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    Chapter 2 – At First Sight

     

    She turned and looked at Tasha with her hands still on the waist of the statue. “Agent Williams, May I?”

     

    Tasha looked over her shoulder to the three security agents at the back of the room and nodded her head. “Please, gentlemen” she said to them, wiping at the sweat on her brow.

     

    Tina could not take her eyes off of Bette. The intensity of her presence was utterly disarming. She suddenly noticed that her hand was on her throat and she quickly put it down to her side. She fought to control her breathing. The way Bette Porter had touched the Venus, the sound of her voice when she spoke of her, had turned Tina on more than she would ever be able to admit, considering where they were and the situation in which they were in.

     

    The security agents picked up the top of the Venus, removing her torso and setting it into a nearby crate.

     

    Bette came forward and nodded at Shane who was waiting for her signal. Shane came forward and started photographing.

     

    Bette took a deep steadying breath and immediately saw what she was looking for, or felt it anyway. It was an etching, an inscription just inside one of the holes used for the support rods. She ran her fingers over the inner edge of the opening and nodded again to Shane. “Right there”, she said and Shane nodded, removing a small endoscopic camera attachment with a light on the end from another zippered pocket in her pants. She attached it to her small digital camera and began shooting the inscription.

     

    She immediately showed Bette the screen and Bette stood there for a moment studying it.

     

    “Well! What the hell is it?!” said Alice, the reporter in her getting frustrated by the scene of the two women before her who shared very few words.

     

    Tasha and Tina both blanched at her. But Bette looked at Alice completely unfazed.

     

    “An inscription, likely Ancient Greek, maybe Phoenician. I’m no expert at epigraphy so Shane is taking some photographs so that we may analyze it and hopefully translate it.”

     

    Tasha eventually came up to Bette’s side and Bette gave her the camera. “I’d like to get this to the lab” she said, looking at the strange characters on the screen.

     

    “Yes of course, Agent Williams.” Bette nodded to Shane who took the camera, attached it to her phone, and quickly typed in a few keys.

     

    “It’s done” Shane said.

     

    Tasha got the ping of an incoming message and she smiled slyly at the two women, impressed at their efficiency.

     

    “So, now what?” asked Tina. She rubbed the back of her neck absentmindedly, fidgeting slightly, and Bette could see the unease and tension written in the incredible hazel eyes. She understood the toll this must be taking on her. It was her movie, and the death of her best friend, er.. girlfriend? She wasn’t quite positive yet.

     

    Bette stepped towards her and smiled the most generous smile she could find.

     

    “Now we are one step closer to finding out what happened to Ms. Fairbanks. And I promise you, I will find out.”

     

    Tina almost melted at the look on the brunette’s face. She had the most sincere smile she had ever seen. And her eyes. She believed those eyes. My god, the way she was looking at her she thought she would believe anything she said.

     

    Comments

    1. I am loving this story. Your writing conjures so much imagery. Clearly there is a connection developing between Tasha and Alice. I like that you are mixing in a bit of the old with this new take on characters especially Bette and Tina. I know it is early but this may be my favorite depiction of Bette Porter. Previously I mentioned James Bond but now I must add the possibility of a touch of Ethan Hunt from Mission Impossible because I love the idea of Bette Porter on a fast and expensive bike. Kick ass Porter! I need to find a female example. Definitely a cut above Charlie’s Angels. The description of Shane is very similar to KM as Lena in Ray Donovan. In fact I picture her that way. Very cool. Very sexy. Seems that Aaron and Eric are going to be involved in some evil deeds. This is so much fun!!!!

      • Thanks Billy, yes I love writing Bette as a badass. She’s so intense, it just seems to fit. I thought, what would a young Bette Porter be like if she had it all? In regards to Shane, I never watched Ray Donovan, so I don’t know anything about that character. I’ll have to check it out. And yes, Tasha and Alice have something simmering, but we’ll see if Alice can stay out of her own way long enough for them to make that connection. And I agree, Tina needs to watch her back at work. Thanks for your comments. I’m so glad you’re liking it!

    2. Bette’s description of the history of this piece and the fact that she is touching the marble body while telling the story is very erotic. I can see why Tina is so mesmerized by Bette and they have not even had a real conversation yet.

      Why did they not introduce Shane in the meeting? Tasha didn’t get an intro from Shane. Strange… When you bring someone from the outside to consult, everyone gets introduced in the initial meeting.

      I must admit that this Bette has a whole added new dimension with her multiple residences, her jet, and of course her custom bike. Shane being her technical side kick seems to fit her personality well.

      So what was inside the Venus that was stolen? And how and why did Dana go to the studio after hours? It does look like Eric may be involved. Possibly Aaron, but he is probably a stooge in the crime.

      This is exciting and mysterious stuff….can’t wait for the next chapter…

      • Yes, Tina is certainly mesmerized by Bette, and vice versa. You’ll see much more of their magnetism in the next chapter.

        As for the meeting at Tasha’s office. There were two reasons that Shane didn’t get her introduction, first because they all thought she was Bette when she walked into the room and second, Bette was so caught up in Tina that she fumbled hard in that meeting.

        Also, Shane is not very comfortable around people, she was happy to keep her mouth shut. And seeing Bette’s reaction to Tina was just as surprising for her. She doesn’t often see Bette imbalanced.

        As for the Venus, well, she’s keeping her secrets for now. The next chapter will be slightly more insightful. Bette has a lot of thoughts and we’ll get to read some of them.

        Thanks for your awesome comments. I’m so glad that you’re in for the ride.

    3. You seemed to be just as excited to post your story for us as we are to read it. Thank you.

      I love the detail of your writing for each seen and emotion of all the characters.

      Looking forward to the next chapter.

      • Thanks bub! I am excited! I’ve been writing this story for a few months and it’s so good to finally have some feedback.

        As for the detail, I’m glad you like it. Setting the scene is my favorite part of writing.

        Looking forward to reading what you think of the next chapter when we finally get Bette and Tina alone.

    4. Fantastic chapter!

      You describe everything very detailed, i love it!

      They met and are clearly smitten already with each other!

      The way you describe every detail give me the feeling i am a part of this scene, or story. It is brilliant how you write it. You can see that you put a lot of energy in searching and describing everything! Well done ????

      I can see Bette on that motor bike, swimming in her pool and wandering around her beautiful house!

      Aaron and Eric, never trust those men, i think they are somehow involved in this case. Eric for sure, i don’t trust that man and Tina should be very careful around him.

      Looking forward to the next chapter!

    5. Awesome writing, you really have a gift. Thank you for sharing your talent. Loved this chapter, you promised and delivered. Thanks for not letting us wait a week. Looking forward to the next one.

      • Thanks BAT! I’m so glad you are enjoying it! I wrote a really fun chapter last night, but that’s far down the road from what you’re reading now. Can’t wait for you to read the next chapter. You’ll start to really feel their pull to one another.

      • Thanks SuperK! I posted another chapter last night. I hope you’ll read it. Not much in the way of research for this particular chapter, but the next one does for sure. I too, am a sucker for the research. Just spent 5 hours reaching for about six paragraphs in a chapter I’m currently working on that’s much farther down the road. It’s my fave part.

        P.S. I’m a huge fan of your stories!

        RK

    6. Your writing is just amazing, another great chapter. Keep them coming! Oh, and Bette in leather on a motorcycle, *whew*…one of my fantasies…love it, thank you for sharing your story with us! ????????

    7. Oh I’m loving this!

      Bette is superb nd I love the relationship with Shane.
      Tina needs to keep her wits about her at work. Don’t like Eric at all.
      I have to admit to always finding Alice irritating and I do here too :-)

      Looking forward to regular posts please.
      SG

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