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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 44

    Story written on July 20, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “ONE NIGHT WITH YOU…” BOTH OF YOU?

    Tina: Do you see a
    parking lot?

    Alex: I think its
    valet.

    Tina: well, that’s
    unnecessary, I can park a car myself.

    Alex: The Company is
    paying for all of this, enjoy it!

    Tina didn’t need to
    hear another word, she pulled over to the curb as a man in a red jacket came
    over and took the keys from her. 2 other men went around the back of the car
    and removed the luggage. They placed it on a large cart and wheeled it into the
    hotel and up to the concierge desk.

    Alex: Quick service.

    Bette: To say the least.

    All three approached
    the desk in order to check in.

    Concierge: Hello and
    welcome to the Crowne Plaza. How may I help you?

    Alex: Yes, we have
    reservations.

    Alex gave the man their
    names and waited patiently for him to return with the keys.

    Bette: I hope the bed
    is big. I’ll need lots of room to ravage you.

    Tina:
    mmm..ravaging…fun!

    The gentlemen came back
    holding 2 keys.

    Concierge: I’m sorry
    sir but for some reason they have only booked you one room.

    Alex: Excuse me?

    Bette cut in front of
    Alex trying to keep her demeanor calm at all times.

    Bette: It’s ok Alex.
    I’ll take care of it.

     

    She turned the man
    behind the desk.

    Bette: No problem. It
    was obviously a mistake. We just need another room.

    The man began typing
    quickly in his computer searching for another available room. When he found
    nothing Bette insisted he look again.

    Concierge: I am sorry
    ma’am but I have nothing.

    Bette: Not even a
    suite?

    Alex chimed in.

    Alex: A linen closet?
    Anything?

    Concierge: I’m sorry
    but I won’t have another room until tomorrow afternoon.

    Alex leaned in until
    his forehead was practically touching the other mans.

    Alex: Do you understand
    that this means I will have to sleep in the same room as these two lovebirds?
    Do you know how damaging those mental images can be for a ***** man like me?

    The man behind the
    counter backed up as he starred at Bette and Tina.

    Alex: Yes that right.
    It’s a regular bar joke. 2 lesbians and a ***** man walk into the Crowne Plaza…

    Tina reached out and
    took Alex’s arm.

    Tina: Honey, it’s ok.
    It’s just one night. We will all survive.

    Alex ripped his arm
    from Tina’s tight grip.

    Alex: Fine.

    Tina turned to Bette to
    make sure she was ok with the arrangements.

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    5. My Flair lady, you’re such a naughty girl here ! At first the hitchcockian suspense of the one-bed thing, then a delightful reward for the poor readers who were as red as Tina… and bing here’s the big unexpected drama to end the journey ! Grrrr… let me friendly tweak your ear ! (*big wink !*)

      … Well, seriously now : do I really need to express once more how much, how deeply I enjoy your story ??? I L-O-V-E I-T !!! ^_^

    9. Tks for the bonus….we did deserve it and tks!!! You could see this happening, it’s too much for you to let the seperation things not happen…I’m sure that there is too juicey a story turning around that brain of yours…ee haw!!! tks

    14. Sorry I have not commented in awhile. I have been out of town. I am still in love with your story! I love the relationships between all three characters.

    16. I JUST READ THIS ENTIRE STORY FROM CHAPTER 1 TO 44 AND I AM HOOKED. YOU ARE THE ONLY WRITER ON THIS SITE WHO REALLY PUTS THEIR OWN ORIGNAL SPIN ON THESE AMAZING CHARACTERS. NO WRITER HAS EVER MADE ME LAUGH AS MUCH AS YOU AS WELL AS KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE. NOT TO MENTION YOUR SEX SCENES ARE JUST AMAZING! EVERYTHING FEELS SO REAL. I ALSO LOVE HOW YOU MADE NYC SO 3D FOR THOSE WHO DON’T KNOW THE CITY. TO ME IT HAS BECOME ITS OWN CHARACTER IN THIS STORY! PLEASE KEEP IT UP! I HOPE THE JUDGES FOR THE FAN FIC CONTEST SEE HOW WONDERFUL AND ORIGNAL THIS STORY IS AND HOW TRULY AMAZING YOU ARE AS AN AUTHOR! 100 STARS! THANKS FOR KEEPING ME HOOKED, I’M ALWAYS LOOKING FOR A NEW ADDICTION!

    19. Wade i was about to say the same thing about Alex…lol..ok…ohh now i´m sad about Bette and Tina..i hope you find a way so Bette could stay with Tina..and you never cease to amaze me too.amazing chapter please post soon thanks

    20. Another wonderful chapter. You never disappoint us readers. I don’t want Bette to go :( Stupid clumsy Megan breaking her leg. Doesn’t she know that when someone says “go break a leg” they don’t really mean it lol B&T will be even more sexually frustrated during the remaining time of the 2 weeks, which means some good sex will be coming up hehe Post again soon :)

    23. LOL! WHOA! HA HA HA LOL! Again Hey I’m still crack me up to the other story chapter 43 in the Bathroom Air Plane LOL! and this one still funny I Love it but then Bette is going back home Please write more funny post soon THANKS.

    27. Yay for extended chapters!! It really sucks that Bette has to go back already, but at least they had one great night together. Maybe Megan’ll recover right away and Bette’ll be able to go back really soon? Thanks, flair!

    28. Flair,
      Astonishing!
      How on earth did Bette then Tina not wake Alex? Did they drug him? Surely he can’t be that heavy a sleeper.
      It was very sexy especially heightened with the likelihood of being caught.
      I love the way you go from humor to shock to reality to sultriness to hot sex to ‘Helllooo baby’ to despair.
      How will the separation affect the gals? Will they be seduced by the temptations around them? Will there be misunderstandings?
      All these questions and more to be answered in the next Long chapter. Please.
      Your loyal fan.

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