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Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 44
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The red color running
up her cheeks told Tina it would be a long night.
The three took the
elevator up to the 24th floor and followed the bellhop to room 2417.
Bellhop: Here you go.
He opened the door and
the three cautiously walked in.
Alex took one look at
the room and dropped his bag.
Alex: Oh no!!
Absolutely not!!
Bette peered around his
shoulder and caught sight of what Alex was looking at.
Bette: Are you *****
kidding me?
Tina, feeling left out
stepped in front of the two.
Tina: What? One bed?
Alex: Ok I agreed to
share a room for one night but I never agreed to one bed!
Bette: None of us
agreed to that.
Tina: I can’t believe
that guy neglected to mention this!
Alex turned to yell at
the bellhop who, during the commotion slipped out of the room. He didn’t even
wait for a tip.
They stood in stunned
silence for quite some time.
Alex: I’m hungry.
Bette: Me too.
Tina: Let’s go find a
restaurant.
Alex: Can we just order
room service, I’m feeling exceptionally lazy.
Bette: Yeah, that’ll be
fine.
Alex took a menu from
the top of the desk and collapsed on the bed reading it.
Tina excused herself to
the bathroom while Bette began searching for her pajamas and her cell phone.
Alex: I think I’m gonna
order the steak and lobster and demand the hotel pick up the tab.
Bette smiled at her now
roommate.
Bette: I think that’s a
fine idea.
Alex: I know.
He nodded his head, his
mind already made up.
Alex: What do you want
to eat?
Bette shot Alex a look.
Alex: Ok listen, I know
the two of you were planning some big romp in the bed tonight, but it will just
have to wait until tomorrow. What do you want me to order you from this menu?
He made sure to point
to the paper in his hand, leaving no chance of his message to be misconstrued
this time.
Bette: Just a salad I
guess.
Alex: Come on, their
paying, order whatever you want.
Bette: Fine a Caesar
salad.
Alex: That’s my girl.
Tina came out of the
bathroom in a pink robe, her face beet red.
Tina: Bette can you
come here for a minute?
Bette eyed Tina
suspiciously.
Bette: Didn’t we try
the bathroom already and it didn’t work out?
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lol, this story cracks me up. I can just picture Rupert Evert (the roll he played in My Best Friends Wedding) as Alex.
What a delight to read. I am so in love with this story and you just continue to bring the goods with each chapters. Thanks so much
GOD..I love this story. You could write a million chapters and I would read them all. Funny, full of love, and great sex. please post soon
This makes me laugh so much
My Flair lady, you’re such a naughty girl here ! At first the hitchcockian suspense of the one-bed thing, then a delightful reward for the poor readers who were as red as Tina… and bing here’s the big unexpected drama to end the journey ! Grrrr… let me friendly tweak your ear ! (*big wink !*)
… Well, seriously now : do I really need to express once more how much, how deeply I enjoy your story ??? I L-O-V-E I-T !!! ^_^
ah flair, more drama. thanks. knew some good times couldn’t last forever. you know how much i love this story. so please post away.
Great chapter, love the humer and awaiting the drama.
Enjoying each chapter. Please post again, soon.
Tks for the bonus….we did deserve it and tks!!! You could see this happening, it’s too much for you to let the seperation things not happen…I’m sure that there is too juicey a story turning around that brain of yours…ee haw!!! tks
Funny, funny and well written. Encore, encore and give us more.
Funny tina will understand people have to work
Funny, sexy and bad new. Hope Tina’ll understand. Thank you
LOL, it’s hillarious but well, Bette, I think you do have to go back. No worries, your gf will be back in no time.
Sorry I have not commented in awhile. I have been out of town. I am still in love with your story! I love the relationships between all three characters.
Loving the banter between these 3! Can’t wait for the next chapter =)
I JUST READ THIS ENTIRE STORY FROM CHAPTER 1 TO 44 AND I AM HOOKED. YOU ARE THE ONLY WRITER ON THIS SITE WHO REALLY PUTS THEIR OWN ORIGNAL SPIN ON THESE AMAZING CHARACTERS. NO WRITER HAS EVER MADE ME LAUGH AS MUCH AS YOU AS WELL AS KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE. NOT TO MENTION YOUR SEX SCENES ARE JUST AMAZING! EVERYTHING FEELS SO REAL. I ALSO LOVE HOW YOU MADE NYC SO 3D FOR THOSE WHO DON’T KNOW THE CITY. TO ME IT HAS BECOME ITS OWN CHARACTER IN THIS STORY! PLEASE KEEP IT UP! I HOPE THE JUDGES FOR THE FAN FIC CONTEST SEE HOW WONDERFUL AND ORIGNAL THIS STORY IS AND HOW TRULY AMAZING YOU ARE AS AN AUTHOR! 100 STARS! THANKS FOR KEEPING ME HOOKED, I’M ALWAYS LOOKING FOR A NEW ADDICTION!
This story had me LMAO Flair. You are a great writer. Love this story. keep up the good work You Rock.
She has to go back! Ahhh! Nooooooo!!! Haha, I love this story, please post again soon!
Wade i was about to say the same thing about Alex…lol..ok…ohh now i´m sad about Bette and Tina..i hope you find a way so Bette could stay with Tina..and you never cease to amaze me too.amazing chapter please post soon thanks
Another wonderful chapter. You never disappoint us readers. I don’t want Bette to go :( Stupid clumsy Megan breaking her leg. Doesn’t she know that when someone says “go break a leg” they don’t really mean it lol B&T will be even more sexually frustrated during the remaining time of the 2 weeks, which means some good sex will be coming up hehe Post again soon :)
Once again, laughing out loud. I can’t wait for more.
Surely they can last for two weeks!
Or, maybe not…
LOL! WHOA! HA HA HA LOL! Again Hey I’m still crack me up to the other story chapter 43 in the Bathroom Air Plane LOL! and this one still funny I Love it but then Bette is going back home Please write more funny post soon THANKS.
i love this story. it has everything. i laughed i cried i took a cold shower.
Damn still so fucking funny and hot, man Bette has to go back, it’s sad. Let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
Truely loving this story. I love the comedy and even the drama. Great job Flair.
Yay for extended chapters!! It really sucks that Bette has to go back already, but at least they had one great night together. Maybe Megan’ll recover right away and Bette’ll be able to go back really soon? Thanks, flair!
Flair,
Astonishing!
How on earth did Bette then Tina not wake Alex? Did they drug him? Surely he can’t be that heavy a sleeper.
It was very sexy especially heightened with the likelihood of being caught.
I love the way you go from humor to shock to reality to sultriness to hot sex to ‘Helllooo baby’ to despair.
How will the separation affect the gals? Will they be seduced by the temptations around them? Will there be misunderstandings?
All these questions and more to be answered in the next Long chapter. Please.
Your loyal fan.
ha! girl, you always bring the drama.
K
Well damn, the trip was fun while it lasted. Too bad B has to go back. Wonderful chap as always. Love this. Can’t wait for more.
This was super hot!!