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    Bette Forgets 14

    Story written on April 15, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53241
    Author Notes:

    More therapy and Bette remembers something she wishes she could forget. (Everyone now…Dun…dun…dunnnnnnnnn!)

    Tell me what was going through your head when you smashed the mirror.

    What was going through me head when I smashed the mirror. I sigh softly at this. There were a lot of things going through my head when I smashed the mirror.

    I saw a stranger looking back out at me. I couldnt bear to look this stranger in the eye. Shed been through so much pain and suffering. Thats when I smashed the mirror.

    She nodded thoughtfully at this, You felt empathy for this stranger?

    Yes, I mean I know its me and all. I guess that would mean I feel sorry for myself. I suppose that I do.

    What happened after you left the hospital yesterday?

    We went to the police station to identify one of the guys that attacked me.

    By we you mean yourself and Tina?

    Yes, my wife Tina and I went to the police station after Detective Hallows called and asked for us to come down.

    Did you identify the man that attacked you?

    Yes.

    What happened during this time?

    I had a flashback of the attack.

    Tell me about it.

    I knew this was going to be hard. Im going to have to tell this woman about things that I remember. I dont want to remember things that I remember.

    I remember how I was shackled in this basementI suppose. My hands were above my head and Id lost all feeling in them by this time. I was naked and cold and in pain. I heard the door to this basement creak open and down walks Gracy.

    This was the man that was caught?

    Yes, he comes over to me and just stares.

    He didnt say anything to you?
    No, I thought this was some psychological test or something. The staring just got too much for me and I asked him what he was staring at.

    What did he say?

    He asked why.

    Why what?

    Why I was a *****.

    What was your response?

    That it was who I am.

    She scribbles some more in her folder.

    Then he did something that surprised me, I went on without being prompted, He told me that he was trying to convince the other two men to let me go.

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    6. You must have read my mind because I was hoping you would post this one. Great as always and I felt I was a witness to her horrible crime. Please continue!

    9. THE POWER OF THIS CHAPTER WAS SO STRONG. I FELT SO MUCH FOR BETTE LIKE I WAS THERE …LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS CHAPTER INCREDIBLE JOB PLEASE POST SOON…..

    11. Girl, this chapter was awesome. And yes, you really were waxing poetic on this one. It was filled so much imagery. It’s sad for bette, but it’s really good writing. Loved this part:

      Slowly opening my eyes I lift my head to stare up at him and this is when I see the glint of metal. This evil held a blade of six inches of twisted steel that reflected off what little light shown in my hell. Looking up in his eyes of fire I knew that I would not be getting out of here. Sending off the last of my hopes and dreams for this life I welcomed the eternal fortitude of fate.

      Can’t wait for your next post!

    12. I’m glad you wrote, “I hope you liked” and not “I hope you enjoyed,” because that was so intense that my heart is racing and I’m shaking. Oh my God, rk1, this writing is amazing. The descriptive language kicks ass (how’s that for inarticulate?!) and the dialogue continues to move the story so incredibly well. Your stories engage me so completely; thank you so much for bringing such a broad range of emotions and experiences to this work. Pat yourself on the back for me, okay? Thanks.

    14. One word to describe this chapter is…DEEP. It just cuts through the core. I loved it…so much emotions…the way you described the cutting of Bette’s throat…idk…it’s like I was there, I felt her pain. Truly poetic…wonderful chapter Reba, thank you. Please update soon;)

    18. I was just catching up and wow what a great story you have going here and you tell it so well. Thanks I can’t believe you Bette she is sooooo brave. THanks

    20. This was an incredible awesome chapter, love it. I’m so glad the cops catch these 2 jackass and can’t wait to see they going hell. Bette remember some of horrible stuff and I feel so bad for her. Post soon, thank you! Excellent chapter!

    23. “Waxing poetic” — indeed! Your use of imagery, very well done. It was more like watching your story unfold, then actually reading. Great Job! Thank you.

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