. Thank you ! You are the best writer. Hands down!

    9. You should be so so proud – this was awesome. I work with a lot of survivors of violence and the strength you portray is real as well as the vulnerability. Thanks for doing such a fabulous job.

    11. reba_kathy – wow. This must have taken alot out of you. I was crying and so thankful you saved me with your last line. That was a nice touch.

      Thanks for spending the time and energy for this chapter. I have read about this “bond” between victim and suspect; you captured very well.

      I can’t wait for you to continue this story, hopefully with happier moments?!

    13. You have a lot to be proud of this is excellent story telling thanks for sharing this well written great story. Rest up we are anxiously waiting for more.

    17. If that section was this hard for me to read, I can’t even imagine how you managed to write it. Weird stuff but utterly intriguing. The different points of view weave together so nicely to advance the story. I’m so loving your work! Thank you.

    18. Wonderful! You should be proud. This was a great chapter and I loved that you left on a lite note. This story is just great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    20. Finally an update:D yay *bounces around*
      I do understand Bettes move with Gracey, even tho there is still this tiny thought that says: WTF?..amazing story. i am already addicted, pls more very soon!

    25. well well Raba…you sure know how to give us a smile in the end.
      This is so wonderfull a story – can´t wait for an update. Please let us have some more very soon

    26. Your Bette is so interesting as she has this surreal quality about her. Maybe it’s from her near life experience which allows her a different reality but whatever it is I love it thanks.

    28. Wow, that was some intense moments between Bette and Gracy (that is his name, right? oh well.) It’s good though, no one really understands what someone goes thru something as dramatic as being violated and closed to death. I was happy for the way Bette handled it, though. Great writing, and insight.

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