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Chapter 16
“We’re holding it!” she shouted hoarsely, unsure if anyone heard. “Keep pushing!”
Near the far end of the compound, the flames had climbed hungrily up the wooden supports of the towering water tank, devouring beams that had stood for years under sun and storm. The fire crackled and spat, a living thing now, reaching higher, lapping at the tank’s base with tongues of molten gold.
Then came a groan, deep and warping, like the bowing of a great ship. The tank’s metal belly bulged under pressure, blackened timber creaking beneath it until something gave. A keening crack! split the air as one of the main supports failed. And then, with an ear-splitting snap, the structure collapsed inward on itself.
Water burst forth with the force of a broken dam.
The tank tore open like a gutted beast, unleashing a tidal wave that thundered downward, slamming into the earth with a roar. Sheets of water rushed outward in all directions, flooding trenches, tearing through the grass, and swallowing flames as it went. The fires closest to it hissed and died instantly under the onslaught, black smoke replaced by clouds of white steam rising like ghosts.
Nearby brushfires were flattened, their ember-filled bellies choked into silence. The heat in the air dropped by degrees in seconds. Where seconds before chaos reigned, there was now the cooling hush of drenched earth and dying flame.
The crash of water silenced even the roar of the fire. Bette, Nyah, Kamau, and Elijah turned as one, blinking through the haze, their sweat-streaked faces lit now not by firelight but by the silvery gleam of cascading water. The water tank, massive, old, and always taken for granted, had finally given way, and in its collapse had done what none of them could: it had pushed back the inferno in the lower part of the compound.
Flames that had clawed toward the animal pens and threatened the quarantine shed were now drowned under rushing water. Smoke lifted in towering columns, white and clean, curling skyward like incense. It was the first sound of peace they had heard all night.
For a heartbeat, none of them moved. Chest heaving, clothes soaked, hands black with ash and earth, they simply watched. Hope cracked through the grim shell that had formed over their hearts since the night began. Kamau exhaled a disbelieving breath. Nyah touched her chest. Elijah dropped the half-burnt cloth he’d been using, lips parting in something close to a smile.
But the moment held only a fragile peace, behind them, smoke still curled into the air, and the distant crackle of flames reminded them that the battle wasn’t over. Other corners of the compound still burned, stubborn pockets of fire flaring up where wind fed embers back to life.
Bette’s eyes sharpened.
“The house,” she said suddenly. “The second tank’s still intact.”
The others turned to her, startled.
“If we drop it,” she continued, already moving, “the water will run downhill, straight into the rest of it.”
She didn’t wait for agreement. She didn’t need it. Hope had sparked, and now it roared in her chest like a second wind.
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Great chapter. Hoping they save the house from the fire. I’m scared about the bag, hoping no one gets hurt.
That was intense.
And what was inside the bag???
Woah!! Great chapter! I fear this was only the beginning. Hope they come through ahead of the mayhem started by Chang soon. Those thughs have to come down the very sore looser in this battle. Maybe Wilson and his people noticed something and can help catch Chang and this soldiers.
You’ve got me front, center and patiently awaiting your updates. I really do like this story.