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    Never Say Never Chapter 1

    Story written on July 30, 2015 by Liah x Doll.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=91807
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    Alice stood at the front door to her house, her large purse balanced on a bended knee as she dug through its many contents. She had long since ignored her younger sister’s voice that echoed through the phone she had tucked into her cleavage, the speaker setting giving her the ability to use both hands

    Alice stood at the front door to her house, her large purse balanced on a bended knee as she dug through its many contents. She had long since ignored her younger sister’s voice that echoed through the phone she had tucked into her cleavage, the speaker setting giving her the ability to use both hands to search through her purse.

    ”So I need a favor”

    ”What else is new?” Alice sighed heavily, frustrated with the fact that she couldn’t find the keys to her house. She grew annoyed when she realized that her best friend/roommate may have been right about needing to clean out her purse.

    She didn’t have to physically see her sister to know that the girl was rolling her eyes, ”Oh whatever. I haven’t asked for a favor in forever”

    ”Yeah, if seven days counts as forever” Alice said mater-of-factly as she dropped to her knees and began to empty the contents of her purse all over the porch, hoping to find her keys easier that way.

    ”I need you to get me into The Planet this weekend”

    ”Um, no” Was the reply without hesitation despite the fact that Alice had been barely paying attention to her sister, having been distracted trying to find her keys. She finally found them tangled with her headphones and threw them into the air, catching them effortlessly. ”HA!”

    ”Why not?”

    ”Two things” Alice said as she threw everything back into her purse and got to her feet to unlock the door, ”One, you’re underage and two, The Planet is a gay bar”

    Alice entered what she thought was an empty home, the muffled sound of moaning proved that thought wrong. Alice made her way through the house, bypassing a closed door where the moans grew louder. She rolled her eyes and switched off the speaker setting on her phone before bringing it to her ear.

    ”I know that it is” Her sister replied with another sigh. She probably rolled her eyes again too, ”What’s your point?”

    ”My point is that you’re not gay, Tina” Alice said with another roll of her eyes. They definitely shared that habit in common. She made her way to the kitchen island, ”You’re just going through a college experimental phase. It happens to everyone”

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    4. Interesting beginning. I am glad that you are doing a new story!

      Bette and Tina as friends op only, we will see that, Bette has already the hots for Tina and she will never succeed to stay away from Tina and keep her promise to Alice.

      So Brenda is the lady that Tina has a big crush on. That isn’t a big surprise.

      Let saturday come fast.

      Thanks for the update!

    6. It’s interesting to hear them as much younger than when we ‘met’ them on the show.

      I read in your author’s notes that you began with an idea for a story based on your enthusiasm over the film, “Girltrash”, and are working in the L Word characters that you like so much into your idea. That’s certainly a good way to get your writer’s block out of the way, and give your characters a framework to move through the scenes and whatever plot you’ve decided upon for your stories. Framing a plot is key, and as you know gives you the story beats to hit as you write.

      Often, when I plot a story, I know I’ll never get to the heart of it in one chapter and lately it’s taken me three chapters to arrive at the finale. For me, this happens because I’m constantly enriching their back story, a very fun place to be creatively in fanfiction, if not perhaps the heart of it, as I’ve discovered.

      These chapters on The Way to the climax I enjoy dreaming up their musings and anxieties, which these characters have in spades. Your kitchen scene gave a reflection of how you are seeing Alice and Bette.

      I find writing Bette, and endless amusing exercise, and have taken her into amusing and dark places. She’s a complex character that isn’t only about her libido. And you have written her in a comical, good way, but do give her some depth, because on the page she can definitely take it.

      My wishes of success for you as you continue to write and experiment with your ideas.

      Blackbird

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