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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“Since
I wager that we’ll be returning to your store, it does truly sound like
a wise investment, so certainly I’ll purchase your card,” said Helena,
smiling at him and recognizing the fact this card was something that
the young man was expected to sell as a part of his job. What did a few
extra dollars matter to her, after all? He was kind to her and her
children, not to mention Alice. And she did truly believe they would
definitely be returning to his store again in the near future. This
shopping experience was too much fun for her not to wish to relive it.
“Great,” said Dave, a huge smile planted on his face as he headed off with the dvds to put them up front on the counter.
“He’s cute,” Alice observed with a chuckle.
“Is that so?” drawled Helena, giving Alice a significant look.
Laughing at this, Alice bumped their hips and said, “Dirty mind! I’m not thinking that at all. He’s just a sweet kid, okay?”
“If that is what you claim,” Helena said playfully.
“Mummy?” Jun Ying said, walking up to them and tugging on Helena’s hand. “Can you see if they have Cinderella?”
“Of
course, darling,” murmured Helena, smiling at Jun Ying and reluctantly
moving out of Alice’s one armed hug to walk over to the children’s
section. Upon searching there she found several versions of it and
hoped that the one her daughter wanted wasn’t the version involving the
R&B singer Brandy. No matter how much she did enjoy her music,
somehow Helena thought her performance in this film wouldn’t be nearly
as good. “I’m not sure though,” she murmured, crouching down to show
Jun Ying the movies. “Which one did you want?”
Searching
through them all and releasing a small and disappointed noise, Jun Ying
replied, “The one that has the mice who help her. They sing and there’s
a funny mouse named Gus plus a smart one named Jacques…”
“Disney’s
Cinderella,” offered Dave, returning to their sides with a grin. “The
original animated masterpiece and all that. They pulled it out of print
since that’s what they do, then they release it ten years later. I’m
not really sure why. It’s coming out on dvd in October though.”
“We’ll purchase it in October, darling,” Helena murmured, stroking Jun Ying’s hair who smiled and nodded her head at this.
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.