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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“Hey,”
Alice boomed in goofy tones, gaining Jun Ying’s attention. “Have you
seen Aladdin? I bet that’s still in print and it’s totally funny,” she
remarked, taking Jun Ying’s hand and heading back over the movie
section. “If you thought the truffle shuffle was hilarious wait until
you see Robin Williams all animated and Genie style.”
“If
you want, you could reserve Cinderella with us,” Dave said to Helena
who turned her attention his way. “You just put five dollars down or
you can pay for the movie in full then we call you when it’s coming out
and hold it for you until you have the time to come in. All it does is
guarantee you a copy of the movie and remind you it’s coming out in
case you forget.”
“A
reminder would be wonderful,” said Helena rather wryly. “I tend to
forget things I often wish I wouldn’t. Post It notes are used in
horrifying amounts in my office, I’m afraid.”
“There’s
tons of good kids movies coming out, I could get the reservation sheet
and show you if you want,” offered Dave enthusiastically.
“Please
do,” said Helena, smiling as he scurried off again. She then went over
to Alice and the children to inform them they could reserve Cinderella
and any other movies they might like.
When
they exited the store almost an hour later, leaving just as Dave’s
coworker arrived to relieve him, their purchase rang up at over five
hundred dollars. Almost a hundred of which were paid in full
reservations for movies that were to be released. And as he regaled the
story of their shopping expedition to his coworker, Dave was torn as to
say who he liked best. The children who were adorable and painfully
polite, asking him permission to take toys off a shelf, Helena who was
patient and agreed to everything he suggested, or Alice who asked for
his opinions on things and listened to him when he spoke.
The
only thing that he knew for sure was that he really did want that
***** couple and their kids to come back to his store and to keep
coming back. Because finding customers as nice as that was something
truly rare in his business.
—
“What
in the world have you exposed my children to?” Helena halfway hissed in
Alice’s ear, holding her neck and shaking her head side to side in
playful aggravation. “This is supposed to be a children’s entertainer?
The man is clearly disturbed.”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.