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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“It’s
not violent, not really. I mean, they have fight sequences in it but
it’s nothing that is detailed and how he figures out who did what
crimes is actually really smart,” Dave offered, pulling out a single
dvd and walking over to Helena. “They have the show out so far in the
first three seasons but since you’ve never seen it you should maybe get
this single dvd and see if you approve before you get those.”
Studying
the dvd and looking to Wilson’s subdued eyes that shined in expectation
to Dave’s honest features, Helena focused on Alice who stood at her
side, arm still around her waist in a gesture of affection. “Have you
seen this, darling?” she questioned with a smile. “You seem to have
seen everything, after all.”
“I
have not seen everything!” Alice squeaked in aggrieved protest. Poking
Helena in the side and grinning when she squealed at the touch. “You
make me sound like this unhealthy couch potato person. Which, okay,
maybe I am but people so do not need to hear about it, right?”
“Have you seen it?” Helena lifted an eyebrow humorously.
Sighing deeply, Alice muttered, “Yes. Okay? Yes I have.”
“And what are your thoughts?” prodded Helena playfully.
“It’s
good and Batman is hot in it,” said Alice somewhat peevishly. A slow
smile formed on her face and she rose up on her toes and whispered into
Helena’s ear, “And if Wilson gets scared, which I doubt will happen,
you can totally protect him, since you’re his big bad Mama.”
Shivering
from the sensation of Alice’s warm breath on her skin, Helena smiled at
Dave and handed him the dvd then said, “At two such fine
recommendations, I think we simply must be purchasing all three
available seasons then.”
“Yeah?”
Dave’s eyes lit up. “That’s great!” They watched him scamper off with
humorous eyes and holding all of the seasons in his hands, he stopped
in front of them and said, “I’m going to put these up front so you guys
don’t have to hold all this stuff. Just give me the movies that you
want and I’ll put them up there to make things easier, okay?”
“That
would be lovely, thank you,” Helena said, smiling at him, rather
enjoying his clear enthusiasm to have them shopping in his store and
buying things in rather large increments.
Dave
started to walk away but stopped in his walk and turned back to say
somewhat shyly, “We have this card, you know? It costs seventeen
dollars for two years but what it does is it gives you gift
certificates back for everything you buy. With how much you’re already
spending, you’d totally get back more than the cost of the card. Maybe
around fifty dollars or more. Do you think that’s something you’d be
interested in?”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.