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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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They
were on their third installment in their back on track movie marathon
and like first two movies, Goonies and Labyrinth, it was one that Alice
chose. But unlike its predecessors, Spy Kids wasn’t turning out to be
as big a hit with Helena as it was with the children. She apparently
found the movie and Alan Cumming’s brilliantly psychotropic portrayal
of the villain, a children’s television show host named Floop, to be a
tad on the frightening side.
“That’s
the point though,” whispered Alice, turning to Helena and putting their
faces centimeters apart. Close enough where if one of them should lean
forward slightly a brief kiss would surely occur. A thought which
popped into Helena’s mind and made her blush, causing Alice to grin
mischievously at her. “Does Floop scare the super spy Ms. Peabody?” she
teased, putting on an overly sympathetic baby voice.
“I
no longer find you amusing,” Helena huffed, turning away from Alice and
faking more irritation than she actually felt simply to get some much
needed space between them. Folding her arms over her chest, her eyes
fixed back on the screen where Floop was involved with singing a
hauntingly eerie song that, in her opinion, had to be a part of some
brainwashing propaganda to mind control the children who were watching
his show. “This is ghastly,” she muttered peevishly. “And those
creatures on his show are truly hideous looking! They would surely give
the younger children in his audience nightmares. They’re more wretched
than those infernal Teletubbies.” Scowling slightly, Helena added, “And
the idea that Tinky Winky is a fellow homosexual? I reject that on
principal because I refuse to believe I would share anything remotely
in common with something that is as freakish as he.”
Giggling,
Alice rested her arm on the back of the couch and around Helena’s
shoulders, pulling the British woman close in a sideways hug. “You’re
being super cute again,” she drawled.
“That’s
impossible,” said Helena in deadpan tones, trying to act angry but the
smile tugging at her lips giving her away. “I am not wearing my
Cambridge hat and you said it was that element which transformed me
from cute into super cute.” She turned to face Alice and smirked. “You
really must pay closer attention to your own words, darling.”
“Why
should I?” asked Alice, lifting an eyebrow and moving her face closer
to Helena’s in a playful challenge of sorts. “You’re doing a great job
of doing that for me.”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.