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    Bette Forgets 12

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Bette identifies Gracy and then something weird happens.

    They left me in that house and told me where they were going to be and for me to meet them.

    I unshackled her, Bette, and dressed her in some new clothing and took her back to her car making sure to be scene by the cameras I knew were there. I went back to the evil and waited with them. They were so gleeful about what they had done, this sickened me.

    For three months we stayed hidden, out of view and watched as Bette got better, the reward for our heads grew higher, and my threshold for their evil reached its limit. When I heard that Bette was awake I made a decision. One I stick to even today.

    I left that evil and came back here. I went where I was sure to be seen. What a stroke of luck it was to be captured by the lead detective in Bettes case. I was happy to be caught.

    Finally this would be coming to an end. They tried to get the whereabouts of my buddies out of me but I refused. I told them the only way I would give them up was to see Bette, just for a moment and I would willingly give them anything that they asked of me. Anything.

    Detective Hallows said no at first. He said it was to much for Bette to handle in her fragile state and of this I agreed, but I still wanted…needed to see her for myself and know that she was alive and that shed be okay. I thought I watched her die when one of the spawns of Satan slit her throat, her beautiful graceful throat.

    I bandaged it as tightly as I could to stop the bleeding. The evil spawn had done this while I went to get the new clothes for Bette. They had tried to kill her instead of letting her go. Upon seeing that she was still alive after these terrible actions they fled into the night, telling me to dump her and meet them.

    Dimly Im aware of the other men being cleared out of the room and I stand in here alone. I know that shes coming. I feel it and I smile.

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    8. I loved every word. It was so moving but hard to describe. Love, hate and forgiveness are the thoughts that come to mind. Thank you ! You are the best writer. Hands down!

    9. You should be so so proud – this was awesome. I work with a lot of survivors of violence and the strength you portray is real as well as the vulnerability. Thanks for doing such a fabulous job.

    11. reba_kathy – wow. This must have taken alot out of you. I was crying and so thankful you saved me with your last line. That was a nice touch.

      Thanks for spending the time and energy for this chapter. I have read about this “bond” between victim and suspect; you captured very well.

      I can’t wait for you to continue this story, hopefully with happier moments?!

    13. You have a lot to be proud of this is excellent story telling thanks for sharing this well written great story. Rest up we are anxiously waiting for more.

    17. If that section was this hard for me to read, I can’t even imagine how you managed to write it. Weird stuff but utterly intriguing. The different points of view weave together so nicely to advance the story. I’m so loving your work! Thank you.

    18. Wonderful! You should be proud. This was a great chapter and I loved that you left on a lite note. This story is just great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    20. Finally an update:D yay *bounces around*
      I do understand Bettes move with Gracey, even tho there is still this tiny thought that says: WTF?..amazing story. i am already addicted, pls more very soon!

    25. well well Raba…you sure know how to give us a smile in the end.
      This is so wonderfull a story – can´t wait for an update. Please let us have some more very soon

    26. Your Bette is so interesting as she has this surreal quality about her. Maybe it’s from her near life experience which allows her a different reality but whatever it is I love it thanks.

    28. Wow, that was some intense moments between Bette and Gracy (that is his name, right? oh well.) It’s good though, no one really understands what someone goes thru something as dramatic as being violated and closed to death. I was happy for the way Bette handled it, though. Great writing, and insight.

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