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    Chapter 17

    Tina smiles.

    (Tina) Well, I think I can offer some insight here, and it definitely means something

    Tina looks to her wine.

    (Tina) She also cries a lot

    Bette takes a breath and looks over at her.

    (Bette) Who told you that?

    Tina meets her eyes and looks at her for a moment.

    (Tina) Angie

    They both take a breath as they hold each other’s gaze.

    (Tina) She’s quite the little detective. I assume you know that

    (Bette) You mean the eavesdropping? And the snooping?

    Tina smiles.

    (Tina) Yes

    (Bette smiles) Yes, I know. She’s always been very perceptive as well, even when she was tiny

    They both have a sip of wine.

    (Tina) Alice said that I’ve been acting differently recently, that something’s shifted for me, to do with you. She thought it was linked to my being sad

    They look at each other for a moment.

    (Tina) I’m telling you baby, there’s something there

    Bette sighs and breaks eye contact, staring straight ahead for a while. She looks back to Tina.

    (Bette) When I really think about it, I think you have been different towards me recently. I’ve been carrying on as usual, but it’s felt more one sided than it usually does

    She pauses and has a sip of wine.

    (Bette) That last day I saw you, you came to the door when you dropped off Angie, sort of unnecessarily. And it seemed, I don’t know, different. Like maybe the anger had shifted to something else

    (Tina) Shifted to what?

    (Bette) I don’t know exactly. Just something different

    Tina sighs.

    (Tina) I think you two have a lot to talk about

    Bette sighs and has a sip of wine.

    (Tina) I get that it’s all awful, what you’ve told me, all of what you put each other through

    Tina shakes her head and sighs.

    (Tina) But all that anger. That that’s remained after all this time

    She looks to Bette.

    (Tina) If you have any chance of moving past this you need to work out why that is and talk about it with each other

    They sit in silence for a while. Bette eventually turns back to her.

    (Bette) We don’t even know if you’ll remember any of this once you’re back. Any of these conversations, or this time we’ve spent together

    (Tina frowns) That’s a big factor do you think?

    (Bette nods) Yes, I think if you remember then maybe we have some chance. If not, then I think it’s a lost cause

    Tina reaches out and takes her hand. She looks down for a moment to their hands tightly held together, before raising her eyes to Bette’s.

    (Tina) You can do this, either way

    Bette takes a breath and Tina squeezes her hand as she holds her gaze.

    (Tina) Don’t give up on us baby, you have to try

    Comments

    1. Finally K! I think Tina had a mental breakdown with all the anger and frustration. They know they loved each other so much. They have to do the work. PPS

    2. Wow, so much anger over events that happened a long time ago. Sometimes it’s easier to hang on the anger.

      Maybe Tina had a mental breakdown like majicspider60 already mentioned.

      Can they work this out after Tina is back in the present, is Bette willing to make a move when Tina doesn’t remember this time if she returns?

      Thank you for this brilliant written story!

    3. I believe Tina is right…. they can work it out whether Tina remembers this relationship during her amnesia or not. The feelings and the desires are there in both instances. It is up to Bette to want to agree to give reconciliation or at least civility a try. Tina has already made movement in that direction… Bette just meet her halfway and talk to her. Find a way to drop the predisposition that she will still be angry. If you Bette make an effort to at least communicate and Tina responds, there is a chance to get over these hurtles. Most of all drop this idea that it cannot be fixed. Maybe it can…. You both need to try. Neither of you have anything to loose by trying…. You have a horrible relationship as it is. Talking can possibly make it better.

      Thanks for the update… this is a very good story.

    4. It has been the same for so long that Bette feels there is no reason to try to fix all the wrongs between them, but I think she is willing to risk her heart to see Tina back in her life in some capacity as long as it is not hate filled anymore. Hopefully Tina does remember bits or feelings from her time with memory loss, so they can at least try to be better towards each other. Please post soon.

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