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Chapter 45 – What Will I Be Eating?
The Planet
Snapping out of her shocked daze, Bette shook her head at Tina’s question with her mouth still half open. She quickly stood up and removed her belongings from the chair so she could pull it out for Tina.
“Hey guys, how are you?” Tina asked the table with a confident smile.
“Hi, Tina.”
“What’s going on, Tina?”
“What’s up, girl?”
“Hey, Tina.”
She sat as Bette pushed the chair in underneath her.
“I didn’t even see you come in.” Bette finally said as she took her seat again and scooted her chair closer to the blonde’s.
Tina turned to look at Bette, still smiling. “Yeah, I know. I came in and saw you were all so mesmerized by Alice. Should I be worried that you guys were talking about me just as I walked up?” she asked teasingly.
By this time Alice was a bright shade of red, nearly pink. Bette laughed, slightly uncomfortably but Kit came to the rescue.
“Girl, you saw how ‘mesmerized’ we all were, the only one talkin’ was old Motormouth over there. You ain’t gotta worry ‘bout a thang.”
“Yeah, Alice was just telling us about your night out after the show on Friday.” Bette took over. “Sounds like you guys had fun.”
“We did, didn’t we Tina?” Alice finally found her speaking ability, her words spilling out rapidly as the others giggled again.
“I had a lot of fun, Alice. Thanks again for letting us all stay the night. Sorry I passed out so early.”
“It was no problem, Tina. We were all pretty sloppy that night.” Carmen admitted as Shane and Tayo nodded in agreement.
Tina returned her attention back to Kit. “Did Alice also tell you guys that she had Third Wheel Crush and the crew in stitches backstage? They all loved her. My friend Dana and the head of our company got a kick out of her too.”
“That’s why we keep her around, she’s cheap entertainment.” Angus laughed while everyone agreed again and Alice pouted. “That, aaaaand she knows how to finger the strings, am I right A Pizzle?” he added as he reached over the table offering her a hi-five.
“You’re damn right, A Pizzle and a pear tree! But that’s not the only thing I know how to finger!” she answered smacking his hand with her own.
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meloveslu says
I remember this chapter being fun to write. I always enjoyed the scenes in the show where the whole gang was all involved. It was light and usually funny. One of my faves is the phone call scene at the beginning of S4E6. Good shit.
BeeCharmer says
I’ve just caught up with this story and I’m with Amethyst: you are a wonderful writer ????.
This chapter was very funny to read and season four certainly had its moments too! I loved that phone call scene as the Charlie’s Angels opening (I think it was episode 2, season 4): hilarious!
Thank you for re-writing this.
meloveslu says
Aww, thanks BeeCharmer. Very cute handle, by the way.
Yaaaasss! The Charlie’s Angels intro was hysterical. Despite the shitty way Season 3 went down, the beginning of the season had some funny moments when they were all sitting around at the Planet naming off all the different slang terms for vagina. And of course the group scenes in Lifecycle were also fun.
I really miss this show. ????
Amethyst says
I have a love hate relationship with you just so you know. The SUSPENSE is killing me, but it’s sooo good. I need more, im an addict without shame. Cannot wait for the next chapter ????
You’re a wonderful writer ????????
meloveslu says
First of all, thank you for the compliment. It’s always nice to hear from new folks that they appreciate my silly little story.
Second, you’re not the first to have a love/hate relationship with me I’m sure. ????
There’s no suspense here. We all know where this is going lol.
Amethyst says
Oh we do, all to well. When/Where/How is where the suspense kicks in. I’m just like LETS GO ALREADY, but secretly I’m loving that your drawing it out.
meloveslu says
Everyone loves a good tease. ????
Bibi28 says
Thanks for the tip MeLL!!!
I didn’t find it back. But i was logged in when i wrote the comment and after a few times of trying to comment i went back and saw i had to log in before i could comment. It seems the site logged me out at the same time i tried to send my comment.
I love the scenes with the group together too, very funny indeed!
For the rest of my comment, see the one above from Amethyst 😁
meloveslu says
Yes, group scenes were always a good time.
The site has been acting a bit wonky over the last couple of weeks. Hopefully there are some bug fixes that have been undertaken to correct them. Thanks for sticking with this story and also defending my honor at times. ????
Silentreader says
have to say that so far I love your story…
love how funny, intense, sweet the interaction in between Bette and Tina…
hope you will post another chapter soon…:-)
meloveslu says
Aww shucks. Thanks SR! Come back Sunday evening or early Monday morning and there should be more chapters for you to read! They may even be of the sexy variety ????
meloveslu says
BTW, Silentreader, you may want to review my author’s note above and go fetch your comments on the other stories as well. I found them in limbo on the back end of the site. Just follow my instructions and they should pop up as visible.
Silentreader says
I’m not sure if I follow you.. :/
sorry..I’m not using English on regular basis..so I don’t really understand what you meant.. :/
Silentreader says
forget it…I knew what you tried to tell me about..and fixed it..
tks Mel
izzie says
So glad to see you updating your story !
Thanks for the tip on the reviews and oh BTW, be careful with your liver but enjoy yourself !
meloveslu says
Thanks Izzie! I saw that you were able to fix your comments so that they show up on previous chapters now. Nice job!
My liver is evil and must be destroyed. ????
kiwipit says
Thanks for this ensemble of chapters, MeLL. I thoroughly enjoyed all of them.
You did great with the back and forth between Bette/Alice, Alice/Tina, Alice/gang. I like how comfortable and confidend Tina is around Bette and the gang.
When reading the phrase “I’ll get back to you”, I always have to think of the song Ring Ring (?) by De La Soul. At that time I wasn’t familiar with the expression but picked it up from the song and added it to my vocabulary. Education through music ????
Looking forward to the weekend and more post, enjoy your week,
cheers
meloveslu says
“Hey, how you doin? Sorry I can’t get through.” ????
Since Friday is my birthday, this weekend is likely to be another rager so if I can remember, maybe I’ll post a drunken birthday chapter so you have a full day to read it on Saturday. No promises though.