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Chapter I – Yes, I’m Ready
Rian flicked some water at her.
Jade asked, still serious, “And that you believe in me?”
Rian simply nodded, reached out, and trailed a finger slowly down Jade’s nose. And then she sang playfully, “And then I saw her face … Now I’m a believer! … Not a trace of doubt in my mind!”
Jade sang back to her softly, “I’m in love … ooooo… I couldn’t leave her… couldn’t leave her if I tried.”
Rian swallowed drily, and asked playfully, “You know that in the end, that green ogre realized he loved the princess, right?”
Jade smiled, “The princess always had him wrapped around her royal finger, what are you saying?”
Rian gave her a big splash that left Rian sputtering. They continued to tease each other and splash around other until finally, Rian asked, as she ran out of breath, “Can we get out already? I’m getting cold and maybe we could dry ourselves under the sun. Before the guys get here.”
Before she turned to swim towards the shore, she smirked, “I don’t want them to see your sexy body…”
Jade sputtered once again, “My … my sexy body? Seriously?! You’re the one with the grade A tits and ass…it’s your body I don’t want them to see!”
Rian whipped her legs like a motorboat and gave Jade a big splash on her face before she swam away quickly.
“Last one’s a rotten egg!” she shouted when she paused from her sudden sprint, turned around to laugh at a sputtering Jade, and to give her a sporting chance to catch up.
They raced to the shore.
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Later in the evening, Bette knocked on Jade’s door and called out, “Jade? Are you ready?” She knocked again when she didn’t hear a response back. But she could hear water splash and then stop, and then whistling after. She exchanged a grin with Tina before knocking on the door again.
Jade pulled the door open in the midst of Bette’s knocking. “Hi!” Jade exclaimed as she yanked the door. A whiff of cologne blew out of her room: a pleasing blend of oud, rose, sandalwood, and other notes that combined with a mild smoky vibe that was soft and sensuous. Bette and Tina exchanged a quick smile, before Tina asked with a tease, “Smells good in there! You going on a date or something?”
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Such a wonderful start to a story, thank you. So where’s the next installment… lol.????
I loved your characters, their development and how you put your story together.
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Want more please!
Great start, look forward to more please.
I am so happy that you are back!
Your stories are amazing and i am in for the journey.
Looks like Jade found her soulmate in Rian, would love to read more about them.
Thank you for coming back to this story.
Knowing the calibre of your stories i am thoroughly going to enjoy this one too.Young love and the guidance of TINA/BETTE will help JADE handle the ups and downs of this relationship while trying to figure out the learning curve in front of her.Like the new characters,plot and the drama that is coming.My ship has docked,thanks.
More….more…more I want more! Great read!
So glad you posted, love your writing and stories. Thanks
Hello back, Sky!!! So glad to found you back on the site. What was a marvelous opening chapter. I feels good to hear some backstory on Bette and Tina without angst. Can’t wait until the next episode. Please post soon.
I love this story. Such a great start. Can’t wait to read more!
I’m already giving it all
attention to this story.
It began phenomenal !!
The complete constellation
More coming, just fine-tuning. By the way, beautiful day outside, right?
Caveats for the next chapters: there will be references to scenes and characters in “Let It Happen,” “Love Soul Heaven Hell”, “Empire State of Mind”, and “Nobis Pacem”. As a rule I try to write each chapter in a way that stands on its own, but you will understand the mindsets of the characters that appear in the chapter, or the backdrop of the scene, if you are at least somewhat aware of the other books. Apologies in advance if a scene or dialogue doesn’t seem to make sense. I will try to embed links to relevant segments of the above-mentioned books to help you “bounce” to them .
As always, do let me know by pm, comment, or other means what you think. Helps me to know if what I’m writing is making passable sense, at least.