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Bette Forgets 34
Did she send you because…
Bette interrupts Maureen, Tina doesnt know Im here. If she did shed be very angry with me, she smiles slightly
And why is that, I ask
She has given up on the two of you ever coming around, says Bette
I inwardly flinch at this.
Also the fact that Im supposed to be on bed rest.
Tough pregnancy, Maureen asks
The worst, Bette smiles, But Im not here to talk about my pregnancy, at least not directly.
You and Christina are still together then I take it, I say
Bette turns her attention to me, Yes sir. Weve been together going on nine years now.
I notice that you wear a wedding ring, says Maureen
Bette glances down at her ring and smiles a beautiful smile, Yes, I do. We had a commitment ceremony just over eight years ago.
Youre married.
Yes.
Not legally though, I say
Bette narrows her eyes slightly at this, In every way that counts.
Touche.
Youve been happy, I ask, In your supposed marriage?
She raised an eyebrow at this, Yes, weve been happy. Weve had our rocky moments but who doesnt in a marriage?
She made another good point I begrudgingly admit to myself.
What are you hoping to accomplish by coming here, Maureen asks
Bette turns to Maureen and smiles ever so slightly, I want to give Tina her family back.
We havent spoken to her in a long time, Maureen says, Were not going to change our views.
Why?
What do you mean why, asks Maureen sitting up straighter
Tina is your daughter yes?
Yes.
And you love her?
Of course we love her, Maureen exclaims
You could have fooled me, says Bette making her point without making it, You kicked your only daughter, the daughter you claim to love because she fell in love with me.
I can see Bettes eyes shining with unshed tears.
I would be nowhere without her love, she says softly
Maureen glances at me as I glance at her. Bette continues on.
I mean I may not remember all of our life together, but I dont doubt her love for me and I know my love for her grows every day that I live.
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(36 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
yes please tell us..what it is..great chapter
Wow that was so good. Bette is fearless not even selfrighteous parents can stand in her way. Thanks
Just when your start getting more into the writing, the end draws near…..This story is so addictive and the drama is unreal. Wonderful writing…Bette’s words are extremely powerful in regards to forgiveness. BRAVO for you and being that wise woman exuding through one Ms. Bette Porter.
Holly shit, I have to tell you after reading the last 2 chapter, your writing abillty has grown so much, you can deliver these powerful stories that just are so heartfelt. Was that dana telling her favor comment for me, or maybe I’m just hoping it was for me, but either way I kinda want to know so I will try to be good, but theres no promise
Holey moley! That was awesome. Just the right amount of angst mixed with hope.
Absolutely beautiful! Please, please tell us what Dana owes Bette!
Reba,
Totally agree with all the comments. You have completely pulled these last two chapters outta of the bage and stunned all your fan.
Bloddy brilliant.
The way in which you have conveyed Tina’s parents is masterful.
More please, real soon.
A Loyal fan.
Reba… come on tell us…we are all good girls…cough cough… love this i love how bette got tina’s parents to agree…ok please we need you to continue…
I just caught up again. You are doing a fantastic job. I wonder why Dana owes Bette…
Yes please tell. Great chapter, please post soon
I like the way you have structured thsi story – flashbacks, first person PoV etc. It’s also fun to see this alternate Bette. MUCH more relaxed that TV control freak Bette (much as we love her!!)
Great chapter.. sorry i’m late reading. been busy.
This was an amazing chapter. I do not comment much but I had to for this one. Keep up the great work.
Hmmmmmmmmm…..what constitutes being bad?? Thanks for another great chapter. Bette is so calm and loving now. This is a nice side of her.
K
That was perfect. I just love your Bette. Wonderful chapter!
Karli’s stories make me a happy girl. :)
Great chapter. Bette did a wonderful job about Tina’s parents. Ok please post soon, thanks!