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    Bette Forgets 34

    Story written on June 14, 2005 by rebakathy.
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    Mystery Thursday Revealed
    Part 2: The Parents

    Thats an enigmatic response if I ever heard one. Im about to say more when my wife Maureen comes up to my side.

    Who are you my dear?

    We hadnt gotten to introductions just yet, I say to Maureen

    Im…

    I know who you are, says the mysterious stranger, I came to talk to you about your daughter.

    I take in a breath at this, I dont have a daughter.

    The woman before me frowns at this and raises an eyebrow, You dont have a daughter by the name of Christina Kennard whom you threw out of your lives when she told you that she was in love with another woman?

    What business is this of yours, I ask her

    Im that woman that your daughter fell in love with all those years ago.

    There is silence after this statement.

    We have nothing to say to you, I start closing the door

    It stopped by this woman grabbing the door and pushing it back open. Strong this one.

    Then listen.

    Maureen was about to say something to this woman at her rudeness but I raised a hand. I was impressed by this womans boldness.

    We will listen to you. I cant promise that well do anything.

    She raises an eyebrow and inclines her head slightly, Thats all that I ask.

    Please come in, I say beckoning her in

    She turns to the car that is parked out in front of the house and waves to two people within. Neither of them is Christina. We all adjourn to the living room where this woman sits down with a sigh.

    When are you due, I ask as my curiosity has taken over

    A couple of weeks, she says

    Who are you, Maureen asks from her place next to me

    Maureen always was one not to beat around the bush

    Bette Porter, says the woman before us

    Now why does that name sound familiar. More familiar then her being the one that my one and only daughter said she was leaving the best man that could have happened to her for?

    Why are you here Bette, Maureen asks

    Bette takes in a breath, I wanted…needed to talk with you about Tina.

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    3. Just when your start getting more into the writing, the end draws near…..This story is so addictive and the drama is unreal. Wonderful writing…Bette’s words are extremely powerful in regards to forgiveness. BRAVO for you and being that wise woman exuding through one Ms. Bette Porter.

    4. Holly shit, I have to tell you after reading the last 2 chapter, your writing abillty has grown so much, you can deliver these powerful stories that just are so heartfelt. Was that dana telling her favor comment for me, or maybe I’m just hoping it was for me, but either way I kinda want to know so I will try to be good, but theres no promise

    7. Reba,
      Totally agree with all the comments. You have completely pulled these last two chapters outta of the bage and stunned all your fan.
      Bloddy brilliant.
      The way in which you have conveyed Tina’s parents is masterful.
      More please, real soon.
      A Loyal fan.

    8. Reba… come on tell us…we are all good girls…cough cough… love this i love how bette got tina’s parents to agree…ok please we need you to continue…

    11. I like the way you have structured thsi story – flashbacks, first person PoV etc. It’s also fun to see this alternate Bette. MUCH more relaxed that TV control freak Bette (much as we love her!!)

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