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    Chapter 2 – At First Sight

    Story written on June 13, 2020 by RiskyKitty.
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      Bette stopped circling and stepped to the Venus. She reached out hesitantly and with just her fingertips traced slowly down the marble. To the other women that were watching, it was incredibly erotic.   She ran her hand lightly from the rib cage down her side and across the smooth marble of her belly,

     

    Bette stopped circling and stepped to the Venus. She reached out hesitantly and with just her fingertips traced slowly down the marble. To the other women that were watching, it was incredibly erotic.

     

    She ran her hand lightly from the rib cage down her side and across the smooth marble of her belly, just above the drape that covered her hips and lower legs. She resumed circling the statue which stood just less than a foot taller than her, never removing her light touch as she went.

     

    “The Venus de Milo was created between 130 and 100 BC. She is believed to depict Aphrodite, the Greek Goddess of love, beauty, pleasure, passion and procreation. She was discovered in 1820 on the Greek isle of Melos by a peasant and his son who were searching for stones in a ruined chapel to use for building. The two came upon a small cave with three chambers where they found first the upper torso and then the lower draped legs.” Bette stopped her motion and traced her finger along the line where the torso and the draped legs met.

     

    “The goddess originally wore metal jewelry – bracelet, earrings, and headband – of which only the fixation holes remain….Popular belief is that the arms of the Venus were never found.”

     

    “The goddess is shrouded in mystery. The missing marble limbs and absence of attributes made the restoration of the statue difficult. A whole range of positions have been suggested; leaning against a pillar, resting her elbow on Ares’ shoulder, or holding a variety of pieces. The most common belief is that she held an apple”

     

    “But, again, there are many theories, many rumors that still circle the art world today.” Bette stopped and placed her hands lightly on the hips and looked up at statue in awe, her mouth slightly open.

     

    “This statue was lauded as the embodiment of feminine perfection” she said with reverence.

     

    Bette couldn’t believe she had her all to herself. The career that she had made for herself, and her professional obsession over the last many years was right in front of her. The mystery of the Venus finally just under her fingertips.

     

    “Some of these rumors are very convincing.” She said this so softly it was almost too hard to hear. But the other women were standing close now, completely enrapt by her movements and her words.

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    1. I am loving this story. Your writing conjures so much imagery. Clearly there is a connection developing between Tasha and Alice. I like that you are mixing in a bit of the old with this new take on characters especially Bette and Tina. I know it is early but this may be my favorite depiction of Bette Porter. Previously I mentioned James Bond but now I must add the possibility of a touch of Ethan Hunt from Mission Impossible because I love the idea of Bette Porter on a fast and expensive bike. Kick ass Porter! I need to find a female example. Definitely a cut above Charlie’s Angels. The description of Shane is very similar to KM as Lena in Ray Donovan. In fact I picture her that way. Very cool. Very sexy. Seems that Aaron and Eric are going to be involved in some evil deeds. This is so much fun!!!!

      • Thanks Billy, yes I love writing Bette as a badass. She’s so intense, it just seems to fit. I thought, what would a young Bette Porter be like if she had it all? In regards to Shane, I never watched Ray Donovan, so I don’t know anything about that character. I’ll have to check it out. And yes, Tasha and Alice have something simmering, but we’ll see if Alice can stay out of her own way long enough for them to make that connection. And I agree, Tina needs to watch her back at work. Thanks for your comments. I’m so glad you’re liking it!

    3. Bette’s description of the history of this piece and the fact that she is touching the marble body while telling the story is very erotic. I can see why Tina is so mesmerized by Bette and they have not even had a real conversation yet.

      Why did they not introduce Shane in the meeting? Tasha didn’t get an intro from Shane. Strange… When you bring someone from the outside to consult, everyone gets introduced in the initial meeting.

      I must admit that this Bette has a whole added new dimension with her multiple residences, her jet, and of course her custom bike. Shane being her technical side kick seems to fit her personality well.

      So what was inside the Venus that was stolen? And how and why did Dana go to the studio after hours? It does look like Eric may be involved. Possibly Aaron, but he is probably a stooge in the crime.

      This is exciting and mysterious stuff….can’t wait for the next chapter…

      • Yes, Tina is certainly mesmerized by Bette, and vice versa. You’ll see much more of their magnetism in the next chapter.

        As for the meeting at Tasha’s office. There were two reasons that Shane didn’t get her introduction, first because they all thought she was Bette when she walked into the room and second, Bette was so caught up in Tina that she fumbled hard in that meeting.

        Also, Shane is not very comfortable around people, she was happy to keep her mouth shut. And seeing Bette’s reaction to Tina was just as surprising for her. She doesn’t often see Bette imbalanced.

        As for the Venus, well, she’s keeping her secrets for now. The next chapter will be slightly more insightful. Bette has a lot of thoughts and we’ll get to read some of them.

        Thanks for your awesome comments. I’m so glad that you’re in for the ride.

    4. You seemed to be just as excited to post your story for us as we are to read it. Thank you.

      I love the detail of your writing for each seen and emotion of all the characters.

      Looking forward to the next chapter.

      • Thanks bub! I am excited! I’ve been writing this story for a few months and it’s so good to finally have some feedback.

        As for the detail, I’m glad you like it. Setting the scene is my favorite part of writing.

        Looking forward to reading what you think of the next chapter when we finally get Bette and Tina alone.

    5. Fantastic chapter!

      You describe everything very detailed, i love it!

      They met and are clearly smitten already with each other!

      The way you describe every detail give me the feeling i am a part of this scene, or story. It is brilliant how you write it. You can see that you put a lot of energy in searching and describing everything! Well done ????

      I can see Bette on that motor bike, swimming in her pool and wandering around her beautiful house!

      Aaron and Eric, never trust those men, i think they are somehow involved in this case. Eric for sure, i don’t trust that man and Tina should be very careful around him.

      Looking forward to the next chapter!

    6. Awesome writing, you really have a gift. Thank you for sharing your talent. Loved this chapter, you promised and delivered. Thanks for not letting us wait a week. Looking forward to the next one.

      • Thanks BAT! I’m so glad you are enjoying it! I wrote a really fun chapter last night, but that’s far down the road from what you’re reading now. Can’t wait for you to read the next chapter. You’ll start to really feel their pull to one another.

      • Thanks SuperK! I posted another chapter last night. I hope you’ll read it. Not much in the way of research for this particular chapter, but the next one does for sure. I too, am a sucker for the research. Just spent 5 hours reaching for about six paragraphs in a chapter I’m currently working on that’s much farther down the road. It’s my fave part.

        P.S. I’m a huge fan of your stories!

        RK

    8. Your writing is just amazing, another great chapter. Keep them coming! Oh, and Bette in leather on a motorcycle, *whew*…one of my fantasies…love it, thank you for sharing your story with us! ????????

    11. Oh I’m loving this!

      Bette is superb nd I love the relationship with Shane.
      Tina needs to keep her wits about her at work. Don’t like Eric at all.
      I have to admit to always finding Alice irritating and I do here too :-)

      Looking forward to regular posts please.
      SG

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