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Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 44
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Tina: No, not that.
Just come here!
Bette gave Alex a wink
and disappeared with Tina behind the door.
Bette: What’s wrong T?
Tina: Ok, well I was
planning on it just being us in this room.
Bette: Ok…
Tina: But now it’s not…
Bette: yeah I know.
Bette’s face contorted
in confusion.
Tina quickly opened her
bathrobe to reveal a black silk teddy, garters and all. Bette almost fell backward.
Bette: are you trying
to kill me?
Tina: Bette get
serious! I didn’t bring any bed time attire other than lingerie!
Bette: Oh my…
Bette slowly reached
her hands out and touched the silky fabric covering Tina’s taught body.
Tina: Please don’t
start this now. One false move and it’s over/
Bette: Fine. Sorry. I
have extra shorts and t – shirts. I’ll get a pair ok?
Tina: Thank you.
Bette: But can I just
say that I am very, very excited for tomorrow?
Tina blushed before
placing a smoldering kiss on Bette’s red lips.
Bette: Hey, I thought
we said there would be none of this until we are alone!
Tina: Sorry, it’s just,
I’m still really really REALLY wet for…
Bette covered her ears
and left the bathroom. She yelled through the door.
Bette: You have some
nerve!
She heard Tina giggle
on the other side of the door. Bette opened the door just enough to fit the
clothes through and slammed the door shut.
Alex: Hurry up blondie,
we’re ordering dinner.
Tina: Just get me what
Bette’s getting.
Alex: ok.
The three friends
enjoyed their dinner at the small table in the corner of the room. Alex reached
for the remote control and turned on the TV.
Alex: I wonder if there
are any dirty movies on?
Bette: No, please no
dirty movies.
Alex: why?
Tina: I don’t think our
dear Bette can handle any more arousal for the evening.
Bette: Yeah, it’s just
not a good idea.
Alex: But I’m sure it
would be straight ***** and that wouldn’t do anything for you.
Bette: are you crazy?
As a fact, I terribly dislike *****, however if it’s on and im in the right
mood, *****, straight whatever. It doesn’t matter it will still turn me on.
Alex: Really? Because
***** ***** does nothing for me.
Tina: Do we have to
have this conversation over dinner?
Bette: Yes
Alex: Yes.
They smiled at each
other.
Tina: Fine.
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lol, this story cracks me up. I can just picture Rupert Evert (the roll he played in My Best Friends Wedding) as Alex.
What a delight to read. I am so in love with this story and you just continue to bring the goods with each chapters. Thanks so much
GOD..I love this story. You could write a million chapters and I would read them all. Funny, full of love, and great sex. please post soon
This makes me laugh so much
My Flair lady, you’re such a naughty girl here ! At first the hitchcockian suspense of the one-bed thing, then a delightful reward for the poor readers who were as red as Tina… and bing here’s the big unexpected drama to end the journey ! Grrrr… let me friendly tweak your ear ! (*big wink !*)
… Well, seriously now : do I really need to express once more how much, how deeply I enjoy your story ??? I L-O-V-E I-T !!! ^_^
ah flair, more drama. thanks. knew some good times couldn’t last forever. you know how much i love this story. so please post away.
Great chapter, love the humer and awaiting the drama.
Enjoying each chapter. Please post again, soon.
Tks for the bonus….we did deserve it and tks!!! You could see this happening, it’s too much for you to let the seperation things not happen…I’m sure that there is too juicey a story turning around that brain of yours…ee haw!!! tks
Funny, funny and well written. Encore, encore and give us more.
Funny tina will understand people have to work
Funny, sexy and bad new. Hope Tina’ll understand. Thank you
LOL, it’s hillarious but well, Bette, I think you do have to go back. No worries, your gf will be back in no time.
Sorry I have not commented in awhile. I have been out of town. I am still in love with your story! I love the relationships between all three characters.
Loving the banter between these 3! Can’t wait for the next chapter =)
I JUST READ THIS ENTIRE STORY FROM CHAPTER 1 TO 44 AND I AM HOOKED. YOU ARE THE ONLY WRITER ON THIS SITE WHO REALLY PUTS THEIR OWN ORIGNAL SPIN ON THESE AMAZING CHARACTERS. NO WRITER HAS EVER MADE ME LAUGH AS MUCH AS YOU AS WELL AS KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE. NOT TO MENTION YOUR SEX SCENES ARE JUST AMAZING! EVERYTHING FEELS SO REAL. I ALSO LOVE HOW YOU MADE NYC SO 3D FOR THOSE WHO DON’T KNOW THE CITY. TO ME IT HAS BECOME ITS OWN CHARACTER IN THIS STORY! PLEASE KEEP IT UP! I HOPE THE JUDGES FOR THE FAN FIC CONTEST SEE HOW WONDERFUL AND ORIGNAL THIS STORY IS AND HOW TRULY AMAZING YOU ARE AS AN AUTHOR! 100 STARS! THANKS FOR KEEPING ME HOOKED, I’M ALWAYS LOOKING FOR A NEW ADDICTION!
This story had me LMAO Flair. You are a great writer. Love this story. keep up the good work You Rock.
She has to go back! Ahhh! Nooooooo!!! Haha, I love this story, please post again soon!
Wade i was about to say the same thing about Alex…lol..ok…ohh now i´m sad about Bette and Tina..i hope you find a way so Bette could stay with Tina..and you never cease to amaze me too.amazing chapter please post soon thanks
Another wonderful chapter. You never disappoint us readers. I don’t want Bette to go :( Stupid clumsy Megan breaking her leg. Doesn’t she know that when someone says “go break a leg” they don’t really mean it lol B&T will be even more sexually frustrated during the remaining time of the 2 weeks, which means some good sex will be coming up hehe Post again soon :)
Once again, laughing out loud. I can’t wait for more.
Surely they can last for two weeks!
Or, maybe not…
LOL! WHOA! HA HA HA LOL! Again Hey I’m still crack me up to the other story chapter 43 in the Bathroom Air Plane LOL! and this one still funny I Love it but then Bette is going back home Please write more funny post soon THANKS.
i love this story. it has everything. i laughed i cried i took a cold shower.
Damn still so fucking funny and hot, man Bette has to go back, it’s sad. Let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
Truely loving this story. I love the comedy and even the drama. Great job Flair.
Yay for extended chapters!! It really sucks that Bette has to go back already, but at least they had one great night together. Maybe Megan’ll recover right away and Bette’ll be able to go back really soon? Thanks, flair!
Flair,
Astonishing!
How on earth did Bette then Tina not wake Alex? Did they drug him? Surely he can’t be that heavy a sleeper.
It was very sexy especially heightened with the likelihood of being caught.
I love the way you go from humor to shock to reality to sultriness to hot sex to ‘Helllooo baby’ to despair.
How will the separation affect the gals? Will they be seduced by the temptations around them? Will there be misunderstandings?
All these questions and more to be answered in the next Long chapter. Please.
Your loyal fan.
ha! girl, you always bring the drama.
K
Well damn, the trip was fun while it lasted. Too bad B has to go back. Wonderful chap as always. Love this. Can’t wait for more.
This was super hot!!