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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Two
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“I suppose I can manage.” Tina replied hesitantly
“You suppose?”
“The thing is…”Tina tried to justify her severe like of experience in all things domestic, “Ethel always took care of that. She ran the house… well my father’s house.”
Sticking her chin out in defiance, Tina thought it best to stop letting herself be intimidated by that woman.
“Anyway I’m sure preparing a meal isn’t that complicated.”
Bette snorted at that remark.
“So… what is it you do for a living exactly?” The brunette was genuinely curious.
“I… I have an Interior Decorator diploma… if you must know.” Tina really wanted to be proud of this, but truth was that she had never really utilised her potential despite her father’s intervention in lining up potential clients for her business; she had preferred spending her life enjoying herself with her friends letting her achievements fall by the way side.
“I’m sure you are very busy.” Bette mocked.
“Did I ask you what you did for a living?” Tina asked sharply. She would no longer stand for Bette’s condescending tone despite the fact that she knew herself how idle she had been over the years.
“I’m just saying what your answer is implying. You have the qualifications but it seems that pleasure seeking has won over hard work ever since. I think it’s time for you to go and get changed.” Bette brought their conversation to an end.
The brunette motioned to help Tina get up from the sofa but the blonde jerk the helpful hand away.
Stepping back to give her guest some room, Bette indicated with a tilt of her head that Tina would find all that was needed up the stairs.
“You can borrow some of my clothes. Probably won’t be good enough for you but it is all I have for the time being so it’ll have to do.”
“Thank you.” Tina mumbled as politely as she could muster.
She tried to walk as best she could but a sharp pain drove through her leg as soon as she took her first step. She clenched her teeth to suppress the agonizing cry which wanted to escape her lips. The bandage had helped alleviate the throbbing but the pain which had just shot through her put a definite stop to any thoughts she may have conjured of trying to leave by morning. She was well and truly stuck with this insufferable woman who seemed to show nothing else but contempt and hostility towards her. A quick glance at the window by the bottom of the stairs case further reinforced the fact that she was stranded here. The snow had ceased to fall and was now driven horizontally by fierce and unrelenting winds.
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1st! I WIN! I WIN! I WIN!!!!!
You are amazing Kins40! Thank you!!!
you forgot to tell everyone that you left your comment before reading! :0p
hey, that’s supposed to be our little secret!
Looking good. Its relly nice to read your new tory. Thx
I like this story pps
That was great! I am very intrigued how this story wil develop.
Tina must not assume things by how someone looks. She is one spoiled rich girl.
But i believe she will learn that.
And Bette, you surely made her sound like a hard woman, but with a caring side.
Love this story and i am glad you are back!
Great – interest retained – next post please!
Love Bette! ‘Something missing in that request’!! Tina’s in trouble!
Kins,
There is a piece of code you sometimes have to put into the story in the TEXT editing window. You can find that in the upper right part of your editing window next to a tab titled, Visual. Click on Text and you’ll see the codes WordPress uses to make your story appear in its format. I’ll put the little piece of code below this paragraph and hope that WordPress doesn’t make it disappear because that is what this little string does – it makes blank spaces. WordPress may “see” it and make this little bit of simple coding magic vanish. You’ll want to use this code for your stories so they are more readable in appearance.
The code should appear here:
If it’s not above this line then WP disappeared it from this comment box’s text. To find it to use take a story you’re editing and tap the spacebar several times to lift your text, then click the TEXT editing window and you’ll see the code to use. It’s where you’ve inserted the blank spaces.
Sometimes using the space bar between paragraphs and dialogue bites works and sometimes it doesn’t. But this ALWAYS works.
Blackbird
Loved it. Very curious about what Bette said to Tina’s father as well as what she does for a living. Thanks
I absolutely love your style. I feel like a fly on the wall observing Tina’s new surroundings for the first time with her. I can even smell the beeswax & lavender, and I love it!
It’s really great to have you back, Kins. I have a feeling this story will be as epic as all of your other masterpieces. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Regards,
Labrys
Ok so what does Bette really do for a.living? How do she know Tinas father? Why is she so rude to Tina? Questions questions….oh how I love stories like this and it keeps you anticipating, excited, and intrigued at the same time…nice chapter
Loved it! I think Bette is a very rich lady and she has business with Tina Dad. She might just work for him and she owns that cabin. Tina will learn the true meaning of being a simple person and not judging other by there looks. PPS
ok, so now I will leave my real comment. Thanks for blowing my cover!
It was awesome, as usual and you know how much I appreciate the heads up. ;) You’re still my #1.
great update, I really liked this chapter. whether the story’s title refers to Bette’s heart? what a Tina Kennard can be thawed? :P
so early in the story, I have so many questions, but I’m sure that you’ll be slow to answer them all. I have been so enjoying the beginning of this story, I’m sure that by the end, I’m hooked.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Very nice. I will definitely keep reading. It’s been a very long time since I’ve been here and had to reset my password like 20 times just so I can comment. Don’t worry, I wrote down my password I’ll remember. I have even write a story or two, but first I need to finish the others.
Anyway Kins, you’re awesome as always.
Mmmm would really like to know the occupation of one Bette Porter.Definatley not a cabin maid.Some kind of executive probably.Anyway we will find out at some point.Pleased I got the occupant of the cabin right anyway and it was Bette to the rescue.Poor little rich girl Tina will be brought down to size I imagine.2 weeks on their own together.Time for feelings to grow.Love will be in the air as well.Instead of snow.Definately a winner with me.Great second chapter dear friend .Look forward to the next amazing chapter Kins..Cxx
An amazing and intriguing story so far..look forward to the next update!
I loved it. Thank you for posting !
Love it
I am so very glad to see your new story! I cannot wait for more!!
Wow you’re coming back in style.
Only today could conclude both parties
his new story and I confess that I was already
very pleased with what I read.
Loving this little game bette and tina.
Love all your stories.
Ten Stars !!!