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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“It’s all right,” said Alice quietly and pausing to smile up at Helena. “Thanks for listening.”
“Anytime you wish to talk, I will be here to listen,” said Helena
rather solemnly, dropping a light kiss to the top of Alice’s head and
smiling when the blonde sighed happily at her touch.
They remained in this position, utterly relaxed and snuggled into one
another until the blonde passed a channel in her surfing only to
quickly return to the channel as she gave a cry of excitement and
squirmed in her seat. “No way!” Alice declared. She waved the remote at
the television screen which featured a girl who referred to herself as
a VJ talking about two other girls clad in Catholic schoolgirl uniforms
that were featured in a large photograph behind her. “I didn’t know
they were coming out with a new album, not to mention a new video!”
“Who is?” asked Helena with a frown, wondering who all three girls were and precisely what channel did Alice land on this time.
Turning to Helena and looking at her with a good deal of disbelief,
Alice said, “Tatu! Don’t tell me you don’t know Tatu? The underage
Russian fake lesbians singing duo? They’re quite possibly the wrongest
but coolest thing ever. Wrong because, hello, underage and Russian with
that whole vibe of their manager made them pretend to be ***** and make
out with each other but cool because their music is so over the top
with ***** drama it’s ***** hilarious.”
“They were made to kiss in public and profess as if they were lesbians
when they were not?” asked Helena, her expression horrified and her
eyes going wide. “How could you say such a thing could ever be cool?
Darling, that is twisted! It’s paramount to child abuse. How on Earth
did this man not find himself locked away in prison? Wait,” Helena cut
off Alice’s reply as she frowned and mused to herself. “If they are
Russian then international laws prohibit…” She trailed off, scowling
deeply and looking at Alice. “I do despise the law at times.”
“They didn’t seem messed up by it,” offered Alice almost meekly, no
longer thinking that watching the new Tatu video, as much as she wanted
to see it, was a good idea. She didn’t want to upset Helena further
with the subject.
Sensing Alice’s unease, Helena looked sheepish and pulled the blonde
back to her former close position by wrapping an arm around her
shoulder. Kissing the top of the blonde’s head as she had done earlier,
she murmured, “I’m sorry if I frightened you, darling. I tend to get
rather worked up over these matters. I think it is due to how I spend most of my time at work… I often see the worst results
from such things.”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.