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Butterflies in the Stomach

I avert my eyes, feeling overwhelmed all of sudden. I’m not sure whether it’s a bad type of overwhelmed or a good type of overwhelmed. I’m not used to feel so overwhelmed by women’s beauty, so it’s a little bit weird for me.
But let us imagine for a second that Tina is indeed art.
It is commonly supposed that feeling overwhelmed by art is completely appropriate. This is a good type of overwhelmed. Art is meant to give us pleasure, arouse aesthetic emotions. Although it is certainly not impossible to have art that arouses disgust that you would also consider beautiful, but that’s another story. Therefore, you see, being overwhelmed by Tina is a good thing and is appropriate and not weird after all, which proves the theorem. That means I can stare all I want, right?
I turn my gaze back to her. Her eyes are already open, though she still seems very far away. I wonder where her mind is right now.
”Enjoying the view?” I ask softly.
The slightest smile tugs at her lips. ”It’s beautiful…”
”I’m glad you like it.”
She finally makes eye contact. ”It makes me want to write.”
I smile at that. ”You know, this is interesting, because just now I was standing there at the door, watching you against the background of all this beauty, and what I was seeing made me want to paint.”
She breaks into a wide smile. ”It’s like we’re on the same wavelength in terms of creativity. We’re in it together, experiencing the joy of creation…”
Goodness gracious… How she talks…
”Yeah…” I manage to say and that’s all I can at the moment, because I’m currently trying to fight the urge to wrap her in my arms and kiss her properly.
”Your hair is curly even wet!” she exclaims in childlike wonder. Reaching out her forefinger, she smoothes back a damp curl that has fallen over my eye.
Gulp. Her finger doesn’t even make contact with my skin, yet the sensual way she touches my hair, the heat coming off her hand sends electric waves traveling through every fiber of my body, as if there are thousands of nerve endings in that single lock of hair.
”Thick curly hair. I’ve always wanted that,” Tina claims as her hand falls back to her side. Phew.
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Hi Valerie:
That was wonderful chapter; your stories always lift my mood, what a nice and humorous afternoon at Bette’s apartment; that was really hilarious, I love this story; indeed, though being almost the opposite one of the other, I love both of your stories.
I think Bette is lost, she is totally infatuated for Tina, and I think she is going to keep falling more and more for her.
They come from so different worlds and, as when they talked about their hairs, each of them feels attracted to some aspect of the other, I’ll say they may complement each other. I like that Tina is looking at Bette in a friendly way, maybe more than that, she mentioned about her beauty and her body; which lead me to think Tina already ‘checked’ on the brunette.
Careful Bette the best hunter can also be hunted.
What a great chapter, please Valerie, update soon, I’ll be eagerly waiting for the updates of your stories
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Hi Valerie,
I don’t think i have more to comment after proteonomics comment above. She already mentioned what i thought.
I really enjoy this story, compleet different from the other one, when can we expect a update from that one?
Thank you for the update!
Thank you so much for posting, I really look forward to reading your stories .Please post soon
Why is this story not finished.. just when it’s getting good…thank you I liked what is here…but would like more.
Great story with good humor. I laughed a lot. It’s a pity there’s no sequel.