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Chapter 12 – It’s Only One Syllable
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“Tina.” Was all she could muster.
Bette smiled. What an angelic voice she has when she can use it. “That’s a nice name.”
Tina swallowed and found her voice again. “You?”
“Me what?” Bette asked, amused that one word sentences were all that Tina could speak at the moment.
Fuck, get it together, Kennard, she chastised herself. “Have a name?” I sound like a fucking idiot!
“It’s Bette.” The brown-eyed beauty responded. “As in, I bet you’re glad it’s only one syllable.” She whispered while softly chuckling into Tina’s hair.
Tina breathed a laugh too. She thinks you’re a fucking idiot too!
“Don’t worry, I’m just kidding.” Bette said as she unknowingly read Tina’s mind.
They continued their slow dance in silence, just enjoying the warmth of the other to a perfectly chosen song for their first dance.
Slowly now, we begin to move
Every breath I’m deeper into you
Soon we two are standing still in time
If you read my mind
You’ll see I’m crazy for you
Touch me once and you’ll know it’s true
I never wanted anyone like this
It’s all brand new,
You’ll feel it in my kiss
You’ll feel it in my kiss
Because I’m crazy for you
“Tina!” Dana finally found her friend in the haze of the dry ice and dancing bodies.
Great timing, Fairbanks, Tina thought while Bette abruptly pulled away from her. As she did, the rogue earring that had been caught in her hair fell to the floor. Tina noticed it as Bette turned to see Dana walking straight for them. Tina quickly bent down to recover the piece of jewelry.
“I’m sorry, I didn’t know she was with you.” Bette explained, believing Dana to be the jealous girlfriend coming to claim her territory. The brunette’s hurried explanation confused Dana, making her stammer in response.
“Oh…uh, no…we, we’re not…we..” Dana had a hard time explaining since she was caught off guard that Tina had been slow dancing with such a hot commodity.
“We work together,” Tina said quickly, holding tightly onto the earring she had retrieved. She raised an eyebrow at Dana as if to tell her to scram, which was immediately picked up on.
“Um, I’ll be, uh over there…if you need me” Dana stammered.
“FUCK YOU!” was the next thing the three of them heard.
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Ever meet someone you are so attracted to that you get tongue-tied and can barely carry a conversation with them because you can’t stop admiring their beauty? I’ve been there.
This will be the last chapter for the week. I know I am leaving you hanging slightly, but I will have a fresh crop of chapters for you next Sunday so please stay tuned and leave me some love.
XOXOXOXO
MeLL
Hi MeLL,
First, thank you for my Sunday Evening treat,
Second, really enjoyed the Chapters, beautifully written as always and
Thirdly you do know how I hate CliffHangers don’t you !!!
Have a great week my friend look forward to next Sunday’s Posts..
SG
Technically, SassyGran, this isn’t really a cliffy because this part of the story has already been (and still is) posted. So your third point is moot hahahaha. ;-)
Thank you for your continued readership and your awesome comments. I look forward to them every time I post!
Cheers!
Moot huh !
Let’s remember I have already read the original!
Don’t split hairs with me :-)
Love your posts – even Cliffies!
Off to start the new week.
SG
Thank you for the multi update tonight!
And i think we forgive you leaving us with this cliffhanger:) and we’ll be waiting for the next updates!
Thanks for reading Zhenya!
Hey MeLL,
I forgive you that you left us with a cliffhanger!
I was so excited that you posted so many chapters!
Loved all of them!
Will wait patiently for the next chapters!
Hi Bibi!
Thank you for taking the time out to let me know you liked them.
And I especially appreciate your patience. =)
These chapters were so worth the wait! :-)
My favourite quote: “Oh my God, she speaks”. I can totally relate to Tina’s reaction. Not only being tongue-tied but also feeling like your brain is slowing down from 45 rpm to 33 rpm (for those of you who still remember record players) and you’re finally losing the ability to speak coherently. What beauty can do you!
The change of perspective to first person works just great. It emphasizes the reader’s feeling of watching T + B, kind of seeing them circling around each other in the club, getting closer and closer and finally being in “the eye of the storm” together with T + B.
I love this scene!
Thanks again for this weekend-treat, MeLL.
Aww, thanks so much Kiwi!
I’m old enough to get your vinyl reference. In fact, I saw some sweet bluetooth turntables at the store last week that I think I may want to put on my Christmas list so I can bring out all those old records.
Every time I think about being tongue-tied in the presence of a new love interest, it makes me think of that song “Clumsy” by Fergie. It definitely sets out what happens when cupid hits you.
Catch you here next weekend I hope!
Cheers
I plan to sit sight in front of my computer coming Sunday and wait for the next chapters ;-)
Did I mention yet that this is one of my Top 5 favourite T + B stories? Well, it is!