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    Bette Forgets 14

    Story written on April 15, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53241
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    More therapy and Bette remembers something she wishes she could forget. (Everyone now…Dun…dun…dunnnnnnnnn!)

    Ill admit even now I get a weird sense of giddiness by seeing the stunned expression on the face of the woman before me. Im not sure why surprising a psychiatrist makes me feel that way. Regardless her look of surprise was quickly masked.

    He was going to convince the other two cohorts to let you go?

    Yes, and he did convince them.

    None of this has been released in the news, she responds with in an even tone

    Thats because the police didnt want to tip off the other guys that they had Gracy. During my visit to him he told the police where they could find these men.

    That must have been I relief to you.

    Immensely.

    Did anything else happen during this visit?

    I had a little chat with Gracy.

    You did? What did you talk about?

    Mostly about how he was sorry and I knew that and he was going to fry and he accepted that and how he was going to have a son and

    Woah, wait hes going to have a son. I didnt think you knew the ***** or parentage of your child yet.

    I dont know know but I know, I remark nodding my head

    I see Williams scratch the side of her neck and turn her attention back to me, Explain this to me.

    I shrug at this point, I cant really explain how I knowI just do.

    *Outside Deer Lake, California*
    *Three Hours Earlier*

    Men and woman in black clothing with rifles and glocks crept slowly up to the property that was housing Arturo Vircome and Wendell Meyers. They had waited till night fall to make their move. Benjamin Hallows smiled a smile that bore his teeth and held up three fingers counting down and then gave the go signal. Simultaneously all entrances to the cabin were kicked open and in rushed the police from two different counties. The two men in question had been in the living room watching a racy movie when they were surrounded by the men and woman of the Los Angeles Police Department and those of the Deer Lake Police Department.

    Hallows went over to them, I am very happy to say that you have the right to remain silent

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    6. You must have read my mind because I was hoping you would post this one. Great as always and I felt I was a witness to her horrible crime. Please continue!

    9. THE POWER OF THIS CHAPTER WAS SO STRONG. I FELT SO MUCH FOR BETTE LIKE I WAS THERE …LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS CHAPTER INCREDIBLE JOB PLEASE POST SOON…..

    11. Girl, this chapter was awesome. And yes, you really were waxing poetic on this one. It was filled so much imagery. It’s sad for bette, but it’s really good writing. Loved this part:

      Slowly opening my eyes I lift my head to stare up at him and this is when I see the glint of metal. This evil held a blade of six inches of twisted steel that reflected off what little light shown in my hell. Looking up in his eyes of fire I knew that I would not be getting out of here. Sending off the last of my hopes and dreams for this life I welcomed the eternal fortitude of fate.

      Can’t wait for your next post!

    12. I’m glad you wrote, “I hope you liked” and not “I hope you enjoyed,” because that was so intense that my heart is racing and I’m shaking. Oh my God, rk1, this writing is amazing. The descriptive language kicks ass (how’s that for inarticulate?!) and the dialogue continues to move the story so incredibly well. Your stories engage me so completely; thank you so much for bringing such a broad range of emotions and experiences to this work. Pat yourself on the back for me, okay? Thanks.

    14. One word to describe this chapter is…DEEP. It just cuts through the core. I loved it…so much emotions…the way you described the cutting of Bette’s throat…idk…it’s like I was there, I felt her pain. Truly poetic…wonderful chapter Reba, thank you. Please update soon;)

    18. I was just catching up and wow what a great story you have going here and you tell it so well. Thanks I can’t believe you Bette she is sooooo brave. THanks

    20. This was an incredible awesome chapter, love it. I’m so glad the cops catch these 2 jackass and can’t wait to see they going hell. Bette remember some of horrible stuff and I feel so bad for her. Post soon, thank you! Excellent chapter!

    23. “Waxing poetic” — indeed! Your use of imagery, very well done. It was more like watching your story unfold, then actually reading. Great Job! Thank you.

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