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The Shipwreck
“Of course, I will, Mr. Kennard” then I heard one of the men say to my father. He asked him and two others to keep him company why he tried to discover on which island we were. “If we are fortunate we might stay here and start my researches. This place seems to be a good home for a lot of species; we could as well find something new here.”
“Father, please, be safe” I recommended.
“Don’t worry honey, they are with me” he said, patting one of them on the shoulder. It was a strong pat, but the giant guy on his left didn’t even move. Not a surprise, my father was a little man, he couldn’t hurt a fly. “We will be walking by the shore, as I only need to track the outlines of the island, just to see if I can recognize it on the map”
And so, they left. Leaving me by the fire, near my tent, with the disgusting man watching me by the distance, holding his rifle and showing off his annoying smug face. Of course, he started to walk toward me. I rolled my eyes.
“So, Chrissy”
“I told you not to call me that!” I snapped, crossing my arms.
“My, my, why are you always so mean to me?”
And why don’t you stop being such a dickhead. Oh, I would have liked to tell him that. I went with a polite phrase, instead. “I am tired and stressed. And my clothes are dirty, the only water I see here is salty water and…” I was rattling.
“Ok” he raised his hands. “My apologies”
At that I raised an eyebrow. Since when did he become so docile? There were times in which he couldn’t have any of it and kept going on annoying me. I guessed he was tired, too. But I let it go. It wasn’t my problem.
“You should get some rest” then he added. “Tomorrow we need to go find something to eat if we don’t want to starve to death. Our stocks are at the bottom of the ocean”
And sleep I did. I can’t tell you how much, but it must have been a lot because when I woke up I could already hear my father’s voice. He seemed excited by something. I groggily got up, fixed my hair and dress, and exited my tent.
“It’s new! It’s new!” my father yelled. “It’s not on the map! We discovered an island!”
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Bibi28 says
Hi Bette0Porter,
Welcome back after 5 years?! You kidding me, wow times fly away.
I am so happy to see you back with a new story!!!
You mentioned it was far away from TLW universe but you did use one name i despise from that universe and reading the first chapter i still hate the name Young.
So looking forward how this story will continue!
Bette0Porter says
Thank you! hahaha I hate that name, too.
At least, this Tina hates him from the start :D
Zhenya says
Hi! Welcom back!
Interesting beginning. Always like Tibette’s stories with adventures!
Waiting for the next!
proteonomics says
Hey BetteOPorter:
WELCOME BACK, what a surprise, I’m excited, I could read new beautiful stories from you again.
Very nice start in this chapter, and, as many readers, already waiting to see Captain Young out of the island and Tina’s life.
I’m waiting when Bette will show up (the chapter was small, you are a teaser????????????).
Hoping to read the new chapter soon.
Thanks for this new and promising story.
P
SassyGran says
Welcome back, it”s been far too long!
Nice start but far too short:-)
Look forward to more very soon.
SG
Bette0Porter says
Thank you all for the feedbacks! I’m already writing the second chapter xo
Angel1981 says
Interesting beginning, thank you!
Please continue!
ladywesty says
Hi Bette0Porter,
I’m very happy you took up writing again. I really missed your stories.
Anyway I love this one very much. Wouldn’t it be great to see Bette in an animal skin……
Btw please don’t apologize because English is not your mother tongue because as far as I’m concerned your English is very good and we all make mistakes, don’t we?
Can’t wait to read some more, so please don’t keep us too long in suspense.
Grtz,
BnTinmyhead says
I see you have came back to exscape the real world like the rest of us. Welcome back..nice first chapter and I love it when their in new environments and back drops.. ok so I’m late on starting this story but I like it so far.. on to the next one. Thank you.