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    Chapter 29 – FEELINGS

    Story written on July 22, 2024 by Collins.
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    “Bette, I . . . I . . .” Tina’s voice broke, her emotions that had been bottled up for months, finally spilling over.

    “It’s our job as doctors to help patients improve their health and offer effective treatment programs.” Bette nodded in understanding. “Our medical teams have proven very effective and hold the highest survival rate in many disciplines.  Ashley will be well cared for in all aspects to improve her health.”

    “I believe . . . “Tina tried to compose herself to offer the brunette her eternal gratitude. She was suddenly overcome with immense relief. “I um . . . don’t know how . . . “

    “It’s fine.” Bette waved her hands dismissively and brought her lips together in a tight line.

    “No, no.” Tina waved off the brunette’s nonchalant dismissal of her deep appreciation. Hot tears formed in the blonde’s eyes. “I . . .  I speak for Ashley and myself in . . .”

    “Please Tina.” Now it was Bette’s turn to wave off the thanks Tina was attempting to offer. “It’s not necessary. I simply wish Ashley as do all our patients to fully recover and then lead healthy, fulfilling lives.”

    “But Bette,” Now, tears freely ran down Tina’s cheeks as she bowed her head and swiped at the moisture on her face.  Her anxiety and apprehensive of what could possibility be in store for Ashley if no treatment was available had robbed both women of any idea of hope. “You . . .  you were literally the last hope . . . we had.”

    It broke Bette’s heart again to see Tina this upset and emotional. She hated herself for being a contributing factor in this situation. She quickly grabbed some napkins from the table and held them for Tina to take.

    “Thank you.” The blonde’s voice was strained and barely a whisper. She took the napkins from Bette’s outreached hand and dapped at her face. Her shoulders slumped even more as the weight of Ashley’s deteriorating health of the last several months took its full effect on the blonde. Their hope had all but evaporated and now here was Bette pledging treatment and hope of recovery. The burden was too much to hold up anymore. Tina’s body became racked with deep sobs as she held her hands up and buried her face in them.

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    1. Wonderful to see this update! We knew the feelings were there underneath the surface. Look forward to seeing how things develop for them during the treatments. So sorry to read all you have been through. Sending prayers for you and your family. Be blessed.

      • Thanks for the kind words about my family. Appreciate the well wishes.

        Yes, they both will be confronting & exploring their feelings for one another more & more as each chapter unfolds.

        Thanks for continuing to follow along.

    2. Excellent – just like we were in the room with them. I could feel both of their hesitations and desire to reconnect. That electricity is still there and a strong as ever.

      Wow, you’ve been putting out some awesome postings in short order – can we count on more soon?

      Loved it.

    4. Collins,

      I’ve loved this story since the first chapter, but this chapter is everything! I love how you built up to the ending of the chapter, them wrestling with their feelings, so well-written. And Tina knows the old Bette is still there.

      Have to say, too, you nailed it in the section where Tina’s emotions over Ashley can’t be contained any longer. Made me tear up.

      Thanks for the update, and I cannot wait for the next one!

      Glad that your family are doing well, and you got past the hurricane.

      • Hey pal,

        I know this novel has a special place in your heart – the sister connection.

        Both Tina & Bette are exploring these long suppressed feelings for one another & its turning their worlds upside down once again, especially Bette.

        You’ll get to explore those along with them as we continue onward.

        Next chapter should be up by next weekend.

        Thanks for the good wishes for my family.

        Take care yourself.

    6. Hey Collins,

      So happy to see a new chapter.

      Sorry to hear about your family but glad it’s going better.

      Be careful with the hurricane season and take care of yourselves.

      You can feel the emotions and struggles both Tina and Bette experience, so good written
      I hope that this will be a small step in the right direction for both of them, hopefully Bette will not close down and bury her feelings for Tina again and that Tina will be gently and patient with Bette to let her open up and let her see they could be a couple again. Because they just belong together!!!

      Looking forward to the next chapter.

      Take care my friend ❤️

      • Hey friend,

        Thanks for commenting 0 I know its been awhile for this update.

        Thanks for the words about the family – both of y brothers are ding better & the eldest just celebrated his 83rd BD yesterday!! YAY!!

        Back to Tibette & DOH – Bette’s reactions seem to be the biggest question. But I think TK will guide her along with gentleness & care. Totally agree – they DO belong together.

        New chapter up next weekend!!

        Stay safe.

    7. Sorry to hear that you’ve had some difficult times with your family, but so glad that the situations have improved. Hope you enjoyed your time with the family too.

      What a powerful chapter, filled with angst, emotions, tons of love and perhaps hope too.

      Thanks for this terrific piece of writing.

      Hoping for more soon.

      • Yes, I’m very happy that the health situations with my brothers have improved! Yes, the time with my family was sweet – especially with the youngest nephews & nieces – they all so cute at these ages!!

        Yes, lots of hope & hopefully Bette can get out of her own way & learn to express herself to Tina again.

        The conclusion of this meeting is next – look for it next weekend.

    8. OH.My.God what a chapter, I had tears in my eyes reading the last part !

      Bette is so stubborn sometimes…and Tina is so pushy but I guess we’ll forgive her given the circumstances. I bet the next scene will be Bette running like a rabbit out of the room hahaha !

      I’m so glad you updated, this chapter was worth our wait.

      I hope the tribulations of your life will calm down and that you and your family will find peace again.
      Take care.

      • Hey lady,

        I’m touched that this chapter affected you so much.

        Yes, BP has that damn stubborn streak, but she keeps interesting! You sure Bette’s gonna run like a rabbit ????? Ha!! We’ll see if you’re right.

        Still in recovery mode from the hurricane & the clean up!!! Ugh!

        Look for the next update next weekend.

    10. Marvelous chptr. Worth the wait . . .

      Wounder if U and family were taken care of by a “Dr Bette & her team”?? U seemed to be quite insightful in painting that exchange.

      And of course the “lovers world” of our two ladies 4ever remains. Will b interesting to WHEN they will be able to rediscover that part. . .but FIRST! Ashley needs tending to . .

      • Glad I was able to make it good for you.

        TBH, I’ve had more than my fair share of family illnesses down through the years. But somehow we managed to survive & deal with the treatments. So, those experiences provided background info for this novel.

        Yes, Ashley has to begin treatment & that will provide the stage for Tibette to interact more closely, leading to rediscovering each other.

        Thanks for reaching out – you’ve been missed.

    11. Ah… Stubborn Bette.
      I just read this chapter, it was Worth the wait. You are a fantastic writer, I almost cried while reading. Especially the way you describe Bettes feelings for Tina is just….. Thank you so much.
      And am glad your family is doing okay now.
      My prayers are with you all.

      • She’ll be stubborn for a few more chapters, but TK will keep picking away at that armor & seek what she knows lies beneath – Bette’s still burning love for her.

        Glad you enjoyed the update. You are too, too kind with your praise – it touches my heart!
        I know what you mean about being emotional – I’ve cried over many of these chapters myself.

        Look for an update this coming weekend.

        Let me know what you think of how this gets resolved.

        Thanks

      • Hi, thanks so much for taking the opportunity to comment.

        So pleased that you liked this update & have enjoyed this novel.

        Update to be posted this weekend!

    13. Hey, sorry about my late comment, just been super busy with life stuff and work.

      This was a terrific chapter and now I read that you’re posting an update this weekend. Can’t wait. I hope it’s just as good as this one was – I’m sure it will be!

      Looking forward to this resolution.

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