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Blind (Chap 14)
“You gotta try this, you’re going to love it…” I said while rising up the spring roll to her mouth. I didn’t know whether she did it on purpose, she bite the spring roll while sucking in my fingers as well. I was dumbstruck… I sat there feeling her mouth wrapping my fingers… when she pulled away, “Mmm…mmm… this is really good.” She said licking her lips… again, I felt blood gushing to my head, and I could feel my heart thumping in every part of my body… aching… I lifted the rest of the spring roll and put it into my mouth without further thoughts… licking my fingers clean… how is it possible that the other half of the spring roll taste better?
We walked down the street heading towards the cinema. Bought tickets for ‘The Devil Wears Prada”, a light comedy. Enjoyed the show really much, women in nice dresses… when did I begin to be so interested in beautiful women? Hmm…
Without realization, Tina leaned into Bette, their arms touching and lapping on each other’s on the arm rest in between them. Bette did the same, leaning in towards Tina, their heads were close, but not touching, although they could feel their hair stood once in a while when they alerted each other’s closeness, they just kept on watching the show and enjoyed it.
“I had a really great time…” Tina said when they were at Tina’s apartment parking lot.
“Me too…”
“Thanks for inviting me out tonight…”
“You’re more than welcome…” Bette was struggling whether to walk Tina to her door. But she decided to let thing go slow.
“Good night…” Tina seemingly not wanting to end the night, but it had became more awkward in the car when both of them didn’t know what to do next.
“Good night…” again Bette leaned in to hug Tina good night. Both savoured the last moment closeness together. Both missing another’s warmth when they separated from the hug. After seeing Tina into her apartment’s lobby, Bette reluctantly pulled off from the parking lot with a heavy heart. When the memory of the evening replayed in her head, she smiled warmly.
Lying on the bed trying to go into slumber, Tina hugged her pillow tightly then kissed it. “Goodnight Bette.”
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(66 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
No, we are just beginning. Next chapter..PLEASE
No please don’t stop here! you are doing a great job all this time, your story is so lovely i think that there are a lot of story for this fiction!
Zabo, thank you so much for this chapter, that was so great and so well done! Loved the way Bette turned her jealousy and frustration into courage to ‘show’ Tina her feelings, and then how she chose to tell her truth! So amazing. But I’ve got to agree with all of the above, you cannot stop there… Please grant us with at least one more chapter, one of finally shared love, whatever rating you choose to give to it! ;) Please, please don’t end here… Thanks!
Oh no you don’t!That was Great! I’m with everyone else here…On with the sex!I think you can muster up a few more chappys after that!You are doing great, don’t stop PLEASE
NO ZABO! NO!
Did you say the end? I think not, you are banned to your room until you put out a few more chapters! That was a wonderful story and I would love to see it continue but you did bring the two girls together so what more could I ask for.
The end? Oh no! Tell me is isn’t so! That was great how Bette told Tina the truth without Tina even asking. Great story…I hope you will continue!
THIS CAN’T END!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you crazy? You just got these two together. Their passion is hot, you’ve got to keep going. (please)
wow
Oh hell no you can’t end it there! I vote for at least one more chapter. *cough*NC-17*cough* ;)
Great Story!!!!! Sorry to see it end. Thank you PPS
1st brb
Nooooooooooooooo!!! U can’t leave us hanging love that. Please. I need to read how wonderful it is and how they are now both complete, and yea a NC-17, pretty please!!
YES that was so great. Bette took the risk and NO not the end. Thanks for this great story
No not the end, please (pouty face)
lmao @ Alice ‘i think i’ve forgot to lock my door’ and then she pulled Dana out with her, i love the way Bette did her ‘truth’ please give us one more, i agree with Lament, we need an NC17
NO, NO NO NONONONONONONON….pls not the end!!!!
No way, don’t end it. Love the story.
I loved it, but I realy want it to continue… If it ends I’ll have nothing to jump up and down like a clown for :( Please continue :)
Zabo..I hope this is just the beginning. You can now start the sequel. Thank you for writing this story for us.
no no no not the end do you want me and you to fall out, well please coninue with this wonderful story
Oh man is sad to see this story ending, I though you gonna let them start their dating and first time make love and you know all the fun and hot stuff come. Anyway hope you will continue the story and please don’t ending like this, its killing us here. Good story and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
no, not the end…please, continue, this is so good, i realy loved the way you finally made them to open up and see the truth…(love alice btw too)…so continue please and don’t even think of stopping here…thank you
Hell no!! give them some happy moments before happy ever after.
Brilliant. And SO worth the wait to see them get together so sweetly! Thanks.
Noooooooooo Zabo… Please… Not the end?! you can’t do that to me, I get back all excited to read an update and now ‘the end’? Please please please continue? *puppydogface*